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By : mannahpierce
  • From daughterofvirgo on June 30, 2012
    Chapter 26. What an ending! Mannah, you have done it again! Awesome job as always. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - eunmook on June 30, 2012
    Wow! You so totally cannot end it there!!! Great job with ratcheting up both the tension and the optimism with everyone rallying together to protect Shika from Madara. Also, kinda quick with Izuna revealing his reality, not at all subtle like one would expect from a guy who's been waiting at least a millenia or so. Did he switch his tissue sample with Izuna's? And if so, would checking him against his sons's reveal his real identity? Or at least expose his false one?
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  • From satterb on June 29, 2012
    Just wanted to thank you for updating this wonderful story. Theres nothing I can say because this story is soooo good, my comments could not do you justice. LOL Thanks for all your hard work.
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  • From ANON - eunmook on June 28, 2012
    How absurd is it to hope Itachi managed to tow the mulligan drive and improver away from the Oak?
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  • From roro237 on June 27, 2012
    I had to cracker-up at Naruto:) He tells Sasuke not to give into anger! After Naruto woke Sasuke's reply was the best. What happen dobe. I loved it! That's our boys:) That helped to take some of the anxiety away:) This is such a suspense fill adventure Queeny! I love it and you!! ^_^
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 27, 2012
    I love their plan! I can’t wait to see the ripping head off part. I’m sure it will be lovely only if you really give us a chance to see it. The whole chapter full of stress and tension… It was hard…
    Can’t wait to see Naruto in action. He didn’t have much chance to show off in an awfully long time… I hope that even though he had been paralyzed he is still impossibly strong and fit, more even than the kits! He’s Naruto after all!!!! (Maybe no Uzumaki and maybe without Kyuubi in his chakra system but still…)
    Thank you for telling something about Kuuya. I always wondered what kind of people are other kits (other than Kazuki and Yuki) and now we have something about Kuuya. Nice!

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  • From daughterofvirgo on June 27, 2012
    Chapter 25. Mannah, your genius has amazed me once again. Such an exciting chapter. You are the best. Keep up the amazing work, and I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - eunmook on June 27, 2012
    Oh yay, they have a plan! Good to know Kuuya's safe, and also so glad they're on the ship with their captured children. Unless you have some horrendous reversals planned, things are already looking up. I'll trust Shika to keep hating on Madara, and wouldn't it be awesome if he was outwitted/caught out by SAI and Sumiko. That just leaves Neji, who you might have been phasing out for a long time now...
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  • From ANON - eilidhdawn on June 27, 2012
    sounds like a plan to me
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  • From ANON - greeneyedcat on June 24, 2012
    Shikas brain is better than even he can understand. I hope Sai can get into action soon now that Sumiko is informed. Poor Neji and Go Sakura our hope is on you.
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  • From ANON - eunmook on June 24, 2012
    oh no no no no... though I guess we were all getting too complacent and comfortable. But I do kinda (not really) wish that I had encountered this series a year from now, when its all complete and I can read it straight for three days like I did with all the rest of it.
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  • From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on June 24, 2012
    Great chapter!

    I love seeing how Shika's mind works. Though I don't like seeing him so upset. I hope Sumiko will step up so Madara won't have a chance to. I get the feeling however that Madara may have seriously underestimated Shika and his capabilities. I want to see the vengeful side of him again. Like with the Snuffers, but more so. I think it's very effective to have Neji abducted whilst he and Shika weren't seeing completely eye-to-eye. Will make for an even more guilt-ridden Shika.

    Thank you! Can't wait til Wednesday!
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  • From ANON - maliya on June 24, 2012
    When Shikamaru said "I hate you" my heart skipped a beat.

    Poor Su chan, she is going to have rough times with Neji gone and a depressive brother to care. Thanks god she has the toughness and persistence of Yoshino, the intelligence of Shikaku and the help and friendship of Sai.

    Madara is a crazy bastard. I want him gone so much. How dare he use Klenn’s Arts Centre for his own maquiavelic plans? I still can't believe how easily Uchida fell in his hands, what are his plans now? What does he wants to achieve besides regain uchida’s wealth?

    Thanks the lady that Sasuke, Naruto, Haru, Hikaru, Kazuki, Ryuu and Kuuya are free. I’m sure that they will be able to make contact with the allied crews.

    Thanks again for your hard work!
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  • From satterb on June 23, 2012
    This is the part I've been dreading. I have come to love and care for these characters so much. I now look forward to your updates so that i can see the bad guys fall. But that also means that the story will be over. So sad. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Thank you for all your hard work. This has been one of my very favorite series of stories since I've been reading fan fiction. I will miss this story when it's over.
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  • From ANON - eilidhdawn on June 23, 2012
    enjoyed latest chapter very much
    looking forward to seeing upcoming chapters
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