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Reviews for The Gift

By : Daydreamer79
  • From satterb on September 05, 2012
    Oh my god!!!! This story actually made me cry! What a heart wrenching story. You do know how to twist and turn the plot to keep us hanging on the edges of our seats. LOL Thank you so much for sharing your great talent!
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  • From pssnangel4 on September 05, 2012
    Such a beautiful story. I can't describe how amazing this was to read. I truly recommend this to everyone. If anyone wants to read and cry over such a beautiful heart warming story about love....true love, fear of death, peace and the fight to stay alive? Then look no farther, this story is all you need. I love how you took us on a ride with this story, you didn't take us day by day, granted this was a one-shot and that would have been impossible to do, you showed us Naruto life....took us on a journey to see his slowly deteriorating heath. Showed us how truly brave he was trying to be strong and show no fear of death so that sasuke wouldn't suffer more then already needed.
    I also loved how naruto already knew what would come next and the next paragraph would be that very point taking place, truly a tearjerker. The emotion from naruto was dead on for me as well, most would probably make naruto an optimist, but facing death makes it truly hard to be one. Fear eats at you and you find yourself trying to force everyone else around you to see the hard truth, no matter how much it hurts to admit your going to die, but at the same time you don't want sugar coated lies. My grandmother was much the same way before she died. I don't remember every moment that lead up to her passing but I do remember parts, much like your story. How things just got worse and how she wouldn't let herself pretend she had any hope to live. So seeing naruto acting the same way was just dead on for me. But I loved how you still added his humor, it made it all the more real for me. Naruto would try to make you smile, try to take away some of the pain from you. And it just made him all the more beautiful, excepting his fate but still trying to smile threw the pain. Nothing short of breathtaking. Thank you.
    I am and have always been proud to be an Organ Donor, an this story is a wonderful example as to why. I hope many of you also feel the same way. If I had to die, I'd like knowing my body could save a few lives....May we all live a wonderful, happy, long life.
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on September 04, 2012
    *Sniffles* damn my eyes are probably looking like crap right now too. Good thing I have a brand new box of kleenex tissue to use :D! Awesome job, totally loved this one shot!
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  • From smint45 on September 04, 2012
    Oh my god that was so sad but absoloutly fantastic!!!! I loved it!!!
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