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Reviews for Trouble In Paradise

By : DevilHeart435
  • From ANON - AmayaAmaya on January 21, 2017

    The story is wonderful thus far. The plot flows well, the sex added in at just the right moments. But, I must wonder, when are we getting the rest? And the sequel you mentioned?


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  • From ANON - Nox on September 15, 2016

    This is one of the best written and paced fanfictions I have ever read. Shame that you abandoned it...


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  • From ANON - Jesse on September 30, 2014
    I like the story a lot but its a shame you stopped but you may want to try to find a fanfic writer to adopt it as it is quite popular by the looks I would do it but I do not have enough ideas to do it myself please if you can find someone to take it and continue I would be grateful.
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  • From Tomturtle on May 28, 2014
    Really enjoying this story keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - JM on June 24, 2013
    Wow I love this story its got a great balance of smut and story and you actually can make the characters act like themseles without turning them into sex slaves so to speak please update soon this story is staying in my favorites bar
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2013
    Nice story. Continue please.
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  • From ANON - Shikalover_94 on December 19, 2012
    update please
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  • From Orthoon on December 07, 2012
    I know people love to exalt Hinata as this paragon of virginal innocence, but an active martial artist, assassin and military personnel having a hymen is far-fetched.

    And something just irritates me about Ino apologizing to Hinata. Ino - and Naruto - have nothing to apologize for; it's not they're fault they find each other attractive, and it's not their fault Hinata saw it fit to dither around for several years, and not confess her feelings or even try to get close to Naruto.

    Seriously, Ino should have angrily called her out on that. This whole thing falls on Hinata's shoulders; not Naruto's or Ino's.

    But so long as it's Ino who gets more attention, I'm fine with it. She landed Naruto first; they seem to be good friends as well. Throwing that away just because Hinata thought she could pine after Naruto without someone else coming into the picture seems wasteful.

    I'd also have liked to see Ino more...forceful here, instead of a weeping wreck. Have her realize it subconsciously, and then decide that "I'm not going to give him up." Having Hinata of all people deliver a sermon on bravery when she attempted glorified suicide once and spent the last few years dithering has very little impact, as is ruining Ino's strong personality for the sake of propping up Hinata as a paragon of femininity.
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  • From ANON - shikalover94 on December 04, 2012
    am I missing something? why have you not updated? come on please update I wanna know what happens next!!
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  • From ANON - Dazandune on October 07, 2012
    Great story, when are you going to post an update?
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  • From ANON - The Watcher on September 16, 2012
    So far, I have only two complaints about this fic: 1) it's clear you don't have a beta reader, as I have found a number of minor mistakes.
    2) There isn't enough of it written yet! It's so hard to find a well-written fanfic, and finding one that isn't finished yet is even more frustrating! I eagerly await your next installment.
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  • From TheComposecreator on September 13, 2012
    most definitely amazing
    post more!!!
    soon!!!
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  • From ANON - JoshB on August 31, 2012
    I like this story and it has a great story. It seems like Naruto finally got someone to like him but only for a mission but now it turns out she might have fallen in love with him. Now Ino has to give up Naruto for Hinata to be happy. I am wondering how this next chapter is going to be. Hope you write the next one soon.
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  • From ANON - Tiberianfest on August 20, 2012
    Amazing story, I love thefact that there is actually plot in here as well :D Ican't wait to see what happens next
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  • From Kenshinryuu on August 14, 2012
    I loved Ino seducing Hinata and I can't wait to see a threesome between Ino, Naruto, and Hinata.
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