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Reviews for Leader

By : mannahpierce
  • From GreenEyedCat on April 10, 2012
    YOU ARE BACK!! :-)It started well but I could live with a bit less Haru-perspective.
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  • From ANON - Dawn on April 09, 2012
    Awesome chapter...as always.. The move to the oak should be interesting eh? LOL I got a feeling something BIG is gonna happen? NO? LOL Can't wait to read more!!!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 08, 2012
    I finally found a minute to read it. Good chapter. I like this atmosphere of upcomming change. They move to the Oak and I can't wait to see what that will bring.
    Naruto should do something nice for Shika to cheer him up. Only he can do it, only he could wake him from the coma and... I think it's just HIS part to do.
    It's still kind of weir for me that eleven year old kid thinks about 'sharing hi body' with another boy but i liiked that he thought that about Kazuki. I like him. He's a hybrid, he's got a tail, he's smaller than the rest, there's a big probability that he's a berserker (I guess... since he seems to have more animal-genes than the rest)and still he's so... cheerful and optimistic... like Naruto.
    I hope he's got some bigger part in this story.
    Can't wait for Wednesday!
    THANK YOU for the update.
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  • From Telynaayuri on April 08, 2012
    completely false and made him want to hit her. i had to laugh at this.
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  • From missbri88 on April 08, 2012
    Awesomeness!!! I'm so excited about Leader as well as sad because you've stated that this will be the last mass arc of the storyline.
    I'm so happy that I read chapters one and two back to back because the opening chapter had me crying my eyes out! Only you could start a story jerking my heartstrings... But I can't wait to see all the amazing things to come!
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  • From roro237 on April 07, 2012
    I loved my outing with the family:) My favorite part in this chapter was the knives and salute. The sound of all forty and more knives being scabbard. I could picture it and hear it. That was awesome! Papa talking in his special voice. Kiba is still the greatest nanny in all space. The litter has grown so much Ka-chan reminded me of Naruto when he was younger teasing Haru about his hair:) Oh Queenie I enjoyed every part! The title was great and so fitting ^_^
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  • From ANON - richon on April 07, 2012
    love the ningen crew !! they are awesome. the household will space, what will happen then who will they meet ?? love this story, see you soon !!
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  • From ANON - Kyle on April 07, 2012
    I'd forgotten how much I love your writing!
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  • From bloodshound on April 06, 2012
    first, let me say, welcome back.
    that done, wow. it's scary to think of Sas without Naru... i mean sure he'll have others around him to support him but in that brief time naru was off line, sas was a wreck. he was very much like queen victoria without her husband. I don't know how long he would cope before he crashed.
    i think Klenn would have left quite a bit scattered here and there. i wonder what he would have passed to sai and haru.
    i'm looking forward to seeing how this develops.
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  • From ANON - Gingitsune on April 05, 2012
    This is so sad that it gives me shivers down my spine. I always knew that Klenn's time is limited but actually reading this chapter? It literally gave me shivers as I'm writing this review. It's like saying good bye to a dear dear friend. Klenn is actually one of my favourite characters of your novel and I'm sad to see him go. Nonetheless I felt you did a wonderful job of giving him the send off he deserves. *hugs*
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on April 05, 2012
    It's about time I jumped on the band wagon. Oh how I've missed you. I almost thought Naruto was the one that died, then I continued reading. I also want to know how Sasuke will act once Naruto is gone, will he resign or persevere? Poor Shika and Haru, I wonder what all Klenn left them. Only time will tell. Oh gosh I'm just so happy that you updated, even though this will be the last mini novella, lol. Jeez I love this story, I'm going to try and read it slow. *probably not going to work*

    ja ne till next time and see ya Saturday
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  • From ANON - maliya on April 05, 2012
    Thanks you for sharing with us this beautiful trilogy! It is a sad start but it totally fit with the story development. Like others had said, between OC characters Klenn san had leave without a doubt the deepest impression. He is and will ever be the most charming, tricky, sly as a fox, and beloved genius.

    Thanks you for the hard work. Your stories have fill may days with happiness!

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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on April 04, 2012
    So glad you are back! Klennethon Darrent may be near his end, biologically speaking, but it is clear he will affect Uchiha one way or another for a long time. He does have a point about Uchiha - concentrating all that power in one individual risks despotism.
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  • From ANON - liby318 on April 04, 2012
    Yes, was hoping you would start posting the story early in the month. Great start, a little sad, but can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - toosweet05 on April 04, 2012
    Glad you are back. Looking forward to the rest of the story. Hope these will be long chapters, because i hate to see you finish this series.
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