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By : mannahpierce
  • From roro237 on July 21, 2012
    That was wonderful! I'm so happy Neji is back with Shika! If at one time Shika was feeling like he wasn't in love with Neji. I think now he knows he's doesn't just love Neji but he is in love with him! Than goodness for our 'Allies'. Garner-san was right on time having the ship close by. Shika is the A-Team you know what they say "I love it when a plan comes together". I didn't know Shika had that plan going on?! He was able to get all that done without old bastard fining out:) I can tell how he and Asuma and Kakashi are all on the same page without words being spoken. Queenie you have so much excitement going on in every front! I LOVE it! Of course Yo-chan with the snake print. The kids on the Toad Planet. Itachi and crew going thought gods know what! Don't for get about my heart condition:) You know I'm teasing you I love every bit of it! Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ Episode 32 was fantastic ^_^
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  • From ANON - Slynx on July 21, 2012
    AAaaah! This chapter was awesome. I'm dancing on my chair. I love how Asuma just took back control and how the entire crew dislikes Madara. And then the end! Awww, it will be good for the two of them to be together again.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on July 21, 2012
    Chapter 32. Mannah, the ending, please tell me I didn't imagine it. That's really him, right? He's really back? I'm so relieved and happy. ^-^

    And it was nice to see Garner again. I was wondering how he was coping.

    Anyway, thank you for another awesome, amazing, wonderful chapter, Mannah. I can't wait until the next update, and I will definitely check out your new original story.
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  • From ANON - cynaga on July 21, 2012
    Ch 32 wonderful!!!!!
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  • From Phoenixewolf on July 19, 2012
    I love this! I have been so busy lately that I haven't been able to keep up with the updates, I just read several chapters and am so entranced by the story that I can't wait for more. I found that I was really getting into it, in my head I was yelling at Shikamaru to think its not Izuna it's Madara.Lol. I am completely loving where this is going, you are doing an absolutely fantastic job, I look forward to reading more! Thanks.
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  • From satterb on July 19, 2012
    This story is getting too exciting for words! I can't express how much I love reading it. I'm thrilled every time I see it updated. Thanks for all your hard work.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on July 18, 2012
    Damn, every time minkies appear I get too emotional. I feel so bad for them all. They’re cute and harmless…

    It was surprising but also very nice that some things finally went relatively well… unfortunately it was a short lived relief. It can’t be happening, right? Orochimaru won’t hurt Yoshimi… right? And how the whole bonding process is activated? Why did Naruto bond with Sasuke? Because he was seme for the first time? How did it happen? I always thought that it required some emotions…. Or something.

    Is it really possible for Orochimaru to bond the kits to himself? Even though they hate him? …. (Rany…. – it’s in my native)

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  • From roro237 on July 18, 2012
    OMG! I felt like I was watching the anime:) That was so fantastic!! Really!!! I'm heart sick that Yo-chan isn't there. My god that was an intense infiltration of that ship! I'm trembling a little still:) If I was reading your book I wouldn't be able to put it down after that chapter. I would just be late for work or call off:) Thank goodness you're in control or I would be in trouble:) Space Queen I loved! I can't wait for the next installment. Oh I almost forgot you were very 'stealthy' with that cliffy. I didn't see if coming ^_^
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  • From ANON - AflyingMonkey on July 18, 2012
    No! We were so close! Poor Yo-chan... I just want everyone to be together again... Another excellent chapter Mannah-san. Can not wait for the next one! :D
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  • From ANON - eunmook on July 18, 2012
    I enjoyed this chapter so much - everything, from the last column 'to record if they worked properly', to the colour coded plans, to the pirouetting minky with the broom, was just lovely. As if seeing them back in action as a team weren't enough, you clearly had a lot of fun writing this chapter, just like I had reading it. But the giddiness ends with the last bit - coz yo chan is still with the Orochimaru print, as are Dan, Rin and Akemi...
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  • From daughterofvirgo on July 18, 2012
    Chapter 31. I knew Naruto and Sasuke had it too easy. I wonder what they are going to do now. Curse you, Orochimaru.

    As usual, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I am looking forward to Saturday's update.
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  • From ANON - eunmook on July 15, 2012
    Hoo boy... everybody's gearing up and getting their act together now. Poor Haru, he always suffers the worst. Another excellent chapter, and now I want more, more, more.
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  • From ANON - cynaga on July 15, 2012
    Ch 30 So good!!!!
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  • From ANON - maliya on July 15, 2012
    I am so exciting about the toad hybrids world. Is very refreshing to go to a different and new place of the world you have created. Gamariki is so sweet with Haru!

    I love how Shikamaru cares for Sai as well, maybe because I didn’t perceive Sai as a child before. For a seven type genius (who is supposed to have so many difficulties in the social interaction) Shikamaru sure knows how to make friends.

    I don’t know how Sasuke and Naruto are going to resolve the situation they are in, but I am looking forward to it.

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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on July 14, 2012
    CH.30

    This whole part about the Gama – tribe is incredibly interesting! It’s so new and… great! Poor Haru… I guess nerds are always picked on even when no one even knows what the nerd is…. But he was brave and cool. Very mature too! Bravo!
    It’s so sweet that Shika treats Sai like just another kid. He’s already a part of the family. When you know how to make friend you can make the most incredible family. Theirs already contain purebreds and hybrids, Uchihas and Hyuuga, two guys in one body, two typed geniuses, now even an AI and one unidentified overly lovable and unexplainable creature that put it all together (known as Naruto)
    I’m in awe of the way you always give us what we want in a certain intervals of time (chapters). Things like smut and adventure. You always keep it perfectly balanced, The fun, the drama, and all other things. I wonder if you have maybe some schedule to keep it right…? Or maybe only I see it that way… but I hope not.
    I liked it whe Shik recognized how important for Sai’s development as a person was the fact that he had been practically raised by children. Children are honest. It was the best thing that could happen to Sai I guess…. He experience a real childhood. I think that emotionally he will grow up along with the litter….
    I guess it’s pointless to write every im how I can’t wait for the next update, because you already know it. But still can always say how happy and gratefull I am for this story and regular updates. BIG THANK YOU!
    This chapter was really great. Sasuke and Naruto with a plan and Shika looking for a traitor. I hope he already knows who is the one….



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