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By : mannahpierce
  • From roro237 on April 14, 2012
    I do so love Tsu-chan:) I hadn't realize that poor Shika was still grieving. I would say Shikamaru is the most complicated charter you have. And you do an amazing job with him:) I enjoyed the day with him. Thank goodness little sister is improving. Shika found his way to the best place. In To-chan company:) I love the title it was night and day ^_^
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  • From ANON - cynaga on April 14, 2012
    (ch 4) I adore your Shika. Who is his soul mate? What'sin the pod?
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  • From GreenEyedCat on April 14, 2012
    Am I the only one seeing a little blonde clone with a soft spot for Shika? Maybe he can have the spot a certain Teme has taken with the original. In the future of course. I so like to pair up people. And Sai is getting some action thats nice too :-)
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  • From bloodshound on April 14, 2012
    i love the way they rally round to manage and look after him. shika needs it right now, very much.
    what would his little sis have done if she was still with her ma and pa? would they have arranged things like play dates to keep her from being lonely? I hope she doesn't get angsty over having to share sai.

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  • From ANON - liby318 on April 12, 2012
    Loved chapters 2 and 3. Waiting for the answer in chapter 4. Thanks again for a great story!
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  • From bloodshound on April 12, 2012
    interesting, and far more hopeful than the first two chappies. It gives a hint of sas being able to retire after naru is gone rather than trying to cope with Uchiah responsibilities while he grieves. since this is new uchiah i sincerely hope he takes that option, cause i doubt he'll cope well with naru gone.
    anywho, looking forward to finding out whose in storage.
    i wonder if young Negato while bond with Tsueno like the straight triplets have with their chosen pack members and will the rest of the pack members find someone to bond with like that.
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  • From ANON - richon on April 12, 2012
    who is in their ?? you can't stop at this moment!! it will be ifficult to wait until saturday but I will manage !! see you soon, this saga is awesome
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  • From roro237 on April 11, 2012
    OMG! I knew if Kakashi called it was important. But wOw!! Who is it? Where did they come from? What happen to them? How long have they been out in space? I'm sounding like a news reported:) This will be my favorite chapter because? Ooh you know already:) Yes the fluffy soft stuff I love it!!! You touched on all my happy spots in this chapter. Tsu-chan is to adorable for words. Nagato-chan hanging on to Papas leg then saying Tusneo is what he likes best was the sweetest thing:) Plus I noticed that Tusneo was tending to his tomato plants which happen to be Papas favorite. He's Papas little man alright:) I just loved spending the day with Papa. This was wonderful!
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  • From GreenEyedCat on April 11, 2012
    poor Naru-chan can't keep his Sasuke in bed after sex. So cute. But who might be sleeping in the pod?! I don't know if I realy want to know.
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  • From ANON - Dawn on April 11, 2012
    GASP!!!!!!!!!! Who is in the POD????? IS it a trap...... I can't wait to find out!! :) Thank You Loved it!! MUAH!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 11, 2012
    Yes! Thank you for the smutty parts! I hope to see some of growling-possessive-Naruto and very satisfied Sasuke too!

    This perfectly happy picture was a bit scarry. Like a calm before the storm...
    I wonder what's comming to us in this mysterious vessel? Little Hikaru from the past in his pod after kidnaping...? Just kidding!
    I'll see at Saturday!

    Thnk you for the new chapter!

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  • From ANON - eunmook on April 11, 2012
    Oh boy! Way to wipe everything else from my mind. And here I was going to be all "please slow down if you feel you must, but write a world you enjoy creating." But with that cliffhanger I'm all "please speed up I can't wait till sunday!" instead. Sometimes a plot itself is so intricate or exciting that one can't wait to get from one point to another, in the reading as well as the writing. For me it is your characters that make the story: your world comes alive because of the people who people it, so please take your time playing with them just like you always have. From personal experience, the one thing I know to hold repeatedly true, is that if you write with one eye constantly on the end, you end up tripping before you're anywhere near it. And this is a story I wish to enjoy reading for a looooong loooooong time to come, so I hope you find it in you to wish to write it for a loooooong looong time to come.
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  • From ANON - morlana on April 11, 2012
    Thank you for Leader. Already into the 3rd chapter and here comes intrigue. Has me wondering who could be in the pod and what type of problems they'll bring with them.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on April 10, 2012
    Is Haru being groomed to be the leader??? Or is the plan still that whoever wants to take over takes over?? Will Sai ever be introduced to the family?? I just have so many questions and I can't remember them all. I really liked this chapter, felt kinda bad for Sai cause Sumiko no longer needs him. I liked that everyone got to meet the Ninken crew. I could just see all of Kakashi's dogs in humanoid for and your description of them was cool.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on April 10, 2012
    Sumiko is still anoying. I hope Haru can help Shikamaru. I am not sure of Sai any more. Keep up the awesome work. HUGS
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