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By : mannahpierce
  • From roro237 on July 14, 2012
    Poor Haru-chan getting pranked with leeches. The Frog tribe is just wonderful!! I hadn't thought about Sasuke needing exercise well Naruto to. Something has to give soon for our boys. Hopeful the plan to set mini bombs up will give them a little relief. Sai has turned out to be a great help so far. Naruto is a smart cookie. The message he sent Shika and realizing what has been going on. My love for that man grows all the time:) Space Queen I loved it as usual! This chapter didn't reek havoc on my heart:) My 'responses' to the ship in the spaceport is please let it be one of ours! You know I adore your titles. I always try to figure out what you were thinking:) I think this time it was Naruto's response.(of course I would) I love everything about your story ^_^
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  • From daughterofvirgo on July 14, 2012
    Chapter 30. No, Mannah, not a cliffhanger again. Now I'm going to agonize until Wednesday gets here to find out what happens next. But that's okay. I'm sure no matter how long the wait, the next chapter will be awesome. I'll just have to be patient. :)


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  • From ANON - eunmook on July 13, 2012
    so close... is it almost halfway through the story already? It's weird how it feels both like it's going too slow and too fast at the same time. Or is it just me? I like how everyone has gone on the down low, and thank god Shikamaru's caught on to Izuna - I hope it doesn't take him too long to figure out the leak - especially since he owns the stellar exchange. He was a total superhero in the last book, feels a bit like he's lost his cape in this one so far: he's being normal smart.
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  • From Telynaayuri on July 12, 2012
    they trust him with info so blindly. they dont even know "izuna" enough to really trust him unlike with sasuke who they've known since he was a child... argh! they aggravate me(the crew minus shika) but i love this story.
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  • From ANON - cynaga on July 12, 2012
    Ch 29 Outstanding!!!
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  • From roro237 on July 11, 2012
    O M G!!!!!! I'm on the edge of my seat at this very moment! WoW! Please let Sasuke get the message first!! That crazy old sucker:) Setting and planning what's going to be changed when he takes over. That just pisses me off! The 'decision' that Shika made to go talk to Hinata was the best! I realize just how important the oath was when Shika gave up all or most of the money. So for him to make that decision and not tell the news of Neji it had to be a tough one. Queenie this episode was the best! Thank you for another great adventure ^_^
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  • From satterb on July 11, 2012
    I really, really, really can't wait to see Madara's plan fail! I can't wait to see him and the others, Orochimaru, Karin and others meet their sticky ends!!!! But I don't want this story to come to an end either. I love it soooo much. Thank you for your hard work. I wonder when or even if Sai is going to shed some light on what is going on with Madara/Izuna. He's the only member of the household that Madara is not aware of and has the means to look in on what's really going on. Love it and your talent.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on July 11, 2012
    So good to hear that Shika was thinking about killing Madara! I liked that. I wonder for how long Neji is safe…..
    “ Between them, they had to persuade Sasuke not to step aside.” – I’ve been waiting to hear that but I was sure that Kakashi would be the first with this attitude.

    And finally: Goddamn it, why did Kamatari said that through the intercom? He should tell it only to Shikamaru… I hope soon others will join Shika’s front without fear. The New Uchiha is NOT just Uchiha. It’s not the same thing and they belong to the new Uchiha. I hope they’ll understand that too and act accordingly.It’s all so exciting, especially now when at least some good thing are happening!!!

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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey on July 11, 2012
    omg... Sasuke rescuing his children.. omg I can't take the suspense. Another well executed chapter Mannah-san. I can not wait for more! :D
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  • From daughterofvirgo on July 11, 2012
    Chapter 29. I can't even begin to comment on this chapter in fear of dumping a whole lot of spoilers in my review. And I don't want to do that in case a new reader happens to read the reviews before they read the actual story. I will say that I am overjoyed by the good news regarding a certain member of the crew that was revealed this chapter. There is also a definite battle of the wits going on between two key players. And the ending is making me crave the next chapter. I am going to be gnawing my fingernails until Saturday gets here, I swear.

    Anyway, please keep up the amazing work, Mannah, and I will be waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Slynx on July 11, 2012
    Aaah, it's so exciting! You really have a thing for cliffhangers, don't you? *grins*
    I love how Shikamaru is starting to realize what's going on and can't wait to see what'll happen next.
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on July 11, 2012
    Very exciting - there is so much going on! Sorry I have not reviewed in awhile; I've been traveling and I can't seem to submit a review on my phone. Evidently, it doesn't think I'm a real person. I have now followed your story on four continents.

    Uchiha seems much more powerful than Orochimaru, yet Orochimaru and allies keep forcing our heroes into mortal danger. It is, of course, because Orochimaru has no scruples, no regard for life other than his own, even his own prints. Sort of like a suicide bomber's master in our own universe.

    I had a little bout of mourning a few chapters ago when I thought Itachi's death was imminent (and you still may kill him off, O Goddess of the Uchiha AU). Itachi was a bad candidate for rehabilitation (selective amnesia? really?) but you pulled it off.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on July 09, 2012
    That was so sweet! Such a relief to have this little adventure break from all the bad things. I hope they'll meet Gamakichi and Gamatatsu!
    Kazuki voiced all those things I was always worried about. He's so great and he deserves all the best and he never actually gets it....
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  • From Telynaayuri on July 07, 2012
    so cute. the ending of this chap was so cute.
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  • From satterb on July 07, 2012
    You updated this before I had a chance to comment on the previous post. I love Sai. I loved the interaction between Sai and Shika. I'm also looking forward to learning more about the frog-men. Thanks for all your hard work on this story. I love it so. I'm sad that we are going through the bad times in the story but I still dread the end of the story as well. Look forward to more.
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