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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - melissen on July 21, 2013
    Ok, that took their attention from the thoughts of the virus for a moment.
    I can't wait to see Haku dealing with Oro. I've been waiting for this for so long!!!! Then again I want them to clear Izuna's name... And I really can't stand the thought of Madara just leaving and maybe coming back after few standards....
    And I really hope he won't give them anymore trouble.Only he kind of already did.
    Gods, had Sasuke hit Neji it would've change everything. It would never be the same if he did.
    Of coures, hitting Shika would be so much worse...
    Advisory group? Wow sounds very interesting but I'm afraid I'm too narrow minded to be helpful...I wonder what kind of story it will be.

    - melissen
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  • From ANON - Sade on July 21, 2013
    I was really surprised by Sasuke's reaction here. His anger at the mere suggestion that Izuna could be an imposter was kind of scary. It seems out of character for him to react so emotionally and irrationally about something that really doesn't matter at the end of the day. He is the new Uchiha. He has to make sure that his children, new family, and new way of life is protected above all other things. Izuna and Madara are from the past and in the past is where they should stay.

    Madara has done awful things as Izuna but like Neji said he is finally going away. We are finally going to be rid of him and his scheming and his machinations. By pursuing anything that Orochimaru has to say without further thought is jeopardizing that. I really hope that Naruto is cured soon so that he can talk some sense into Sasuke because I fear what this course of action means for the family.

    You still somehow know how to keep the surprises coming week after week. Thanks for continuing to take the time to write this story for us.
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on July 21, 2013
    Chapter 96. Akemi, Yoshimi! I'm curious as to what the Orochimaru print did do to those two when they were his captives. I didn't realize though that this print was that print and hence the tension in the air. My biggest question is, why is he still alive? And will Sasuke ever know about Izuna is Madara? So many questions, so little time! Unless there's gonna be a fifth arc?
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  • From ANON - Bree on July 20, 2013
    Looks like they'll soon find out about Madara. I cannot wait to see how that goes down.

    Also, I am all kinds of excited about your original piece set in this 'verse. It almost makes up for the fact that this story is nearing it's end.
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  • From ANON - eunmook on July 18, 2013
    wow there really is no end to orochimaru huh? No matter how many you stamp out, another one springs up somewhere else when you least expect him. Is this one going to be of some use then? Very mixed feelings about your announcement of being close to the end...
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on July 16, 2013
    Chapter 95. Just when I thought I wouldn't get any sleep before work and figured I'd read. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I was wondering where the chapter was leading and I could feel your 'wait for it, wait for it' atmosphere. And damn did you mean 'wait for it.' Closing off the chapter with THAT as a surprise, man am I looking forward to know which and how he got there. Oh am I eager for the next update. I feel like calling in for work and bask in this cliff hanger feeling mode. Wohoo! Thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2013
    NO, another Orochimaru's print? Damn , I was so pleasantly touched hearing about the Silver Leaf. It was great that you've moved some action to that ship. It's like... home. Everything had started there. Sasuke and Naruto putting their bunks together for the first time.... aaaaah... And then suddenly BAM! another noghtmare.....

    - melissen
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  • From ANON - Achillona on July 15, 2013
    Wow! what a shocking ending!
    words cannot begin to describe how much this means. after he (Oro) saves everyone, and reveals who madara really is, the ones he hurt can have their revenge!
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  • From satterb on July 14, 2013
    I'm so thrilled that Haru and Hikaru are getting along better. I thought it was really cute that Ran and Haru decided to put a little chill on "making out all the time". LOL Thank you for all your hard work. I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Bree on July 13, 2013
    The end?! I am not looking forward to that...I hope there are still quite a few chapters to go.

    I really loved this chapter. Hikaru speaking up in Haru's behalf? Loved it. And it was nice to see the Gama again, even before the surprise at the end.
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  • From ANON - JenniPenni on July 13, 2013
    Oh man this story has already made me cry at least once, and I'm hoping for a happy ending (or like in your original story where everything might not be fixed completely but it IS GOING to be okay), but each new chapter you post makes me tense cause Naruto is getting older and now he's sick...eeeep! What a shitty situation, to know that there's such a close expiration date on the love of your life. I love this saga and even if you do kill more characters I like, I'll probably start reading from the beginning again and stubbornly refuse to read the parts where they die. But please, for the sake of my tear ducts, there's gotta be a cure!
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  • From satterb on July 11, 2013
    dying to know whats going on with the bad guys. And is Madara still a threat? Did Kimmaro have anything to do with the virus getting out? Can't wait till this weekend to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - NobodysAingyl on July 10, 2013
    Oooooh, now that's a twist. I never would have expected Madara to capitulate like that and the canine hybrid-specific virus is heartbreaking. Try not to take too long to update, please! Real life MUST come first, though, so I'll just be waiting excitely for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on July 08, 2013
    Chapter 93? Oh! I didn't expect that to happen! I forgot about Sai! (Bad me!) Which brings to mind. How are Gaara, Rock, Sasori and Ran doing? I wonder how Yuki is handling Five. Wait.... Is Five a canine hybrid as well? I'm not sure if I'm remembering him correctly. I can't wait to see if a cure is possible! And whether nor not Naruto will be saying goodbye earlier than expected!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on July 06, 2013
    Damn, just more tension but at least now we know.... How long will they spend in statis? Will Shika be alright? Was it just a one time thing, this nervous breakdown, or is he slowly loosing it?
    Damn I hate those stressfull moments. Then again, when it's relatively peaceful, it only makes me worry that it's just a peace before the storm....
    I guess - that's life!
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