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By : mannahpierce

From Cognizant on August 11, 2013
Chapter 97. LOL Sasuke sure got a scolding from Iruka. Awww~ Kimimaro is adorable wanting to call the girls with "chan" at the end of their name. I certainly want him to make it to the end of Leader with someone.

Chapter 98. Gah! It's frustrating having them argue as to whether Izuna is Izuna or not Izuna. I'm just glad that they're finally trying to make it clear that Izuna is Izuna even though we know that Izuna is really Madara.

Chapter 99. Woot! They are finally here! I can't wait to see what will happen! Just when things are going too according to plan and went as smooth as possible, Madara has done it again! The turmoil! Still, I'm glad that Madara got angry on Haku's behalf even if it's just for himself. I can't wait for Kiba and Naruto to come back! Naruto will give some sense and perspective to the group. I hope that Sasuke remembers what is eluding him that is important. I'm happy to see Sai again! I have to say, you're a genius when it comes to type geniuses and compiling their conversations. I feel so ignorant. As for Tokeisou, I so want him as an Uchiha on Sasuke's side. Maybe they'll finally catch Madara and find a place for Tokeisou? That line of thought though, is too simple. Will Madara instead go into stasis to outlive Sasuke and Naruto's children only to return after many generations?

And I know that you are done with this series for Naruto fanfiction as Leader being the last story. I'm curious though if there'll be a Naruto fanfiction in the same universe with Madara and Izuna being the focus during old Uchiha. I'm really curious as to how all of that will play. I'm certainly asking for much as a reader.
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From ANON - Bree on August 11, 2013
I just cannot wait for someone to expose Madara. He might get the print, but Haru and Sai are a pretty unstoppable team. It's crazy, since I've reread this story at least a dozen times, but I think I'm going to read it again from the start; waiting is so hard, even though I don't want it to end.
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From satterb on August 11, 2013
Oh no! Please, not another debilitating disaster! I hope this is how they catch Madara trying to slip away. I can't wait until you're able to post the next chapter, because I really want to find out what's happening. Thank you for all the hard work you've put into this magnificent story.
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From ANON - melissen on August 10, 2013
Damn it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's so frustrating...........
At least Sasuke - before the last sentence - said "he still COULD be Izuna. So, he at least assumed that he wasn't.

What now?

Shika - I love to read about his weird relationship with Naruto, because Sasuke. It's one of a kind. Naruto is bonded but before that Shika loved to fuck him. I wonder if Shika could like him even more if the circumstances were different.

OMG! embroidery??? That was so cruel....
Tsuneo must be impossibly cute. It's Naruto after all.

So Sai is doing it with Haru... I hoped it would be Shika and Sai once more... Maybe some other time.

hank you! Great update! (but scarry with this clifhanger!!!!!!!!!!!)
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From ANON - Anon on August 10, 2013
Oh no another cliffie! I love this story so much. The world is so detailed. I can't believe how long it is lol. Haru has grown up so much. I was a little leery of the kids when they were introduced. I thought it was going to become one of those stories. It hasn't. They are all unique characters and easy to keep track of and I'd actually love to read more about how their personalities have developed. I feel like some of the kits are still kinda mysterious.
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From satterb on August 07, 2013
If Sabu-san is "old", I wonder if he knows any songs about the old Uchiha days when Izuna and Madara were brothers? I love the new developments. It was really sweet that Haru and Ran are going to be able to stay together. Haru's thoughts about Guy and the other crew members relationships with Sasuke were sweet and cute. I can't wait for the next update. Thank you so much for all your hard work on this.
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From ANON - melissen on August 04, 2013
So, that minstrel is old? I wonder if he looks old... I hope he will be amazed by Sasuke and his music. I think he will be an interesting new character. I can't wait for Naruto to be out of the pod. It's like back then when he had been paralyzed... Sasuke needs to get some to be less melancholic.
Is everything fine with SHika? Did he ask Sai for help in his research? I can't wait to see what they do if/when they relise that it's not Izuna. I hope Madara's name will be discovered somehow!
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From ANON - sadie237 on August 03, 2013
SQ I so excited about them fine out the true identity of old man.(Yess) I just hope it's before he leaves. I did enjoy his pain. Lusting over the reported and not being able to touch. It made me think of the song 'You can't touch that' by MC Hammer:) I loved the part of Haur-chan thinking about how Gai and all the old Uchiha members feel about his Papa. And the fact that the greatest love of all is To-chan for Papa that made me smile:) He's right of course:) SQ as usual I loved! ^_^
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From Phoenixewolf on August 01, 2013
It has been awhile since i was able to take time and read, and it is always fantastic to come back to this story knowing that no matter what happens irl that here i can count on an amzing world that always has something intense happening as well as subtle developments! Thank as always for taking rhe time and creativity to give a reader a place to disappear into and a new reality to experience.
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From ANON - eunmook on July 29, 2013
there's a cure! and age retard! but turning off Naruto's foxiness?!! Poor Sasuke, he really can't function without Naruto, huh? A minstrel should be an interesting new addition, especially since what often escapes official histories manages to sneak into song and legend, something even Madara couldn't possibly control even as he managed to mess with the genetic bank. Plus, every good ruler needs a minstrel to set them straight on occasion.
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From satterb on July 28, 2013
Sometimes I'm just so enthralled with this story, that I feel like my mere words cannot describe how wonderful your work is. I really look forward to each and every update. I'm amazed at how much all the characters have such well developed personalities and how well you keep them in those roles. You never manipulate them to fit the story. I'm so in love with your work. I would really like to see you continue writing, but I know that real life gets in the way, or sometimes writing gets in the way of real life. I look forward to the next update. Please take care.
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From ANON - aflyinmonkey on July 27, 2013
Ugh! I just want that little Madara weasel to be found out. I miss Naruto :( but yaaaaaaaaaaaaay life expanding treatment! :D
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From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on July 27, 2013
OH Gods! What a great chapter!!!!! Not just because Iruka was there....
Every single part of this chapter was just perfect. BUT does it mean that Sasuke is going to bargin and let Oro-print live? Now I'm torn. I want Haku to kill that disgusting thing but on the other hand I really, really want Izuna's name to be saved....
Ggghhhyaaaahhhh......................!
I almost forgot about that time when Naruto made Shika piss himself out of fear....
God those times were still the best. Maybe it's just me but I think that before children they had a better life. Everything was exciting in a way that can't be noa. Now they all have to worry and.... It was more relaxed back then. maybe I'll start to red it all again..............?
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From ANON - sadie237 on July 27, 2013
SQ my computer let me back over here today:) I still couldn't help the laughter at Shika almost running into the door:) OK ok I'm going to stop laughing! My 'apologies' to Shika:) You know I perked up when Rin-san said she would do the virus and the life-extending treatment! Beside laughing I was very excited to find out that Sasuke-sama wants to know the truth about old man.(YES!YES!!) Old man setting around thinking of how good he looks in the press and what beautiful people he'll surround himself with on his new ship. Whooo I just dislike that man so much!!!:) Poor Sasuke it will be 18 days before he can know heaven again:) I can't wait to see what gift he has in mind for Haku-san?! Space Queen I loved it!! Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ ^_^
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From ANON - eunmook on July 25, 2013
I love Neji!!! He is both the most underplayed and possibly the most overlooked character... just coz he's mostly on the down low with his invaluable contribution. His incredible bravery, not least in choosing to try and give Shika what he needs - a burden almost everyone else shied away from one way or the other. Amazing chapter and then the extra prize of the note at the end - are you trying to give us death by pleasure?!! As much fun as it is to watch you play with the toys you've created (and it really, really is) now you're offering people the chance to play with you??!!! Like !!!!!!
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