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Reviews for Alone In Our Room

By : Violetwylde
  • From ANON - moon on December 04, 2014
    yes, i would love to read more from you i think you have alot of talent. keep writing your very good at it. and i agree with the other readers this could turn into a beautiful multi-chapter story :)
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  • From RiswynnWarrior on February 03, 2013
    This needs to be wayyyyy more than a one-shot! It needs more chapters, make it evolve into more than just this. Ugh. (:
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  • From ANON - Kyoko21 on August 01, 2012
    OMG!! It's so hot!!!! I love it!
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  • From april-ford on July 21, 2012
    I love Your Story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^
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  • From Chiken89 on July 15, 2012
    I loved this. So heart breaking. I kinda wished this continued on into a full story!!
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  • From ANON - Jen on July 15, 2012
    I don't normally say anything about A/Ns, but yours made me LOL. I will indeed look for a different fic the next time I feel like indulging my poor, tortured heart that no one in the world could possibly understand. ;)

    (Regarding your second author's note, if you're looking for places to archive your work, aside from "the den of voles," have you also looked into getting an LJ account and/or AO3? If you like feedback and interacting with readers, the other two sites are much easier/better for that. There's also y-gal, but YMMV on that one. Writers like the social aspects of it; a lot of readers find it too much of a hassle to use for following fics.)

    I liked that they were both equally guilty in this fic, and equally pathetic. There weren't any good guys or bad guys in this. Sakura is Sasuke's girlfriend, but she's Naruto's friend, too and he has some responsibility to her as well, and he knows it. Just like he knows no one has forced him into this affair and that he could choose to leave it at any time, but he doesn't. They are both in a bad situation, and they are both contributing to it. I feel sorry for them, yet I also feel like they deserve some of their unhappiness. Who knows what could happen if they ever reach their breaking point with the situation... It would either kill them or cure them, I think. Nice fic. :)
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  • From ANON - :) on July 15, 2012
    Ahhh you write very well. This fic was sad but not overly so. It kind of left me feeling hopeful that they will one day be together as a couple :D
    Keep writing! You're good at this!!
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