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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on April 25, 2012
    Haru is finding his nitch (sp?) in this chapter, at first when he told Shika that he had found the solution I thought Sai had helped him. But if he did it himself that is truly amazing. I love Haru. I really can't wait to find out who is in that pod!!!

    ja ne till next time
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  • From bloodshound on April 25, 2012
    i wondered if/when Madara would make an appearance... if that is madara. I'm glad sas has his kids as the top priority. They need to be since they're the future. haru may not realise it yet, but he's just assured his name will be remembered long after he's gone. that's some legacy to leave behind. hmmmm, i wonder who Five has his eye on.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on April 25, 2012
    I'm with Haru on this one, I don't know if I believe that Haru will always be Ran's best friend. Maybe his first but they are at different stages and I know in the last novel Ran promised not to leave Haru behind, but he has no choice. Sometimes friends just drift apart

    ja ne till next time
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  • From roro237 on April 25, 2012
    Five is something else:) I didn't get a feel for what his decision will be. So I'm waiting to see what he decides. The giggling Uchiha huh?! I can't wait to fine out who that might be:) This was another wonderful day spend with the Clan ^_^
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  • From ANON - eunmook on April 25, 2012
    Is giggly goof Shikamaru's new love? Just a thought...
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 25, 2012
    Hmm.,, About Kakashi's 'chosen ones'... I never thought about Naruto as one of them...
    I always considered Naruto to be Iruka's discovery beacuse it was Iruka who realised his influence on Sasuke first. He asked Naruto to join Sasuke in his bed when Sasuke had a fever and Kakashi was (as far as I remember at least....) surprised with his decission.
    But I he may be Kakashi's if that makes Five the fifth... ^_-...
    I tried to think back to the past of the story and i realized that I don't remember how they all came across Lee...
    For a moment I thought that Sumaru was Kakashi's discovery but then I realised it was Inari and Sumaru had been the one 'sent' by his dying mother...
    This story is really awesome....

    You mentioned that Hikaru and Haru look alike, but in some earlier chapters you mentioned that Hikaru keeps his hair long so it would not stuck up.... So they're a bit like Sasuke and Itachi!

    And about the pod..,. I thought there would be Madara in there, but it's not.
    (or maybe it is... who knows.. except you...)
    Now maybe it's crazy uncle Tobi? That would be... fun!

    Was Shisui a character in this story... I think he wasn't. Maybe it's him...
    Gods I can't wait to know!!

    -melissen AKA YamanashiOchinashiIminashi
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  • From ANON - eunmook on April 25, 2012
    du du dunnnn... Are you messing with us now? I really liked the mood of this entire chapter - very upbeat, almost playful. I also like how you doled out the laughs with each character getting their share: from Neji missing his cue coz he's too busy watching Shika have fun, to Shi chan with his excitement over transparent-turning drawers; Five wanting to be Uchiha Sama, and then Rin and Itachi and the biohazard, and Kakashi wisecracking, it was all a perfect buildup to the naked long haired goofball giggling - the esteemed ancient ancestor arrives - Encino Man anyone?
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  • From ANON - Dawn on April 24, 2012
    AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE WHOOT WHOOT HARU!!!!!!!! LOL I knew he was SMART!!!!!!! Wonderful wonderful chapter. sorry I didn't review the last chapter.. I was a bit behind!! But I am loving it!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!

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  • From ANON - haru on April 24, 2012
    hoho yes haru you did a great thing !! you change the way to find routes !! you may be not a type seven genius but you are amazing !! love this story , see you soon with more to know who is in the pot !!
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  • From ANON - richon on April 24, 2012
    ran is gonna be a trainee, haru will be alone !! he will find a way to make connections !! love your story !!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 23, 2012
    This was... incredible. I have nothing more to say. Haru is so great... I'm speachles... This chapter was great. It made me wonder if Haru is really typed5.....
    What is the characteristic of type 6 geniuses?
    Was Kotetsu type 6???? Or maybe Haru is something more than Shika, like type 8...? Is there even anything like that?
    He is still VERY young. It's hard to tell how hismind will develope... or 'into WHAT'..

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  • From missbri88 on April 23, 2012
    I'm still sitting in amazement at all the detail you've put into this world you've created. The scientific portions blow my mind and make me think of all the hard work you've done to bring us all of this and I have to say thank you. I may not review every chapter, but I'm always reading.
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  • From bloodshound on April 23, 2012
    damn, haru is one special little kid. i wonder if Sai helped. now though, he'll need something else to distract him from his most understanding friend moving on. Shika and Haru are lucky to have the support network they do.
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  • From ANON - eunmook on April 22, 2012
    Awesome as always. Haru dancing in underpants! Whoot! I totally get what Shikamaru means about wanting to stroke that fur coz that was pretty much my first thought when I read your description of Five in chapter Five (was that intentional?)oh yeah, pretty pretty kitty boy! Excuse my ignorance, since I know diddly squat about any Naruto universe but yours, is Five an OC? Also, I really hope you're not working your way towards making Shikamaru dispensable... begging your pardon for my overactive and somewhat morbid imagination. Man, if only you knew how many times I reread this tale in between updates!
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  • From silentnight on April 22, 2012
    so good to have them back!! i love reading about the children and how they are maturing. will there soon be more with haku, itachi and kisame
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