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Reviews for Marionette

By : sainmoth14
  • From Miki-chan on September 29, 2012
    Ooooo keep going! This is getting interesting!
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  • From Darkserpentcat on July 16, 2012
    First is Naruto always going to be the dominate mate or will he sometimes bottom?

    Secondly if you are still deciding mates my vote goes towards Asuma, naturally, and Ibiki also I look forward to the Sasori fight and meeting Lady Chiyo, maybe Naruto could even say something about how Sasori the puppet master has become a puppet
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  • From Darkserpentcat on June 29, 2012
    Two things

    1) I can't wait to see how Sasori will react to Naruto like this and I think if you do follow the Akatsuki that when Naruto hears about Sasori he will want to fight him in order to test his puppets

    2) Now this might sound mean or bad on my part, and most likely hypocritical since I know I asked for some fics and I have this problem, but I really hope that once you add the fics you have on fanfiction.net that you focus more on your current fics then making new ones. You see I have had experience of knowing that having multiple unfinished fics posted up makes it difficult to focus at the time and a lot of people can get annoyed if there are a ton of good fics that are incomplete and haven't been posted for a long time. So I hope you will focus more on your current fics and wait to add more unless they are one-shots also if you are constantly overrun by plot bunnies I find it helps to write the idea down and make a minor plot line also you can still write parts of it but I wouldn't post it until you have a few chapters typed up. I myself am trying this method now. Also if you get bored or have writers block with a story then you could work on another story you have posted maybe in a different fandom
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  • From kyuubifreak on June 26, 2012
    the story is very interesting, and i am looking forward to the next one
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