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Reviews for Revenge

By : PhoenixInnocence
  • From ANON - Betty on December 01, 2012
    Thanks for writing a good story. I enjoyed it all the way til the end.
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  • From ANON - Ohitsjordan on December 01, 2012
    Holy. Shit. That was amazing. I loved this sooo much!
    And I wanted to let you know that while I read this, I could clearly see everything in my head.
    It's like watching a movie!
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  • From MisatosPenPen on December 01, 2012
    I threw up my hands in victory when I realized the epilogue was sex! Ha ha! Naruto took his name. How wonderful! *fangirl squeal* I so thoroughly enjoyed that! I’m sad it over. I will have to reread it now. I loved the fact you made Negato Kushnia's brother. ^_^
    btw, I've got an idea for story, but I'm not very good at mysteries, might you be interested in a collaboration? misatospenpen at gmail dot com
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  • From MisatosPenPen on November 29, 2012
    Jonesing for the next chapter! Sorry, I'm just impatient. ^_^
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  • From MisatosPenPen on November 14, 2012
    AHHHHH! No, that was great! I do wish Itachi and Kisame had a little bit more of confrontation, tussle or somehting, but I love Deidera's explosion, yeah. Now you've got reunite out little lovers! Oh, speaking of which, I love the litte kiss between Itachi Deidera. ^_^ And of course, the immortal Hidan. I'd forgotten about Zetzu. I knew the reason Konan was working with Madara had to be because of Negato and/or Yahiko. I'm expecting a good sex scene to make up for the repeated heart attacks!
    btw, yeah, all the speech tags since have been good. Remember, your method is faster than the one I suggested. Yeah, mine is the real way, but yours is better.
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  • From Angel_Davis on October 29, 2012
    Oh my lord, when Tsunade hit the ground my hand flew to my mouth. That scene will forever stick into my mind, I loved it! I feel sorry for Naruto and I hope that everyone will be alight in the end. Great chapter and I can't wait until the next one comes out.
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  • From MisatosPenPen on October 29, 2012
    The cell phone tower thing was just an observation, honestly, trying to get the cell phone company to help usually takes about a day. Your way is faster, so keep it. And believe me, I HATE speech tags. I've had a long, passionate, long standing debate with a fellow author about them. You just need to make sure the reader knows who's talking. I did a two page dialog scene with only like three speech tags and got HAMMERED, so I feel you.
    You know, Madara should have taken a picture of Sasuke with a gunshot wound on the ground to taunt Naruto with; that would have helped break him.
    Ahhhhh, the end of another chapter! I like this plan! I hope it works . . .
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  • From Angel_Davis on October 18, 2012
    So Itachi lives, Deidara saves him, Kisame is a crap head and Naruto took a swing at the killer. Holy crap there is a lot of different stuff going on in this chapter! I loved it, and I had to skip some of my homework in order to read this all the way through. I couldn't stop, I had to finish. It just keeps on getting better and better and I cannot wait till the next chapter. I think that your writing style has very much improved and it is amazing. Your chapters are getting longer and even more detailed. I wonder how this will turn out, will they all win, or will there be losses? It seems to be spiraling down?
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  • From MisatosPenPen on October 17, 2012
    *Squeal!!!!!!!!*
    No, I never calmed down! I've been checking every hour for updates! Ahhhhh!

    WooHoo!!! Itachi's alive! (I've only read the first sentance.)
    Itachi was texting Dederia. Awwww...
    btw, the cops can find out what towers were used for certain calls and could have found Naruto's general location that way too. ^_^ I've been a fan of Forensic Files since the start, I never watch that CSI crap. ^_^
    Whoa. That crazy mother f**ker (Madara). I soooo didn't see that coming.
    Okay, time out for editing: in the hospital waiting room, you really need to say who's talking and I'm like, 'why the hell are Kiba, Neji, and Kakahsi in same place right now?'
    Oh, so that was what Itachi's been doing! And Orochimaru was Kabuto's lawyer! Yay! Go Itachi! I knew you were sweet. I love you, my percious Itachi.
    I'm just imagining Sasuke hitting that morphine button a bunch of times then throwing it and muttering "fuck!" and it makes me laugh.
    Ah, fuck. The end. I hate you. I hope my readers feel like this after every chapter. You make me really regret making them wait so long for updates. This is karma, isn't it? You are my readers revenge. I hope it's Kakashi who comes to save the day.
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  • From Angel_Davis on October 08, 2012
    NO!!!! FU Kisame!!!! Good god I hate that he's a bad guy, and what DID ITACHI DO???? I am still trying to figure out how Itachi and Naruto are connected but I can't figure it out!!!! No, please don't let Sasuke die, please, please, please don't let him die! I can't believe they got married!!! It seemed a little rushed but hey that's how things are. I can't wait till the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

    Angel_Davis
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  • From MisatosPenPen on October 05, 2012
    I'm once again reviewing as I'm reading.
    This guy, he could just as well be one of Tsunade's as one of Madara's. hmmm. Red Herring? ... okay, not Tsunade's. Poor Neji and Kakashi.
    AHHHH!!! Itachi's own crimes!!! Is it what he did to Naruto? Or is it about his parents?!
    I'm reminded of Rogue Squadron (the Star Wars book) when Erisi comes onto Corrin and Corrin's like, no, you want to have sex because we were just in a very dangerous situation and it's just an emotional reaction to it. ^_^ Oh, shit. I hope they stop before they get too far.
    Oh, thank god, that would have been bad.
    WooHoo! The prolouge will be soon! This is so exciting!
    OH FUCK! Itachi better not be dead!!!!!
    Ah, that boom in the prolouge didn't make sense, but now it does, the fireworks.
    AHHHHH!!!! Bad Phoenix!!!!! The is the mother of all cliff hangers!!!! I'm so railed up!!!! Is Itachi okay?!?!?!?! How is Sasuke going to survive? What was the reason behind all this? Who is that woman and what does she want? Ahhhhh!!!!!!
    I need a drink.
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  • From MisatosPenPen on September 24, 2012
    I'm reviewing as I'm reading.
    It's great, every time I see this story updated, I'm happy! I think Itachi's taking percautions . . . Sasuke's got Naruto taken care of, now Itachi wants to the same for Sasuke.
    I like the Naruto first person POV now that they're seperated.
    I never thought of Madara! But that would be the same as Tobi.
    Naruto's going to run away, isn't he?
    Oh, at least he wasn't going to try and solve it all on his own.
    I get the feeling, Sasuke's about to get shot.
    Thinking about Akatsuki and the person Itachi texted, I can't help think about canon and wonder if Itachi's somehow in with Akastuki.
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  • From DRAGONBETTY on September 22, 2012
    Thanks for the good story. Can't wait for the ending.
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  • From MisatosPenPen on September 17, 2012
    So, my theories were: Orochimaru, Tobi, and Danzou. I sort of thought it could be Sai in some weird trying to finish what someone else started kind of thing, because he's acting weird. So it's probably Danzou. But for the love of God don't even hint whether or not I'm right!!!!!
    But when the murderer threatened that biker, for a moment I thought "Could it actually be Itachi?!" That momentary protectivness of his targets felt like Itachi-Protectivness. But he was in the courtroom with Orochimaru and Kisame would be with him.
    I thought the woman was poisoned. My bad.
    Ooooo, waiting for the Itachi story! And who did Itachi text?! The second man, was it Sai or the man Sasuke just met with? (don't answer that!)
    Inwardly screaming with anticipation!!!!
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  • From MisatosPenPen on September 06, 2012
    *Spasming out* So it can’t be Orochimaru since our mystery man was in the hotel room since he snatched the photo and Orochimaru was visiting the station. So I have two suspicions, but I think we all know who he is. Right?
    And who was the woman?! First thought: Konan. And did she have to do with this? So many questions!
    When you started that one section with “His target was in sight as the shadow walked swiftly down the bustling street” I feared you’d jumped to Sasuke’s encounter with the killer at the beginning! Oh, I’m getting anxious.
    And we’re going to find out what Itachi did in the next chapter? *happy dance*

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