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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - eunmook on June 06, 2012
    what a lovely change of pace - this was like going back into the beautiful world that they inhabit. If you're going to alternate with those ulcer-inducing Madara chapters, could you please give us two of these for every one of those? Or is that being too greedy?
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on June 06, 2012
    A nice distraction from the impending storm. Hikaru is suddenly much more interesting. (He seemed rather stolid as a youngster when his favorite toys were building blocks.) I guess we won't see too much about how he does with Inari since you aren't sending any of your POV characters on that mission.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 04, 2012
    In Kakashi's and Iruka's bed? wow... Kakashi probably wouldn't mind but Iruka would kick their asses for sure! I hope it wasn't just talking and that they will do some funny stuff, just to make this heavy forbodding atmosphere lighter.

    Naruto was great! It was so Naruto-like to talk to Neji!!! Just great! Only he would do something so un-tactful just because he thinks it’s the right thing to do. No one else would have the guts….

    Aaaadn…. HUGE relief – Kakashi knows that ‘Izuna-sama’ is a bit…. Not what they expected. I hoped he would be suspicious. The New Uchiha and Sasuke are his precious creation and I hoped he would be especially cautious about its future. It has to be him. He experienced much more in his life that Sasuke or Shikamaru. He knows the old Uchia and… I put my hopes in him.

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  • From ANON - Dawn on June 03, 2012
    Awe sweet ending!!!! :) I can still feel the build up..... sigh Madara just need to like have a brain fart already...... grrrrrrrrrr :) Good chapter:) Love ya!
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  • From roro237 on June 02, 2012
    Did you hear me yelling 'Thank God'!!!!! I'm so happy he told Kakashi. I have been on pins and needles since we found out what the old man is planing. Boy do I feel better now. You founded the perfect spot for Karin! You always fine a good and exciting way to add a old but new charter:) That twisted sister goes nicely with the old man someone to use her. The old man pissed me off acting like Upon-san is just to disgusting to be around. Plus the sexy bits with Shika and Neji was icing on the cake of this chapter. I loved it! Oh and Kiba talking about the new babies. I'm telling you I loved it all:) Another great adventure ^_^
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  • From ANON - eunmook on June 02, 2012
    You're only letting us see all the horrible things Madara has planned because you're not actually gonna let them get to fruition right? Right, right? 'Coz everytime two characters have a conversation you've got me wondering who's gonna pop it. Don't do it, don't do it... also please let it be about his arrogance and hubris and failure to actually see beyond his own expectations - if everyone is more than Madara can ever conceive of, none of them will fit into his plans. By which right now I mean Neji is way more that a Hyuga and he's survived worse so he'll be ok, won't he? This plotline seems almost to be punishing those of your fangirls who whined about Shika needing a hotter love. We're really, truly thoroughly sorry by now, please.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 02, 2012
    Chapter 18. That Madara wanting to have Neji kidnapped. Things certainly do go dark when the Madara parts of the story starts, but he is the villain, after all. :)

    XD Haku would die if Neji and Shikamaru did it in his closet and made a mess on his kimonos. I would feel so bad for Kisame and Itachi having to deal with an angry Haku! Of course, that may work in Madara's favor because Haku would kill Neji and Shikamaru but then Madara would lose Shikamaru. I'm just glad this is just a fantasy in my head and won't actually happen in the story. I like Shikamaru and Neji alive and Haku not angry scary.

    Anyway, back to reality. Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - cynaga on June 02, 2012
    Ch 18 great chapter!!!!
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  • From ANON - richon on June 01, 2012
    hoho sai did the right thing, haru will be fine without him and i presume sai will be an ally if madara made a move.love your stpry, looking forward to know what will happen next, see you soon
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  • From daughterofvirgo on May 31, 2012
    Chapter 18--I was kind of surprised at how sensible Su-chan was regarding Sai. But she has grown up, too, so she can't stay a spoiled brat forever. I don't suppose. I just hope Shi-chan and Neji don't accidentally find out about Sai while Haru's away. But I have a feeling Sai staying behind will be a good thing later on.

    As far as the interview delay, they are playing right into Madara's hands, aren't they? Something is likely going to happen to Yukie and they are going to have to use Karin anyway. The whole thing is making me nervous, Mannah, but I can't stop reading.

    Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 31, 2012
    I think I’m getting some grey hair every time they do something according to Madara’s plan… It’s killing me. And Sumiko does too! Haru’s precious mini crystal and Sai in the hands of THIS child…. Gods help them all.. but if that’s what Sai wants then I guess he has the right to decide… or at least SHOULD have the right…. Any rights….
    It’s impressive that this story touches so many problematic and almost taboo subjects, like AI, genetic, cloning, homosexuality, and even slavery… and much more….
    I think now I’ll concentrate on the smut part! It was great!!! Sasuke was cute. I wonder about ‘the look’ in Naruto’s eyes saying that they should always have time to fuck…. Must be something!


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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 31, 2012
    I think I’m getting some grey hair every time they do something according to Madara’s plan… It’s killing me. And Sumiko does too! Haru’s precious mini crystal and Sai in the hands of THIS child…. Gods help them all.. but if that’s what Sai wants then I guess he has the right to decide… or at least SHOULD have the right…. Any rights….
    It’s impressive that this story touches so many problematic and almost taboo subjects, like AI, genetic, cloning, homosexuality, and even slavery… and much more….
    I think now I’ll concentrate on the smut part! It was great!!! Sasuke was cute. I wonder about ‘the look’ in Naruto’s eyes saying that they should always have time to fuck…. Must be something!


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  • From ANON - cynaga on May 30, 2012
    Ch 17 I am glad to see Sumiko Chan growing up. :)
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  • From ANON - eunmook on May 30, 2012
    I don't know why, but its kinda very reassuring that SAI is staying, and that Sumiko is being so grown up, especially since everything else seems to be going to plan for Madara. I'm just glad there's some super genius type nosy kids who he can not factor into his calculations...
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  • From roro237 on May 30, 2012
    I'm off work today so I get to read you earlier than usual! (doing the happy dance) I couldn't wait to see what the title was talking about. And let me tell you it wasn't that:) WoW little Missy has really changed!! I believe her when she said she would keep the secret and protect Sai. THANK GOODNESS Sasuke-sama will not let Karin do the interview. Maybe he's not doing it for the right reason like stopping old man from taking over the world:) But not letting old man have his way is a good start. I love the beginning of this chapter!! Oh you know why huh:) That is the spice of love for our boys! I'm glad you can't see the bloody nose I got from that quickie ^_^
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