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Reviews for The lemon games

By : HunterBerserkerWolf
  • From ANON - Leaf Ranger on October 25, 2013
    Hmmm, someone for his human or hell path? How about Sarutobi's wife Biwako for the Hell path? that would be rather interesting. *nods*

    keep up the awesome work man!
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  • From ANON - nubsauce13 on October 25, 2013
    How about using Hayate Gekko, the Chunin Exam's Third Proctor, or how about Natsuhi, from the Star Village Arc.
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  • From agnar on October 23, 2013
    I honestly couldn't finish this chapter. Maybe I'll try later again. But I was annoyed by your kinda BS weakening of Naruto, running out of chakra and all that shit, his paths all having personalities, the stupidity of having a path that hates him, a shadow clone of his running off and doing this on it's own of all things.

    All in all, Just didn't like the chapter or his fight with the 4 akatsuki. You continue to seem confused on how tough Naruto is, he's got all these skills, bonuses, abilities, etc. but seems unable to really decimate some pretty weak types as he ought to, and barely able to keep up with folks he should be equal or superior to at this point.
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  • From ANON - Leaf Ranger on October 21, 2013
    So Naruto survived the battle using three paths. He just needs three more to match Nagato. It would be cool if he could possibly make his mom one, though that would also be disturbing as well.

    Overall though, awesome work. Very awesome indeed. Glad to see he got Haku, even if it was yuri style.
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  • From ANON - revan193 on October 21, 2013
    Your story have somes of the best Lemon ever written, continue like that! You did a great job!

    Can't wait to see what you will post next... :)

    Maybe a Lemon with Naruko (the Sexy Henge of Naruto) who became somehow real & Naruto himself? A futanari Lemon with a missed version of Naruto "Sexy Jutsu" & another woman?
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on October 21, 2013
    Another awesome chapter. I didn't expect to see this one so soon and glad I was wrong. Loved the fights, but especially loved Naruto's chosen Paths. I'm really looking forward to seeing if Naruto gets more and who those might be. How he got them was especially amusing and glad he did a repeat with Tsunami, but it's a shame Haku wasn't a virgin.

    And nice perk from Suzumebachi. Shame he already had Ice Release, but oh well. As always looking forward to the next chapter. I hope the next one involves Shizuka or maybe Toki ... ahhh there are more post retrieval episodes/missions than I remember and more babes. Although it would be fun for Naruto to get it on with Princess Fuku and add a little chubby action as a one off or something.
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on October 20, 2013
    Awesome, glad to see a new chapter of this story. It's the best of it's genre by far. Wow, what a surprise at the end. Akatsuki making another move like that. I can't wait to see how Naruto survives this one ... or if he does, and if he does if he did get anything for banging Suzumebachi. Of course also looking forward to seeing who is next on the hit list. Great job.
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  • From ANON - Stephen on October 19, 2013
    You know this has seemed like a pretty light hearted story so far. The end of this chapter was a really good cliffhanger. I would love to see a somewhat drawn out battle. Thanks for the chapter.
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  • From ANON - Leaf Ranger on October 19, 2013
    Oh wow. Was not expecting that. Was half expecting a lemon with Hinata (seriously, give us a Hinata lemon already. Please?). And wasn't expecting the Iwa chick. and certainly wasn't expecting the four Akatsuki members.

    Overall though, awesome chapter. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Reithra on October 18, 2013
    So I was wondering if you might be able to release more chapters because this fic is one of my favs and I cannot wait for you to write more. I know it is very time consuming butI would really like to read this fully.
    Thanks Reithra
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  • From ANON - Kamen Rider Arashi on October 18, 2013
    I don't have an account here but having been following hmthis fic since it first started on FF before that stupid purge removed it. I just felt it should ne said that I REALLY hate you now for that EVIL cliffhanger. Hopefully you update soon so I'm not left in supense for to long. If you wish for any form of help PM me at FF my guest tag is my Real Account there.
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  • From ANON - ChaoStar on September 27, 2013
    Man this is a great chapter! I can't wait for the Kyuubi to realize that all he needs is to have sex with one bijuu to get the demon knight form. Also he only needs to bring his divine chakra and chakra control up and he'll have that as well!


    One thing though, when will Naruto finally go on the timeskip, because the only way he'll encounter any more bijuu if he goes es through it the canon way is when he meets bii during the war and that would take too long for the Kyuubi I believe; so why doesn't he meet and free the other bijuu during the training trip.

    Example: he finds a cave the akatsuki was using to extract bijuu chakra but they couldn't extract its soul,so he gices it enough chakra to healand she becomes indebted to him and starts following him.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 20, 2013
    http://stories.xnxx.com/story/55161/Naruto%3AThe_lemon_games_chapter_1%3ATsuname
    it's a copy of this one on another site, don't know if it's you yourself who's uploading it, if so then no problem but if it isn't then i would go and report the author on that site.
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  • From ANON - revan193 on September 16, 2013
    Naruto "did it" with the Ichibi? That was an answome idea! Naruto will f*** every Bijuus?
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  • From ANON - revan193 on September 16, 2013
    Mmmmh, this fic is one of the best fics with sex scenes I ever read, you did a great job! :)

    However, I have a question:

    Mei Terumi will be in this story too?
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