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By : HunterBerserkerWolf
  • From ANON - Leaf Ranger on March 15, 2013
    Well I hope maybe next chapter you can do a flashback of the Naruto/Hinata date. But I'm assuming they didn't have sex, yes? ^.^;

    OVerall though, great chapter. Very nice. and the new additions are pretty sweet too. *nods* Keep it up!
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  • From Bam101593 on March 14, 2013
    Loved how you're going to have Naruto basically have a village full of women just for him. I can't wait to see who is next there's Koyuki who could be next, Kurenai, Tenten, Hinata because of the rice balls and the medical cream (he also suggested that they go get something to eat once he is back), or you could do ones that you've all ready done like Anko with Kurenai, Kin with Temari were Temari isn't in control, or maybe even get where Naruto has to be submissive to Anko and he flips it around and get Anko to Join his Harem. I know that Kyuubi is going to be later on Down the road but when Naruto does get Kyuubi you could have Naruto get the Silver Marathon Man or did he already get that with Kin, Tayuya, and Karin I don't know it didn't say at the end of the chapter. Great work could use the suggestions that I've said or not doesn't matter to me if you do but make them enjoyable to read like you've been doing so far and thanks for reporting it and adding more chapters.
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  • From ANON - Caesar808 on February 22, 2013
    Glad to see you are continuing this one. Took awhile to find it. Update soon
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  • From ANON - Ricky12440 on February 08, 2013
    I'm glad that I finally found this fic again. I was reading this on yourfanfiction, and when that site went down I couldn't remember what the name of this fic was. I finally found it today, and I'm glad that you chose to post it somewhere else instead of stopping or giving up out of frustration, which many authors have done. I love this fic and I can't wait for you to update it.
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  • From ANON - Wrathkal on February 02, 2013
    There aren't that many S-ranked kunoichis around, are there? Mei is the only other one I can think of, and maybe Yugito.

    More domination please!
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  • From ANON - sajuuk on January 21, 2013
    please write a new temari chapter with temari the slave and naruto the master
    by
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2013
    Tecnicly Tsunade is not the hokage yet
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  • From ANON - froger495 on January 12, 2013
    cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From SeliasKatasuma on January 11, 2013
    Sweet, you finally updated it! Well, I'm not sure if "finally" is the right word, since I don't remember when the last time you updated was. Still, cool!
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  • From ANON - garsdal on January 09, 2013
    simply marvelous. so few make a decent "world is a game" story, fewer still make something good with em. this is the longest and best i have read so far, and i truhly hope a new chapter is on its way.
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  • From ANON - darkloveeden on January 06, 2013
    this is the best lemon i have ever read and is one of my favourite storys.
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  • From Takai153 on January 04, 2013
    Great lemon! I'm a little disappointed that we didn't get to see Naruto's fight though. I was looking forward to seeing some of his new abilities in action. Can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter! Keep up the awesome work and please update as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - Akuma on December 29, 2012
    technically Naruto got the Tsunade of the Sannin award. She isn't Hokage yet. Not until the coronation at the latest and taking over the duties at the earliest.


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  • From ANON - Akuma on December 29, 2012
    Will Naruto learn the other techs besides the basic three Mangekyou (3 of which are dervied from Susano'ou at least on the top of my head) With the EMS will he be able to use the two Uchiha Kinjutsu's freely?

    His eyes bled a little bit
    Pretty sure the EMS stops that. No longer goes blind nor has as much of a chakra requirement. Less chakra in eyes less damage done.


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  • From ANON - Akuma on December 29, 2012
    he went ahead and selected the Rinnegan and got it, practically whimpering as he realized he got his hopes up for nothing.
    Hopes up for nothing...he has become a mortal god that is nothing?


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