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Reviews for Leader

By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - Copy_That55 on June 18, 2012
    I love your Trilogy! The thing is that you're too good at suspense! The whole Izuna Uchiha thing has me on the edge of my seat, hoping against all hope that Naruto will fix him or if not that they notice his less than honest nature before something terrible happens. I will keep reading. Hopefully my heart doesn't stop before you finish ;) (heart attack from all the suspense).

    Thanks for Sharing

    CT
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  • From ANON - Slynx on June 17, 2012
    That was amazing. You really had me on the edge of my seat and I can't wait until the next chapter.


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  • From Telynaayuri on June 17, 2012
    stories*
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  • From Telynaayuri on June 17, 2012
    i am forever a fan of your storied.
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on June 17, 2012
    This is thrilling. It's probably unhealthy how much I care about these characters. I feel like I've watched them grow up

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  • From ANON - eunmook on June 17, 2012
    That was lovely - so tense and yet so perfectly paced. On another note, why doesn't wednesday follow saturday?
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  • From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on June 16, 2012
    Poor Haru! He's got the weight of the (his) world on his shoulders! At least he has Ran and Kazuki with him.
    Nice use of the estimated survival percentage- really upped the tension. I hope the others survive! Brilliant chapter and can't wait for the next!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 16, 2012
    That was as exciting as tormenting. It kills me to only have this one point of view so far. Haru was brilliant but other teams don't have Haru and Kazuki..... And how 's Sasuke and Naruto. I am relieved to see that Haru and Kazuki had made it (at least for a moment) but I can't wait to know are our main characters...
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  • From roro237 on June 16, 2012
    Talk about a roll coaster:) That was amazing! All that stuff happening! I was in the zone I felt like I was with them on their small ship:) OH Queenie I truly loved it!! I made sure not to read a head at all I only let my eyes read one line at a time. So now I'm breathing a little easyer everyone is all right. I'll be nervous about the hit the Sakura took later. The lovey Haku-san being queen. He must have been secretly watching Ha-chan to know he need rest when he did. It hadn't really click for me that Ran was also there. Itachi knew how to put the crews together:) The title is perfect. Another great adventure with our litter and crew ^_^
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 16, 2012
    Chapter 22. Mannah, I am speechless after reading this chapter. All I can say is: Wow! Haru is amazing. I hope Itachi and the others made it out. I hate Orochimaru more than ever right now.

    Excellent work, Mannah, and I really look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - NobodysAingyl on June 16, 2012
    I'm re-reading 'In the cold of space you find the heat of suns' and just chapter 27. I'm reviewing here, because I don't know if you read reviews for the earlier stories in the series.

    The author's note at the end made me smile. Yes, this storyline has moved far away from the original characters, but you know what? That's not a bad thing. I can see every character behaving in the ways you write them, yet still being who they are. Their experiences develop who they are, yet I still see the haughty Sasuke in the incarnation you've designed, the personality of our beloved #1 surprising ninja in the hybrid version, and so much of the others in their counterparts.

    You asked your readers if they'd keep reading if you kept writing and (as if the reviews following weren't enough xD) the answer is yes. Yes, yes, a thousand times yes. This spacer world is so vibrant, the characters alive in ways I rarely see in fanfic, and the plot so addictive, that my impatience to get my 'hands' on the next installment of Leader prompted me to start over and follow the crew and friends from the very beginning. I'll be sad when the story ends, but the journey has been mind-blowing. I can't wait to see where they go and how everything will ultimately end. Thank you so much for sharing your vision with us.

    Regarding Leader, Madara is making me SOOOOO mad and I'm eagerly waiting for when his cover story is blown and he's revealed for the lying, manipulative, greedy bastard he really is. This is a good thing, because while I love reading fanfic and can be drawn into the stories, this is one of the few that can draw real emotional reactions out of me. Keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - eunmook on June 15, 2012
    eeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagggggghhhh!!!! Does that count as a review? And you've got me going back to the first story all over again.
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  • From GreenEyedCat on June 14, 2012
    RIPP HIM TO PIECES!!! I want it all to go without anyone leaving the ship but I would als like to see them all on the Planet like Robinson Crusoe just with a Family :-)
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 14, 2012
    Chapter 21. I knew something bad was coming and here it is. Also, I had a bad feeling when I saw the title of Part III. I just didn't think it would have come so soon.

    So, Orochimaru rears his ugly head once again. I wonder how they are going to get out of this situation alive.

    I loved it when Itachi called Sasuke "Sasu-chan". By the way, that was a good idea Haku had about dressing Itachi up as Sasuke.

    Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter and I'm really looking forward to the next update. I'm going to keep my fingers crossed that everything will be okay.
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  • From ANON - maliya on June 13, 2012
    Oh, Haku, Itachi! There are no words to express my admiration for them. Mannah, you are making me cry, is Itachi really going to sacrifice himself? Haku is a beautiful character, tough exterior soft interior (like Yoshino and Sumiko, characters that I love too) Beautiful Haku and Itachi, I don’t want you to suffer no more!

    I am a little shock at the professionalism of Sasuke and the maturity that showed the Big Litter. I was almost waiting for Naruto to go all crazy over his kids. I don’t want them to be separate but at the same time I can’t wait to see the drama and the craziness that is coming.

    Thank you so much for your hard work!!


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