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Reviews for Betrayal

By : KeiichiDaigo
  • From ANON - Chiyoko_Sayuri on September 07, 2012
    OMG!! YOU HAVE TO DO A KISAME/NARUTO/ITACHI!! I VOTE FOR IT!! >:D

    Lol, awesome story by the way! I feel sorry for Naru though. Poor boy. :(
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  • From ANON - Kinkou on September 07, 2012
    Hmmmm... This is looking to be an interesting read. I can't wait to see the rest; I only can not like the short chapters but can understand the reasons why. As to couple votes, mine lie with the shino/naru or the kisa/naru/itachi (or anything itachi/naru lol).
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  • From solitare1 on September 07, 2012
    Shikamaru/Naruto
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  • From Kalla on September 07, 2012
    Naruto/Shikamaru
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  • From ANON - Stacy on September 07, 2012
    I vote for Shikamaru/Naruto. I really like that pair!!
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  • From ANON - DoeEyedSamurai on September 07, 2012
    I like this take and i must say i would love to see KisamexNarutoxItachi, but i do think you should throw another couple in there to give Naruto some sort of support. I do like your OCs though, hmmmm maybe they can come into play. Anyway i like it alot keep going!
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  • From ANON - RiddleOfAllTime on September 02, 2012
    i really like the begining, though i would like to know more of the backstory, what happened, why did they betray him, who were there to tie him down, why didn't he fight back? ETC. Also I'd like to make a bid for a KisameNarutoItachi pairing, or a ShinoNaruto Pairing......I love both of those but not many do them and i'd like to see more.
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  • From bingomzan on September 01, 2012
    I can't wait to see where this goes. Also, may i suggest shikamaru for the other part of the pairing, we dont see much naruShika.
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  • From frix on September 01, 2012
    I have seen a lot of variations on this story and almost all of them screw it up. So far all you have is an intro so it can still go both ways:

    DO NOT go the "poor little Naruto"-route who sits and cries and gets stopped by a little seal while being abused.

    Naruto is the strongest ninja on the show who also has access to both natural energy and Kyuubi's chakra There is no way in hell that a few seals designed for ordinary humans can hold him back. The next chapter better be about him effortlessly breaking out and getting revenge as the strongest ninja that is alive at the moment. And not about him being held back by "Tsunade's chakra". Shit he can overpower her chakra-reserves by himself and that's not even counting Kyuubi as back-up.

    just watch the movie "Naruto: Blood Prison" that starts out similarly. It is established as canon that even with sealed-away chakra he can still access his sage-mode. There is no way he won't escape.
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