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Reviews for The lemon games

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  • From ANON - opfer1982 on January 12, 2014
    Really nice story can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - sajuuk on December 28, 2013
    this tory is good
    please write more
    i want to read the next chapter
    i hope so much from your story
    i cant wait
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    sajuuk
    ps : please write a chapter for new year
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  • From ANON - Joel on December 22, 2013
    Hay there I loved reading your story so far please update soon I can't wait for more fun.
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  • From cade159 on December 12, 2013
    that was good
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  • From Takai153 on December 07, 2013
    Love it! Can't wait to see more! I would like to see Naruto use his Shadow Clones during sex more. Lingerie/sexy-costumes/sexy-outfits would be nice too. Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can!! :)
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  • From llawssalg on December 04, 2013
    Good, not bad
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  • From ANON - Jash on December 03, 2013
    I really love this series, and I'm hoping that you update soon! I have been checking almost everyday since Thanksgiving for the updates. I really like the idea behind the "lvling" up by sex, and it gives this story a nice plot to go along with Naruto establishing a harem!

    Thanks a lot!

    Jash
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2013
    Simply put, you are a God!
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  • From ANON - Craze on November 22, 2013
    “So what if I am? It’s too late now.” He gave a massive grin. “I’m a thousand times better than you’ll ever be. I’ll kill this little girl, but before that I think I’ll have a bit of fun banging her sweet ass. Before any of that can happen though, I’m going to kill you. ” He said.

    Naruto cracked his neck. He bobbed his head a little bit. “You know, that would be intimidating if well… you were intimidating.”

    “Are you making fun of me?” Hōki asked glaring at the blonde.

    “No, no, no of course not.” Naruto said before smirking. “Phft. Yes.” Naruto’s hand rose up. “Banshō Ten'in!” he said loudly and yanked Hōki forward.


    Hahaha I know we're you got this from or a least I know something almost identical to it youtube hell song abridged ep 1
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  • From ANON - Williamgbirkin on October 29, 2013
    When do you think that you'll do a Kurotsuchi chapter?
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 28, 2013
    I'll be honest. I read the story and skip the lemons. Because the lemons are completely unrealistic, forced in every way, don't have the characters act as themselves...and aren't written that well. Basically, everything is wrong about them. If you'd work on the set up more (the lead-up to the lemons) and left the actual sex scene to the imagination it would have been a hundred times better. Few people can write good sex. Unfortunately, you're not one of them. But you have a decent imagination for a story.

    Although a lot of the Bijuu stuff is just bad. Well, frankly a lot of the regular sex pairings come out of nowhere without any reason. The Bee girl might work if Naruto forced her with his skills (pheromone/genjutsu stuff) but as it was written, it broke the pacing. Enemies, enemies, fighting, victory and defeat, enemies...frustration, depression...impossible lust and deep love with no lead-up. That doesn't work.
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  • From ANON - dante1993 on October 27, 2013
    one of my fav lemon stories, which i eagerly await the next update from.
    Also, has someone just discovered Hellsing Ultimate Abridged, spotted 2 homage scenes already.
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  • From ANON - Dark Blue Princess on October 27, 2013
    I vote for the hell path for naruto and I have to say that I love your story to the point where Im almost craving to read another chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 26, 2013
    Sarutobi for the hell path!
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on October 26, 2013
    Another wonderfully awesome chapter. Thinking about the Human Path it supposedly represents a form of rebirth and enlightenment. But it's based on passion, desire, pride, and doubt. Thinking of the remaining filler arcs Natsuhi, Sumaru's thought to be dead mother, from the Hoshigakure Arc would be perfect. Plus, it gets him another hot babe as a path. She really fits a lot of the criteria well if not perfect.
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