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Reviews for My Lover, My Master

By : ramrunnr
  • From ANON - GunmanPrice on July 08, 2013
    Very nice fic, but Im a bit put off by how large of a spacing you put between lines, but none the less good, and I really hope you dont stop writing any time soon. I look forward to more of this story and more lomony sticky goodness lol!
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  • From ANON - Vfsnake on July 07, 2013
    Nice! Shame there were no lemons. Maybe later.
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  • From Trood on June 13, 2013
    Great chapter can't wait for next one.
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  • From ANON - Naruhinalover20 on June 12, 2013
    Im glad this updated cant wait till this is caught up with the 1 that was on FF last year
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  • From ANON - Vfsnake on June 12, 2013
    Awesome! Naruto's got his slave and hiashi is a moron. LOL! Could you have someone kick hiashi in the nuts? Like naruto or kurenai or anko?
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  • From ANON - Lord_Farsight on May 06, 2013
    Hey! First thing I'd like to say is : YEEES! I found it again!

    I read this story on FF.net first, but then, impossible to find it again. Meh, anyway, great story, I really like it and I hope next chapter will come soon.

    If you want to contact me and answer this review, I have the same penname on FF.net. Oh, and I've written a few fics, would be nice to have your opinion :3
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  • From ANON - paapi on March 21, 2013
    Hey, RAMrunner i just wanted to remind you of a plot hole in ch.8.
    Curse seal is visible on the forehead of the bearer of it. Thus when naruto removed the curse seal from hinata's forehead it shouldn't be visible. When hinata came after bath she only had a towel and nothing to cover a forehead. Since hiashi was watching her, then he should've have noticed her caged bird seal missing.

    Another question : will hinata be continuing ninja career, since she is now in care of naruto?

    Btw, nice story. Had fun reading it. Keep up the good work.
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  • From renegade_officer89 on February 07, 2013
    HELL
    FUCKING
    YEAH!

    Finally an update! It's like, years, man! I am really, REALLY hoping that you can get this story to its end. I followed this story of yours at FFN before the purges, and is extremely surprised when your story gets removed when other, more horrible stories remains existing. Fucking idiots, the lot of 'em. Anyway, I really wished that you can continue this up to or beyond the point when you published it in FFN and hopefully finish it. Thanks for continuing this story for our reading pleasure!
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  • From ANON - GreatFan on February 01, 2013
    Oh my god. We waited sooo long for these chapters and still no lemons? Pls post new chapter asap ;)
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  • From ANON - Ra on February 01, 2013
    This story seems a bit interesting. So, I will read. And probably a better version (though don't hold me on it) of the technique name would be ending with Just a Kai (release) or Fuuin Kai (Seal Release). And Ougi is a different version of technique, but it might work.
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  • From ANON - x on January 31, 2013
    ogu= secret
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2013
    Nice work. I like it so far.
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  • From renegade_officer89 on July 09, 2012
    Man, I liked this story because of the slave concept, and especially since most master->slave stories I found on FF.net is yaoi somehow, so when I found out that FF.net burned it, it disappoints me. But at least you're continuing here. Though I realized that you only have 5 chapters here instead of the 12/13 (I forgot) chapters available on FF.net. If your notes on it is gone, I cannot help you with that, sadly , since I did not save a copy of the story. But I really, really hoped that this story can be continued to its end, if any. Thanks for supplying this awesome story.
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  • From MizoreShirayukiFan on June 07, 2012
    Feels like you ended it half way through the chapter to be honest. I want to know what Naruto's gonna say and do.
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  • From WolfCoyote on June 06, 2012
    Great story , I am enjoying it and I like how you had Naruto come to Hinata's rescue when she was being auctioned off..I can't wait to see what happens next:)
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