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Reviews for Flamethrower

By : LostinThought8
  • From Miki-chan on January 19, 2013
    Wow this is great! I'm enjoying the story so far!! I like what your doing and how you manage to tell all of the characters stories without leaving anything to question. Really good so far and I hope for another amazing update soon ^_^
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  • From ANON - Lil-lo on November 11, 2012
    I love this story! It's a great mix of the cannon story and this post-world that they're living in. I really want to tune in to see more details explained.
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  • From FromAfar on October 20, 2012
    Why is Naruto so afraid to come to Konoha? Apart from painful memories of his happy past, he seems to have done nothing bad, no crime... was he captured by sadists in the village? Was he betrayed by his comrades?

    Naruto following Sasuke after the fit felt nice and everything, but I personally always find that "I-want-to-help-no-matter-what" and the quick conclusions Naruto makes realy annoying. He is always inruding, looking into way too deep and direct. And now he has a good reason to ask more questions. Private questions, again..
    As i understood, in the next chapter there will be some background info on both main characters. So more will be revealed.
    I wonder, too, what Kakashi will say and if Naruto knows him.
    Anyway, they both don't seem likely to leave Konoha soon. Well, till next chater, then! Thank you!

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  • From FromAfar on August 21, 2012
    I liked the story *very much* and added it to my recommended ones.. love SasuNaru & post-Apocalypse stories, so it's just natural.
    The story is well-written, descriptive, detailed, not over-emotional or romantic - thanx god! - quite fitting the grim setting, travelling realities etc.
    Sasuke is quite his usual self, thanx for that, too. As for Naruto: I just can't get how he managed to stay so lively, upbeat, *alive* -that's the word - after leaving the labs. Really, no trace of anything horiible, he's practically normal guy.. how come?? Please give more info about his and sakura's time there.
    I liked the way you described the tension btw both guys and the reasons for it. Again, natural. An the growing pull - too.
    Hope to see more of Naruto's wilder, untamed side. it's facinating! Hope Sasuke won't get through with his plan of selling Sakura, that Naruto won't kill hin for trying. :) That human side of Sasuke is a very nice but a rare sight.
    Kabuto was just.. scary. Disgusting, scary. Brrrr...
    Thank you for your writing. I can understand to some degree how fighting scenes must be difficult to describe. They were very good! Keep up good work! Hope to read more of it!
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 16, 2012
    Oh man I am soo glad to be able to leave a review finally! seriously I have been without internet access for what seems like forever! though I was able to read your updates via my cell phones internet connection and itty bitty screen lol, it did not however let me post any reviews! I hate that, not as much as I hate not having my internet so Thank GOD...anyhow loved the last two chapters! I totally loved the third chapter and the POV of Sasukes view and how he came about setting up his little ruse to get into the good graces of Naruto and Sakura's little circle so he could better betray them lol and ooh God he as in Sasuke is soo evil he wants to send Sakura off to a prostitution ring lol omg I LOVE it hehe, although I sadly dont think he will get to do it though I am soo wanting to see how Naruto and Sasuke act when its just them two alone together lol and oooh man the rivalry begins! Awww yes it was sad that Haku and Zabuza had to die but seriously they were bandits and I didnt see them being let go and them getting the same sort of sympathy they got from team 7 in the manga, they are ruthless cut throat bandits in a mad max beyond the thunderdome sort of world and its pretty much dog eat dog here so I didnt expect them to live and as much as I can see Naruto and Sakura being hesitant to kill, I thought you did it very nicely they killed, well Sakura did but she was remorseful about it even as she pulled the trigger knowing there was no other choice it was either him or them...so ya Zabuza had to go and Haku seemed a bit or cut throat in this fic so I didnt feel so bad when he died, does that make me a mean person? lol...But what the hell? If Sasuke's flamethrower is broken and a bullet hole in a flamethrower is a pretty had thing to fix if ever thing will blow up even with a patch up job its too dangerous, then why the heck is Sasuke till carrying it around? Is it like some security thing for him since hes had it for so long and it was his prized weapon? Although I think he was a bit too attached over an inanimate object lol like it was his precious....*thinks of golum in lord of the ring* lol...anyhow I cant wait for more I am just itching to see them get into Konoha and see what else happens next, thanks for the awesome read, till next time keep up the great work, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From DepressedPoet on July 05, 2012
    More please!
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  • From Mija on June 29, 2012
    Oddly enough I did NOT expect that lol, for some reason I did not expect Sasuke to be a spy or one of the ones looking for Naruto or Sakura, I know in Chapter one you said they were hiding and running from the researchg facility but it never crossed my mind that they would come across a sole person looking for them, i kept thinking that there would be wanted posters or military like guys out patroling for them lol silly me, I LIKE this lol, and hehe Sasuke is attracted to Naruto yet annoyed oh God that is priceless, and silly Sakura, she herself saw that Sasuke seemed to glare at Naruto with something other than anger so she should have gotten a little clue lol, and omg why doesnt Sasuke want to go to Konoha, does his family live there or are they dead like in the manga? and the person hes looking for is Itachi? And will people know him and will people know Naruto? Arrrggh I know I know I will just have to wait, I love this chapter and I am totally looking foward to more and why the heck is Sasuke carrying a flame thrower? and oooooh, flamethrower..Narutos dreams about the village erupting in ugly nasty flames...not a nice thought...cant wait for more, thanks for the great read, till next time, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From Zeroday on June 21, 2012
    Flamethrower has potential, no doubt. Although the first chapter isn't fantastic, it's still pretty interesting.
    I really want to know what happened at the facility and what Sasuke's up to, as well as the answers/questions that Wave Country
    will bring. So I'll be tuning in for the next chapter. C:
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  • From Mija on June 20, 2012
    Wow this is really well written and so far very unique, at least so far its diffrent from anything ive ever read and its given you enough but yet not enough to tantalize you to keep you interested but not give anything away, lots of 'what the hecks going on?' sort of thing lol, I cant wait to read, more, thank you for the read, till next chapter, keep up the good work, huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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