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By : mannahpierce
  • From roro237 on June 13, 2012
    Queenie did you hear me breathing hard, a little sweat broke out on my forehead!! I said a couple charters ago "oh I'm ready for the adventure to began" with the old man plotting something was getting ready to JUMP off:) I was not ready! WoW!! This is just brilliant!!! When I read the title I thought wonder what she has in mind? Never in my wildest dreams did I think of this kind of diabolical plan by the snake man! I'm so proud of our litter and big brother:) I LOVED EVERY WORD! ~Bowing~ Thank you for all your hard work. That chapter has my blood pluming ^_^
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 13, 2012
    So… this is the moment when everything goes to hell….. Later than I anticipated….
    Well at least there was this dreamy part and about that I’m speechless. It was not only smut with growling possessive Nsaruto! It was more. It was wonderfully written and detailed smut with growling possessive Nsaruto!!! It was great and as hot as romantic and fluffy with all those relations to their first time together… now I know why….
    ……
    I was surprised when Sasuke so easily agreed to Itachi being his double…. I know there was no time for drama and Sasuke is an experienced LEADER but still… And no one panicked! Not even the young ones. Haru is a bit apathetic at times but other act cool too….. But Sasuke is exceptionally good with ‘the leader stuff’ and he deals well with those unimaginable decisions. And now I know well what Itachis answer to Orochimaru’s question will be… That was his plan after all… I thing that Orochimaru is the last person from hand of which Itachi would like to die … This is just… so unfair…
    And I doubt that Oro would let he crew live…. Maybe they will think of something……

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  • From ANON - cynaga on June 13, 2012
    Ch 21. Omg! Omg!
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  • From ANON - angelj232000 on June 12, 2012
    I am nervous reading each chapter now. I don't want any one to die but I know Madara is up to very no good. keep up the awesome work. HUGS!!!!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 11, 2012
    Damn! It's so stressing..... Good chapter! Very interesting and moving the action forward. I loved every moment that made Madara uncomfotable or angry and I was pleasantly surprised to see Asuma do big part of that.... I wonder if he is doing this on purpose! I hope he does. This damn Madara has Sasuke on his side so I hope that everyne else are at least sceptic! Like Naruto and Kakashi!

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  • From ANON - eunmook on June 10, 2012
    Oh no... this buildup is just killing me - you were kinder before, with your sudden shock abductions and bombings - this is possibly the cruelest you've ever been. Interesting how most of the home team left in charge in Tarrasade is somehow related to Hiruzen Sama - going anywhere with that?
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  • From GreenEyedCat on June 10, 2012
    Why isn't Neji seeing the lies and why isn't Shika seeing the f########ing pattern. They are driveing me mad!!! Do something! I need more suspiciousness in the world.
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  • From roro237 on June 10, 2012
    I loved it! The plot has now thicken ^_^
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  • From satterb on June 09, 2012
    I have been following your story for a long time now. I love this saga very much. Thank you for sharing your brilliance with all of us.
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on June 09, 2012
    I'm on pins and needles!
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 09, 2012
    Chapter 20. Seems like Madara's plans keep getting interrupted, which is good.

    But, on the other hand, it continues to look like Shikamaru isn't going to be meeting up with Sasuke and family.

    The suspense with Madara is killing me because I know something bad is going to happen but you're making me wait, Mannah. But, you could be tricking me and everything will work out. Who knows. I'll just have to keep reading to find out. :)

    Anyway, keep up the amazing work, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From GreenEyedCat on June 07, 2012
    It is nice to see how everyone is trying to do their best. But it's also nice to see how the Uchihas are always the last to understand subtle facts and hints. Let us hope that that is a trait from the old ;-)
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 07, 2012
    Chapter 19. Wow. Now it really feels like the kids and kits are growing up. But it will be better for Hikaru and Haru if Hikaru has his own mission and can excel at it away from Haru, his rival.

    And Haku is in full queen mode.

    And despite being a little older, it was sweet having Haru in the snug with his To-chan.

    Anyway, thank you for another amazing chapter, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From roro237 on June 06, 2012
    OH Queeny I loved it!:) Did you make all those people take off their shoes in your compute room:) You covered a hole lot of things! This chapter helped me to let our litter go without tears. I so loved it! I'm glad that Hi-chan has been understood on some level and thing will change for the better?! Ho-chan is doing what makes her happy. The adventure was super wonderful today! ^_^
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 06, 2012
    Hikaru has finally appeared! Good! I finally get to know something about his doings.(quite a lot actually! I always pictured him as a chibi version of Itachi and I was kind of right… ^_^)
    I’ve been waiting for some news about him! … or more like, I’ve been waiting for some place for him. I was afraid that he would feel neglected and became another jealous and mean character….
    As I see he is not mangled with the Naruto-clones-litter, he as well as Hoshi and Haru is somewhere else. Aren’t they favor the not-hybrid kids???
    Just kidding... I guess... It’ best for the kits to do some shooting…. (even if they didn’t actually get a chance yet...)
    I wonder: Did Haru keep his mini data crystal array? I thought he had given it to Shika’s sister along with Sai… and now it looks like he still has it in his satchel! It’s cool if he does. I was afraid he had given Sumiko the gift from Klenn… and I didn’t like that thought….
    As always – great update!!! THANK YOU!

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