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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on May 05, 2012
    Oh my Gosh!!! Izuna has gone to the dark side, I'm still skeptical about it being him. And him waking up every 50 yrs allows me to understand how he knows so much. What is the end game, oh sweet baby jesus, this is not going to be good. I feel for Haru and all the children, they see the love that Sasuke and Naruto have for each other and they REALLY want it for themselves. Shoot you make ME want that kind of love. Also, now I get why Temari and Gaara's kids are the way they are. Kankuro's promiscuity and Temari's loneliness, yea not something I would be looking forward to. I can't wait till the other fetuses are brought out of stasis, I love when there are babies running around. That wolf hybrid troop nanny made me chuckle a little bit, at least she was honest. There is probably more I want to say but just can't think of them right now. THE PLOT IS THICKENING!!! ^__________^

    ja ne tilll next time and keep up the good work
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  • From GreenEyedCat on May 05, 2012
    I see an dead Uchiha in the future and a very angry Naruto. But maybe even Uchiha can learn. If the idiot continues to believe what the crazzy snake tells him, he will "gain" a ripped of head and nothing short of it.
    I'm sad that the guy isn't nice but the fact that he is an old fashioned Idiot might make it easier in the end.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on May 05, 2012
    Chapter 4--I'm glad Kakashi came to Shikamaru's rescue. Hopefully, Shika can get the office redecorated in such a way that he will be happy working there. I'm kind of sad that Shika and Neji aren't "rings-and-forever". But I guess being friends with benefits isn't bad, so long as neither of them are lonely. Being lonely is never fun (I speak from experience here).

    Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, and I am moving on to Chapter 5 now.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on May 04, 2012
    Chapter 3--Haru is so much like Shikamaru, especially when he comes in for breakfast half-asleep. For the sake of this review, I'm going to pretend I have no idea who is in the pod, although I know from having read the updated chapters. Of course, I enjoyed the Sasuke x Naruto. Even after all this time, I still cannot pick which "side" of Naruto I like better: fluffy-soft or growling-possessive. There are certain qualities of both that I like, but as of this review, I'm leaning more toward fluffy-soft. But, of course, that might change later on.

    Anyway, now I am moving on to Chapter 4.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on May 04, 2012
    And the plot thickens, how does this Uchiha-san know who and what people are. Did they have fox hybrids a thousand years ago? Anywho those twins are how Te-chan and Ta-chan use to be. Poor Temari and Gaara they don't know how to be parents. I liked this chapter cause we are reuniting with more beloved characters. GAH!!! I'm too excited for words, can't wait till Saturday

    ja ne till next time
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  • From ANON - richon on May 03, 2012
    gaara's are littles monters !! naru had a great idear, teach someone to raise children is better to care for them during 14 divs !! who is the other uchiha, what happen with is grandlother and brother ?? love the way haru is jealous about five and how his brother can read him and explain things to sai !! like this story a lot , see you next sathurday !!
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  • From ANON - liby318 on May 03, 2012
    Chapters 8 and 9 were great. Is it bad that I found it a little funny that the twins misbehave? Thank you for all your hard work to bring us this story!
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  • From daughterofvirgo on May 03, 2012
    Chapter 2--Nice of Sumiko to let Shikamaru and Haru have time together even if she still doesn't like Haru. Or, at least, is still jealous of him.

    Forgot to mention this in my review for Chapter 9, but it's good seeing Gaara again. And Lee. But Karura and Yashamaru are something else.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on May 03, 2012
    Chapter 9--Another great chapter. Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From GreenEyedCat on May 03, 2012
    Now we have the forth narator. Let's hear more from him. Who ever he is.
    And what a surprise that Gara is not the optimal parent ;-)
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on May 03, 2012
    Of course, you SEEM to be saying the mystery Uchiha is Izuna, because he and Madara were raised by a grandmother and there was evidence of Madara's corpse.
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on May 03, 2012
    Okay, so in your last paragraph you gave us the fourth POV - even though we don't exactly know who he is yet. I guess we don't get to look in Haku, Kisame and Itachi's bedroom any more.
    In "Iteration" I often wondered what your choices of POVs signified; I vainly hoped that writing from a character's POV would protect him, mostly because I love the brave and noble Ranmaru so much (and you repeatedly kill him off). However, you also wrote from bad guys' POV who are killed(Deidara) or should be (Kabuto). I think writing from many points of view worked for you, but I also know it's really ambitious. Completing a sprawling trilogy like this one has to be really hard - maybe limiting POVs is one way to get a hanle on it. Anyway, I still love the story.
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  • From roro237 on May 02, 2012
    Wonderful!! I cracked up at Tsu-chan running like a missile to Five:) Papa knew what to do with eight little ones-Call for help:) I really loved the part of Papa being with the young ones! I LOL when the twin freak Gaarr out and he hit his head. I couldn't help it that was so funny to me:) Hey I just loved this hold chapter as usual. It was a joy to read. Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ ^_^
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  • From ANON - Dawn on May 02, 2012
    Hummmmmmmm... the kids were interesting. lol out of control.... LMAOo oh man...... still get a bad feeling about that other uchiha!! still bothers me... I wonder why?? very good chapter!! :)
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 02, 2012
    OMG more children...

    I wonder if the pod man's point of view will be the fourth that was mentioned. You said that there are four POV in this story. It's Sasuke's, Shikamaru's, Haru's and... one more... Whose?

    -melissen / YamanshiOchinashiIminashi
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