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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - angelj232000 on May 23, 2012
    I loved the ending. I loved that without Naruto knowing he helped Haru. I was crying after I read the last part. I really liked this chapter very heart warming. Keep up the AWESOME work. HUGS!!!!!
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  • From roro237 on May 23, 2012
    I'm all choked up.. I have tears ready to fall:) The big litter is now young adults! I can remember when they were just a thought:) I laughed at the plant! That was the perfect gift from In-san and En-san. Ah the frisky growing pains of a young kit:) You know what I loved the most was how To-chan was there at ever turn helping make things go smoothly a long. To-chan is the best!!!! That was a lot of people places and things covered in Moving on. ~Bowing~ Thank you for all your hard work. I loved ever word ^_^
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  • From ANON - cynaga on May 23, 2012
    Chapter 15 was delightful!
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  • From ANON - Kyle on May 23, 2012
    ;A;

    Alll of the feels, Mannah.
    Allllllll of the feels.
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  • From ANON - liby318 on May 23, 2012
    I am so far behind in reading, however I did want to say, I still get excited when I see a new chapter posted!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 23, 2012
    Even if it was one of those "kids' chapters" it was wonderful!
    It amaze me that those kids can be so... normal and good, they don't have their own money or even any needs to have something (aside from Haru's very special needs like mini data crystal...)

    I know that Haru is the focus in here but I can't help but wonder how Hikaru about all this. What path will he choose? Is he still jealous? Is Madara going to use his 'attitude' for his own goals....?
    I'm not sure if I just didn't notice any moments where he had been mention or if is being kind of neglected...?

    It's sweet that Shika still calls Naruto Na-chan. I love to see them together. Their relationship is special.

    Oh, and one more thing about Madara hitting on Shika in the previous chapter - If Klenn (who was absolutely incredible) couldn't do it then Madara has no chance!!!

    THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - richon on May 22, 2012
    hahah it's not izuna uchiha but his devil brother madara !!love the way the story is going, your plot is awesome I love it see you tomorrow with more !!
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on May 21, 2012
    GAH!!! I knew it, I knew it, I knew it. Especially when he said he was stunned to see IZUNA'S desk. I am frothing at the mouth right now. I just want to kill him before he does more damage and more Uchiha personnel are killed. I don't want anyone else to die, it's too sad after getting attached to them. Shika!!! You have to resist, don't fall for this mans tricks. Sweet baby jesus, I do not want to know what he plans for the far fringes. Will he get Centre involved? How did he pass as Izuna is it his brain in Izuna's body or something. That is so messed up, killed his brother just to get the family whatever Uchiha is. Someone has to think something is fishy, they just have to. T_T

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 21, 2012
    Grrrrr.... But at least it means that Izuna was not an asshole after all.
    I enjoyed the moment with Shikamaru. I hope the will be a lot of him and the rest of the grownups!
    Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on May 20, 2012
    I do love the story, even if you've narrowed the crazy, compelling ambition of "Iteration." I am still obsessing a little about your choice of POV characters. Sasuke is a given, naturally. With respect to Shikamaru and Haru, it is ambitious to write from the perspective of two people whose thought processes are, by definition, far more advanced than those of ordinary individuals. It works, though. An entire chapter from Madara's point of view is pretty excruciating - I hope you veer away from his projected path soon. One of the things that makes "Iteration" so memorable is the whipsaw transition from homey slices of Uchiha life to Shika and Haru's abduction, Ranmaru's murder, the bombing ....

    It's becoming clear why this story is called "Leader." The theme of leadership is all over the place ...Sasuke's mettle as a leader is at issue, Madara wants to lead Uchiha, Haru, Hoshi and Five show potential as leaders.

    I have to admit I'm not sure why nobody questions why Sasuke wants all the new planets. Isn't Uchiha rich enough? I understand why Shikamaru cultivates wealth - he can do it in secret and it enables him to protect those he cares about. But it would seem that more public wealth would just attract more unwanted attention, perhaps even by Centre.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on May 20, 2012
    Chapter 14- Oh, no! What the hell is going on? So, it's not Izuna, after all, but Madara? Or is Madara alive, too, and Izuna was sent out to get Shikamaru and take out Sasuke? What a way to end the chapter! I don't know what to say, Mannah, you have blown my mind once again.

    Now I am definitely looking forward to the next update. I am still in shock here!


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  • From ladybird425 on May 20, 2012
    I am sooo glad that it was Madara after all. I assume that his cells were switched with the actual Izuna for imposterious reasons.
    Also, the interaction he had with household members were delicious :))
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  • From ANON - Dawn on May 19, 2012
    OOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I KNEW IT!!!!!!! :) GRRRRRRR Can't he just like have a malfunction??? :) NOw I can't wait till the next chappy!!! Thank you!
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  • From GreenEyedCat on May 19, 2012
    I thought you droped some hints but I wasn't sure if the history data had been changed of if it was the wrong person. Or could it be both? Were the brothers twins and why are all insane geniuses so stupid? I love the fact that Haku does not like the bastard but what the hell is Neji doing while that male bitch is hitting on his man!!!
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  • From blugirlami21 on May 19, 2012
    Bad developments with Madara. I think I am going to have to come back in a couple of weeks or something. I can't stand waiting for the other shoe to drop. I am so invested in these characters and whether it's Sasuke, Naruto, Shika, or the kits, the list goes on and on, I don't want any of them to be hurt. And it's starting to become unrealistic that we are going to come out of this situation unscathed. I want to be mad at Sasuke and Shika for letting their hero worship cloud their judgement and I am but on the other hand that's what makes them them. They are nice and trusting and I think it's still hard for them to imagine that someone would be so devious. I'm starting to think that they can only trust those who they know and I also kind of feel like we are forgetting the lesson we learned with the bombing about not letting anyone into the inner sanctum, to where they can easily hurt us. I can only hope that this will make them even more stronger and even more vigilant about letting outsiders into Uchiha no matter who they are.
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