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By : mannahpierce
  • From GreenEyedCat on April 21, 2012
    As nice as it is to give Haru this special moment of greatness I'm lost in the math thinking stuff. I like human interaction better :-) I hope for a lot cuteness in the next chapters
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on April 21, 2012
    I love it when our heroes talk (make-believe) science. And who is the blast from the past in the pod? Is he or she good, evil, or like many of your characters, redeemable? Someone's life's love? A threat to Sasuke's leadership? A great scientist?
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  • From roro237 on April 21, 2012
    Oh this chapter warmed my heart:) I'm proud of Haru to! I wonder is Haru a type 5 6 or 7 genius? But right now he's just a little man wanting his Papa to be proud of him. I got that from the dance in his underwear:) I loved it! I have to admit that I was afraid that someone might challenge Papa like the last time. I was breathing a little easier when it was over ^_^
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  • From GreenEyedCat on April 20, 2012
    Five will be a big chalenge vor the children. I hope the kids will not go berserk on him.
    Poor Haru is afraid of loosing his friend :-(
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  • From bloodshound on April 19, 2012
    poor haru. everything is changing so fast. he had four people who really got him, one of those is now dead, another is so busy with other duties and family that he can't spend time openly with him, ones artificial and can't be acknowledged openly and now the last of them leaving him for full time training. leaving him behind. he knows it's what ran needs but it's hard, hard, hard, knowing that person isn't going to be there as wanted/needed anymore. He's trying so hard not to be selfish, but what about his support net work. Being a Typed Genius won't he need more of one than he has?
    hopefully, he'll be able to adapt to the changes... but haru doesn't sound very optimistic does he. being left behind is no fun at all.
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  • From roro237 on April 18, 2012
    You had a hole lot of people in your compute room again:) WoW! That was great!! Ran and Five huh? I'm like Haru I'm happy for Ran and sad that he's growing up already. I loved it sweet and sad at the same time ^_^
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  • From ANON - liby318 on April 18, 2012
    great chapter, sad with the kids growing up and moving on.
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  • From ANON - eunmook on April 18, 2012
    Man, I've literally been jumping in place all day in between checking my mailbox repeatedly. Doesn't help that I'm in India, and so my wednesdays and sundays begin way before yours do. Is it too greedy to ask for more, hopeful, hungry orphan style?
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on April 18, 2012
    WOW!!!! Great chapter. Poor Haru. I like that this chapter was done in Haru's point of view. I really like him as a character. I can't wait to findout what is in the pod. Keep up the awesome work!!!! HUGS
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 18, 2012
    The arriving to the Heaven was very exciting! I liked the part where kids recited what they knew of the past events from other parts of the story. It was nice to bask in those recollections for a minute!
    There was a lot about kids in this one. I hope there will be more of the grown ups, I mean like more about Naruto, Sasuke and Shika than about To-chan, Papa and Shi-chan. I miss it a bit.
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  • From ANON - richon on April 17, 2012
    shika had a good day he has friends who love him. Love the part where kakashi say neji know he is not the one for shika. Neji is awesing, i don't know if i could do the same things. haru don't want somebody to discover sai. love your story see you soon
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  • From ANON - eunmook on April 15, 2012
    Is Tsuneo going to be the next heart of things... I can feel that little bit of extra special love for him like there is for Haru. Do you realize that Hikaru and all the female children apart from Hoshi aren't quite as likeable (liked?) as the rest of them? Does that actually make Hikaru the girliest of the first lot?
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 15, 2012
    I must say I felt kind of glad that Shikamaru talked about Neji with Kakashi. It was likea small hope for a new romantic relationship for Shikamaru or/and Neji. Their relationship works but it's a bit boring or... colorless... I don't know, maybe it's just the way Neji is, and it's ok but baybe... just maybe you plan something interestingg for Shika....

    The other thought I've been having for a long time is that Shika would be good for Sasuke when Naruto will be no loger there... But I don't like to think about those things for obvious reasons.

    I'm also glad that Shika (even if just accidentaly) found Naruto. I hope he will get a hug. I wonder if Shika worries his head about Naruto's short lifespan...

    What else? Thanks for a moment with Iruka! He was great with the punishment and with knowing the kids' schedule...

    Thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - liby318 on April 14, 2012
    loved the insight into shikamaru. He is a deeper character then one might first think. Love the story overall, thank you for the hard work.
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  • From ANON - Dawn on April 14, 2012
    OHHHHHHH Poor Shika!!! Naruto just needs to hug him and be done!! :) More Sia?? YAY!!! Wonderful Chapter!!! Loved it!
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