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By : mannahpierce
  • From roro237 on July 07, 2012
    This is why you are the Great Queen of Naruto Space Universe. I have tears in my eyes:) For a lot of reasons. Kuuya is wonderful he didn't want to hurt anyone like To-chan. The toad tribe huh?! You're the best when it come to using the old stuff with a new twist. Gama tribe was brilliant!! I was so touched by Ka-chan and Haru conversation. I had never thought about the best friend brother thing like that before. Then the talk about the kits living only one third of a pure blood life span. That always make me sad:) I know it's silly. I just can't help it Queenie:) It's also why I love your story! Oh OMG I loved today adventures! Scrap started it all. ^_^
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  • From ANON - eunmook on July 07, 2012
    "with huge, brightly coloured toad hybrids" - so relaxing - this is the first chapter in a long while which feels like it's letting you take a breath again - a child sized adventure, with 'nice like choza san' toads, is just what the doctor ordered.

    Loving Kazuki and Kuuya and how we're suddenly getting deeper into the litter as individuals all. Enjoyed it so immensely!
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  • From daughterofvirgo on July 07, 2012
    If writing was easy, we'd all be best-selling authors, and that wouldn't be any fun. I think the difficulty of any art form is what makes it fun, gives the artist (or writer in this case) something to motivate them. Even when the process of creating said art drives us nuts!

    Anyway, regarding Chapter 28. Mannah, I know you're probably getting tired of me saying this by now, but you have amazed me yet again! The planet you created was stunning. I thought at first it would be like the Mannah Pierce version of Kirigakure because the planet was all water. But let me say I am excited to see those hybrids in this saga. I have wondered for a while if you were going to include them, especially since they are such a big part of the "Naruto" canon-verse, and you did! You've made my day for sure.

    And before I go, the ending definitely showed how Sasuke and Naruto's kids have matured. Those were some pretty heavy things that were being discussed at the end.

    Anyway, keep up the awesome work, Mannah, and I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From roro237 on July 05, 2012
    Me and the boys (Naruto&Sasuke) thank you for giving us a quickie:) I need that so I know how much they need that:) I'm laughing as I wrote that! I'm happy with the progress. The young ones are safe in space. Haru and crew are going where the Lancet is. I would say my 'Outlook' is hopeful ^_^ PS Semen floating was something funny to imagine:)
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  • From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on July 05, 2012
    Yay! Go Team Sasuke!
    So glad everything is looking up now, if only slightly. It was also nice to touch bases with several of the groups.
    Waiting with bated breath, as always, for the next chapter. :)
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on July 04, 2012

    No Madara? THANK YOU!!! (although I am curious about how he is going to act toward Shika after what he had done…)
    I can’t believe Naruto actually had the ‘thingy…’ that was good! I wonder what would they do if he hadn’t… They probably would do it anyway.
    And the sex scene with no gravity was hilarious and very original!!! And the comment about cleaning… well… ha ha ha! who would have thought about that in this situation anyway….
    Shika was so cool and understanding about Sai. That was nice. I knew Haru was worried too much.
    Neji is ‘safe’? What does that mean?
    I hope that Kazuki and Haru will find Kuuya since we just get to actually know him a bit….
    This chapter was really great!

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  • From daughterofvirgo on July 04, 2012
    Chapter 27. Mannah, you have amazed me yet again. I don't know how you do it. Yes, I do. You're extremely talented and a genius.

    Your characterization of Shikamaru and Sai convinced me that they would work well together at anytime. I loved the humor with Naruto and Sasuke, especially given what has happened on their end lately. And you know I loved the romance (and yaoi) between Naruto and Sasuke. Zero gravity sex is obviously awesome. The cliffhanger is going to eat at me until Saturday, so you have got to update as soon as you can Saturday, okay?

    Thank you for another awesome chapter and I'll be waiting for the next one.
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  • From ANON - cynaga on July 04, 2012
    Ch 27 Said is so much fun and plot is really getting good!
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  • From ANON - eunmook on July 04, 2012
    Oh, boy. What now? Not so abandoned planet? Or is this gonna connect to super tronnies and SAI somehow. And really, stuck in arch-enemy's mothership, toss your kids out in space, then have a quickie?! Not that I'm complaining, just... very intrigued by your plotting process.

    I waited all day like a little kid dying to tinkle (without the crotch holding tho'). And then I gave up checking my inbox and checked directly here instead. Halfway through the new chapter, I got the email alert. Good day. (or at least the last half hour of it.) I've been suffering from withdrawal since saturday, caught myself almost beginning to read the original a couple of times - close call, that.
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  • From satterb on July 02, 2012
    Taaaa Daaaa! Yay! This is what I was waiting for. I'm so happy Sai has made his presence known, and good for Su-chan for doing the right thing. I love this story....can't say it enough. Thanks for updating.
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  • From Telynaayuri on June 30, 2012
    i hope with the mind of sai and shika they can kick "izuna's" plan to the shitter! shika/neiji ftw!
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  • From ANON - eilidhdawn on June 30, 2012
    aarrgghhh i just wanna shake some of these overprogrammed clan members
    there's no proof sasuke and naruto are dead; just missing
    good chapter can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - çynaga on June 30, 2012
    Ch26. So sad!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 30, 2012
    YES! Sumik finally did something brilliant!!! Haru should have done that long time ago! It was… thirilling I CAN’T WAIT TO SEE SHIKA’s eaction!!
    And who and when came up with what SAI means???? That was great!
    But still… I’m so… so ANGRY! Why won’t Madara just die for whatever reason...? He could fell of the stairs (if they have some) or choke on his dinner…. (-_-) He’s disgusting.
    Shika was great… but there was a gigantic miscalculation on my part. I was sure Shika was sworn to Sasuke, not to the Uchiha. I was so wrong… It’s … tragic…
    I’m glad Madara didn’t rape him and I’m super glad that now Shika knows that he’s not all that great. Now he, Kashi and Asuma and the rest can create some kind of resistance movement…or something. I know that those older ones are often too traditional but THEY are different, aren’t they? And now they have Sai! I have a reason to live until Wednesday!

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  • From roro237 on June 30, 2012
    OMG!!! You know I'm laughing my a-off at the old man getting puked on:) That was my favorite of this chapter. As time goes on his true colors are coming out. The way he has changed the table seating for briefing. That is something everyone can see. I hope Shika will put the pieces together and realize that is not Izuna-sama. I'm so proud of Shika even in the face of all the madness he knew it was wrong to be touched that way. I like that so much because it's loyalty to one's partner. God's knows that is rear these days:) WoW little sister has really grown up! If I didn't know any better I would say she is helping keep Shika grounded. I hope Shika didn't give the old bastard all the funds. Queeny I absolutely loved it! ^_^
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