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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - lonelyluIaby on May 09, 2012
    Something just hit me, how does Izuna know Orochimaru? Has that man really been here for that long or longer. And Shika finding out that Sasuke isn't the true heir is just icing on the cake. This is just ridiculous, not the story just the Uchiha's rules and stuff. Sweet baby jesus, please Sasuke don't fall into his trap. Kazuki turning into a mini Naruto is cute, that means when he does go in a decade or so they'll have someone with his spirit. I'm so happy the children got to meet him and spend most of their life with him around. I like that Naruto isn't giving into calling Izuna 'sama'. I can't wait till the babies come. I wanna know their names and personalities, *jumping up and down*. THEN, Five hitting on Haru, that was the highlight. I'm glad he is going to wait and Kazuki's comment about having a life size plushie had me giggling. I miss them as children. I don't even want to know what Izuna has planned for HIS Uchiha.

    Keep up the greatness, if you ever decide to publish I would be your number 1 fan ^___^. I really enjoy your world
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  • From ANON - eunmook on May 09, 2012
    Also, I completely squealed out loud for joy at even the mere hint of a Ran, Haru, Five threesome... and then had to look up how to spell squeal. "Your own giant plushie to sleep with." Every time you put Kazuki in a story I am overwhelmed with gratitude - possibly my favourite of the big litter.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on May 09, 2012
    Chapter 7--I would think Fugaku would have ordered any illegitimate Uchiha to be killed or hunted down and killed if they lived elsewhere but had come under Old Uchiha's radar.

    Although, I do think the situation could be worse regardless if it is an assassin or an Uchiha. It could be an Uchiha posing as an assassin.

    For now, I am moving on to Chapter 8 while awaiting Chapter 11. :)
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  • From bloodshound on May 07, 2012
    oh... dear... that bodes extremely bad things. the dude is sooooooooo totally madara. I don;t know how uchiah will dodge this bullet. its worse than it was with ran.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on May 07, 2012
    Chapter 6--I don't think I realized how important Haru's work was in this chapter the first time I read it. He's definitely showing that he's a typed genius. I don't know why Shikamaru was so surprised. Haru does have his genes, after all. :)

    I am running late, so I'll have to cut this review short for now. Anyway, now I'm moving on to Chapter 7.

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  • From missbri88 on May 06, 2012
    *curses, kicking & screaming* I knew something was up. But I don't think that's really Izuna though. I can't wait for more.

    Go Hoshi!
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on May 06, 2012
    I love how you always turn the story to mimic what is happening in the Anime. Like when Itachi went from bad to good. I love watching the love between Naruto and Sasuke. Keep up the awesome work. HUGS!!!!
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  • From ANON - Dawn on May 06, 2012
    I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! GASP!!!!!!!! Hides eyes I no wanna look......... v.v =) Wonderful! Man it gonna get worse ain't it?? ~ sigh~ Can't wait to find out Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Kyle on May 06, 2012
    ASODUHASODUH FNNNNNNNNNNNG

    WORDLESS WITH FEELS, MANNAH WORDLESS WITH FEELS!

    hope this one goes through or you're going to have to deal with me emailing you because I am so very very sick of this site eating my reviews. /siiiiigh
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  • From daughterofvirgo on May 06, 2012
    Chapter 5--Haru is still my favorite out of all of Naruto and Sasuke's children. I like Kazuki, too. As well as Yuki and Ryuu. It seems like Hoshi has a crush on Five. You'll have to refresh my memory but who does Misora belong to? I mean, who are her parents? I can't remember. Keitaro is Asuma's son, right?

    Regardless, thank you for another wonderful chapter, and now I'm moving on to Chapter 6.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on May 06, 2012
    I knew that was going to happen. Anytime someone unexpectedly pops up like that (trying to avoid spoilers here so apologies if this review is sounding vague) Orochimaru is usually involved somehow, some way. Kimimaru, for example, and Kabuto the first time we met him.

    Haru handled Karura and Takara well, I think.

    You don't know how happy I was when Haru mentioned wanting to have the same kind of relationship his parents have with Ran one day. I've been hoping that would happen and I will continue to root for Haru. I still think Five will give him problems, though.

    Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, and I look forward to the next update.


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  • From ANON - Hollow on May 06, 2012
    i a huge fan i love your stories let me tell you this saga has kept me on the edge of my seat since i found it two months ago now to tell you u the truth i one of the many that hate long drawn out stories i start reading and after a while i just either skim and skip to the end or i just forget about it
    but with u its not even like that sometimes im at work and i start to get giddy wondering what will happen next that i lose focus on my clients its insane i tell u the rawness of it (in a good way) just grabs u and doenst let go. the thought u must have put into it to developit the way u did is magnifficent so much so that im actually sad that this will end here, but it was a wonderful journey and i especially happy that u decided to share it with us
    -Hollow_
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on May 05, 2012
    Oh, the evil of it all! It's too bad Uchiha always finds itself repelling attacks, rather than going on the offensive.
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  • From roro237 on May 05, 2012
    OMG! I'm getting scared! This 'old' Uchicha is thinking of taken over and killing Naruto maybe using the children?! Oh Queenie your type 10 genius is showing! You have put the wOw factor into play this time around:) Now the title is clear to me:)I haven't told you lately I love your story and it keeps getting better and better ^_^
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 05, 2012
    No! Uchiha Izuna turned out to be evil....
    So he wants Uchiha for himself, hn....?
    He will see what the NEW Uchiha is made of. I hope he will get the surprise of his (long) life.
    I wonder if this will be the main antaginist-plot in the story...
    I wonder who is going to die...This is such a good start. I hope there will be at least 120 chapters.

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