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Reviews for The lemon games

By : HunterBerserkerWolf
  • From joeparas1988 on March 21, 2013
    People always jump the gun with ranking in fanfiction.

    S rank? Really?

    Judge missions based on mission difficulty. A mission a group of genin are able to complete is not dangerous enough to be considered S-rank.

    In fact, if it wasn't for Kimimaro, it wouldn't even be A-rank. Had they the jounin to send, they would have curb stomped the sound four.

    I don't care as much as I should because this is mostly a smut-fic, but still, a lil annoying.
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  • From VFSNAKE on March 20, 2013
    Nice! Love it! Naruto dominated Sasuke. Now for some love from his lovers. LOL!
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  • From ANON - Dark blue princess on March 20, 2013
    Are you finished with the story or the chapter? If the chapter, hurry up with the next one! I want to know what happened to sasuke!

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  • From reptoholic on March 20, 2013
    Awesome story. Just finished reading what you have written so far and have to say I am loving it. Can't wait to see what comes next.
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  • From whoisthissinner on March 18, 2013
    wow this is a great story I really like these rpg-style games could you please email me when you update this I'm not sure if this site would do it automatically. Anyway please continue to write such awesome work and great characterization.

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  • From ANON - Xager on March 18, 2013
    Nice work, man. Seriously. I like how you abused Tsukiyomi, and updated your book thing. Now, who is next on the agenda?
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  • From ShadowNite on March 17, 2013
    I think there might be a chapter missing, we jumped from Naruto running to Tsunade about the possible 30 year age decrease to a confrontation with Doto...
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  • From CodeRR on March 16, 2013
    Nice additions to the game, I approve
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  • From Kenshinryuu on March 16, 2013
    Nice chapter, though I would have liked to see a bit more of the Tsukiyomi sex scenes and how far Kurenai broke in them.
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  • From ANON - Lovette on March 16, 2013
    wow absolutly loving this adultfanfic continue
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 16, 2013
    Nice, thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - Guest on March 15, 2013
    And nothing of value was lost; I don't like Hinata.

    But great, thanks for the update! This was a very nice surprise, I though you had dropped the fic which made it all the better.
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  • From VFSNAKE on March 15, 2013
    Nice! He got Koyuki and taught Kurenai a lesson. Sweeeet! Can't wait to see who he bangs next.
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  • From ANON - Wyrtha on March 15, 2013
    Love this story and the hot lemons. Looking forward to see how Naruto goes forward. Does he give in to the desire for more power/abilities plus Kyubi's urgings and start sport fucking targeting any and all females in Konoha or on missions. Or will he go the harder route ... or just keep doing what he's doing.

    Looking forward to see if you use any/many of the extra anime episode females. Shizuka and her attendant/Yakumo/Haruna/Hokuto/Natsuhi/Isaribi/Toki/Suzumebachi/Tsubaki/Kagero/Sasame are ones that come to mind. Toki and Haruna would go to the ladies of influence since they are Daimyo's and possibly virgins. Sasame, Isaribi, Yakumo, and Hokuto are definite virgins though Isaribi could have an even darker hidden past. Natsuhi's a pure milf of the highest order.

    Just some thoughts. Look forward to your next chapter regardless. Of course you could just do the skip and when Naruto returns and makes his next conquest the scroll can reveal all of those different conquests plus extra from during the trip to show his new abilities, skills, etc.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 15, 2013
    YEAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!! You're bsck!!!!!

    Aside that, good chapter, I love it!

    Also, what don't put medals about the bust size. For example: Bazoongas!! You have sex with 3 women that have Big Breast.

    And sorry if my english it's not good, because it's not my language.
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