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By : mannahpierce
  • From Telynaayuri on June 23, 2012
    i love shika in this. he just knows subconciously that its Izuna's" fault. although how can "izuna" out think him? isnt shika's job to think about all the possibilities? also why do they tell "izuna" everything thing that they do in detail? u would think he WAS Uchiha-sama.
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  • From ANON - cynaga on June 23, 2012
    Ch 24. OMG. :(
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey on June 23, 2012
    I know I haven't commented in a while, but that's because I have been SPEECHLESS these past few chapters. With Sasuke and everyone else incapacitated and Shikamaru worrying about Neji, who is kidnapped, oh my god this is just... Excellent Writing, Mannah-san. I can not wait for the next chapter.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 23, 2012
    CH 24. I love when everything happens in such a crazy pace!!! And totally love Asuma!
    ‘Klenn’s Arts Centre’ – wow… just… wow. At first just the name gave thills but thinking about what actually IS stored in there….
    Shikamaru’s reaction to Madara’s flirty manipulations are (were) slightly disappointing considering his ‘talk’ with Naruto… I always thought that if there is a man whose brain is actually in his head instead of pants than it would be Shika (such a brain… ach…)…. I was wrong. Why does he have to answer every question that this sleazy man asks… Apparently Kakashi didn’t teach him well enough… But then again my jaw dropped when he said “I hate you!” to Madara. It was brilliant!!!
    And even though I sometimes think stuff like “Neji is not enough for Shika” …. I love him too at the moment. The way Madara treated him makes me want to kick something… And I really hope he wil be fine… not just for Shika’s sake!
    And the fact that Madara does THAT to Izuna’s name….. it kills me.



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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 23, 2012
    Chapter 24. I feel like they walked right into Madara's trap this time. First with Sasuke and Naruto and the children taking off on their own. And then Neji and Shikamaru's relationship being on the rocks no thanks to Izuna/Madara's "crush" on Shikamaru. And now Neji's been kidnapped and Shikamaru is feeling vulnerable, not just for Neji being taken but the fact that there has been no communication from Sasuke. I honestly have no idea how the good guys are going to come out on top of this one. Madara's too smart and he's got everyone fooled. Plus, he's got the help of Orochimaru and the Akatsuki on his side. Please tell me we're going to have a happy ending when all is said and done here, Mannah.

    Please, keep up the amazing work, and I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From roro237 on June 23, 2012
    OMG! WoW!! I hate that old imposture. But his plan was sound. That was a lot of stuff going on wOw!!! I loved every word:) I have to tell you that,that was the first time 'Waiting' every had my heart beating like crazy! Now the plan is in full swing huh! This chapter was amazing wOw! Loved it ^_^
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on June 22, 2012
    Ok, this is a great development, maybe Sumiko will allow Sai to go into the restricted places Haru doesn't let him go in the household. I feel like Sai will be able to prevent something oriole from happening in the coming 15 days. I'm glad that Sumiko is growing and her and Haru are getting along. Haru as a parent is wonderful. I really really really like Sai.


    Ja till next time, I'ma take a break again. Maybe till school starts so I have something wonderful to occupy my mind. We shall see if I can wait that long.
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on June 22, 2012
    Oh sweet baby Jesus, someone stop this man. Shikamaru would be a wreck if Haru, Naruto and Sasuke were to perish. Damn Sasuke and his need to be honorable. Thank the lord for Naruto and his amazing nose. I love how Kazuki is a mini Naruto, and I know I say that a lot but it's the truth.

    Ja till chapter 17
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on June 22, 2012
    Oh man, I'm right there with Naruto and Haru. It feels so weird with the big litter all broken up. I feel bad that out of the three only one believes that Sai has feelings. I loke him at first I didn't know how he was going to fit into the story but now I can't imagine him not being there. They grow up so fast, poor Haru he's going to be the runt of the litter for a while. It sucks when you grow older and apart, then you start to realize things about your siblings you never saw before. Thanks for this wonderful chappie. I haven't abandoned you, just had to let some chapter accumulate ^__^

    Ja ne till next time
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  • From ANON - v on June 21, 2012
    Finally back online, having such a good time getting caught up on all the chapters i missed. Enjoyed Haru's story so much and loved that Five is now part of Uchiha and then started on Betrayal.... I want to say that I think your a wonderful author, your ability to connect the readers to your characters on an emotional level and the way you draw us into the storyline makes you my favorite author on AFF. That said... I'm so upset, I've had a sick feeling in my stomach and with every new chapter it gets worse and worse, and now sicko crazy man has the children...this is bad...so bad... and I'm so worried about Itachi, where is he?? What is he gonna do?? What if someone dies!!! Wha!t if sicko crazy man hurts the children!!! What is Madara going to do to Shikamaru and Neji ??
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  • From roro237 on June 20, 2012
    Wonderful! Sad and sweet at the same time. Oh and did I mention a touch of sexy:) The tears of Naruto and Sasuke that broke my heart. I didn't know the Sakura was so close to being boarded! Oh Queeny this is getting really good and most of all really Scary! I can't wait for Sasuke to fine out who's in cahoots with snake man. I'm ready no no I'm kidding I'm not ready but I'm holding on for what's coming:) I have to believe our litter will make it though this. I love that you gave us the real deal with the suits. That's real life baby:) You're the best! The title was dead on the money ^_^
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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 20, 2012
    Chapter 23. This is like when Pein kidnapped the children all over again but worse because Orochimaru is the kidnapper this time. And thank goodness those were cat hybrids and not those perverted bullmen. I still have nightmares about those guys and what they did to poor Itachi. Speaking of Itachi, I really hope he doesn't sacrifice himself to save Sasuke, but this is Itachi we're talking about, so it still may happen.

    Anyway, keep up the amazing work, Mannah, and I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 20, 2012
    Oh gods I loved the last sentence. I know it's true but it was good to hear it.
    The development makes me angry so I won't think about that. Who are th main targets? Is it really Sasuke, Haru and Hikau or maybe Shikamaru and Haru. Does Orochimaru know that Haru is a genius? When will he finally die....? So manny questions.... So manny answers ahead. You're a genius to make this story interesting for so long! I'm really impressed!
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  • From ANON - Coolio69 on June 18, 2012
    Heh, I just noticed the parallels.

    Great job weaving the threads like that, Madara and Sasuke. Hmm I haven't read canon in ages so I don't recall if Sasuke ever figures out that Madara is evil or if he remains blind to it all.

    It's kinda surprising how he allows himself to be used by Maddy-chan like that. I hope things go differently here. Well Who knows what you've got planned.

    Keep up the good work!

    Coolio
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  • From ANON - Coolio69 on June 18, 2012
    Love your story - great world and great trilogy! Now onto the current chapter comments.

    At first I was like "Who's in the pod? Who's in the pod? I can't wait until they come out of the pod! Wonder what they'll be like? I hope they're nice! Can't wait until they're out of the pod!" But now I'm like "I wish they'd never found that pod! I hope they shove him back in the pod and forget they ever found him! I wish they'd never opened the pod! Or trusted him that much." heh he hasn't even done anything yet and I'm thinking like this. Incredible.
    Keep going I wanna see if This guy gets his. I hope he does-before he gets a chance to do anything....
    Great sory again.

    Thanks for sharing,

    Coolio69
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