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Reviews for Bonds

By : TakaRei
  • From ANON - G on October 03, 2012
    This is really interesting. I agree with Naruto: Sasuke's reactions are all bizarre: His reaction to Naruto touching him in the shower, his extreme reaction to bottoming (he was willing to throw Naruto out over it?), and the way he seemed to switch from vulnerable to in control. Plus there was the way he picked Naruto up. To me these all seem like the actions of a person who has been traumatized in some way.

    Usually, the cliche thing for a romance fic is that Sasuke had been noticing Naruto for a long time and used the incident with the bullies to his advantage, resulting in surprise sex. We got the surprise sex, but with Sasuke's other strange behavior, I don't think unrequited love is what was fueling his actions. Going by what Gaara said, Sasuke regularly plays the pickup game with different people. I think it was nothing more than coincidence that it happened to be Naruto's turn this time around. At best, maybe he'd subconsciously noticed Naruto the way Naruto had subconsciously noticed him, but I think that's probably the extent of it for the both of them at the moment. (Which is cool because then they both get to fall in love, instead of it being a foregone conclusion.)

    But now the big question is: what is Sasuke's motivation for having so many sex partners and how will Naruto break that habit of his? Gaara gives good advice; it could turn into a mess for Naruto if he gets involved any further with Sasuke (and if he does, make sure it's just sex). But it's pretty obvious that's advice Naruto won't take. Hope to see a new chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - FromAfar on September 24, 2012
    I found this story quite funny: everything is described in so simple, direct, straightforward way so that Naruto seems Captain Obvious all the time. Leave at least something to readers..!
    It's pity naruto can say nothing more about himself as being "Eighteen. Blonde. Tanned. Orphan living with his only uncle. And a constant problem to almost everyone around me. And also gay as anyone can be" (c) - is this all?
    Lots of over-used Naruto-verse standard clishes are present, so i guess one can just hope that the story will get more interesting and intriguing.
    As for 'bonds'.. it never amazed me how 'narutos' of naruto-verse fandom could build ' a relationship' on the base of pure sex. Let's see.. the poor orphan boy clearly has some illusions and expectations, and dreams!
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