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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - Niëlaro on July 29, 2012
    Aww, I really feel for all of them. Poor Yasushi. It must be so hard for him.

    And Shika. I love how you portrayed the workings of his mind, how it all comes crashing into him when he finally takes down the walls. I'm just really glad Neji is there for him!

    Another amazing chapter and I can't wait until the next one.
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  • From ANON - eunmook on July 29, 2012
    Oh yay, they're not heading to orochimaru. And soon they'll all be together and then they'll kick some major millennnia old ass. Can't wait. Loved the end, and the constant references to Shika's fixation with Neji's hair.
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  • From ANON - Dawn on July 28, 2012
    Finally had a chance to catch up on my missed chapters!!! :) And this last on was MIND BLOWING!!! I think I saw stars too!!! :) As always my favored writer.... FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!! Thanks so much for your chapters!!! Now get back to work... MUAH!

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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on July 28, 2012
    ch. 34.

    I must say that when I was reading In the cold of space I didn’t like this whole ‘bonding’ thing. I thought it was a little unfair. To me it was like Tristan and Izolde story. Like it was less than a real love. Now, from what Naruto had said, I can tell it’s not less. It so much more.
    Thank you. It was good to hear it.
    Yasushi – so smart and so brave!

    About Hinata – is she going to stay with them from now on? Will she fall for Naruto, like Hinata in anime?
    I hope that Shika and Neji will meet with Iruka and Kakashi soon. It would be such a relief. I hope Shika won’t be afraid to talk about his opinion of Izuna to Kakashi or Iruka. They are the closest ‘family’ members. It’s obvious that they will follow only Sasuke no matter what. Even Izuna knows it, so Shika should too. He’s smarter than that bastard.

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  • From ANON - cynaga on July 28, 2012
    Ch 33 & 34. Wow!!!!!!! More please.... :)
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  • From daughterofvirgo on July 28, 2012
    Chapter 34. Everyone is starting to get back together now--Naruto and Sasuke and their children and Neji and Shikamaru. Seems like it won't be long before they are able to take down Izuna/Madara.

    Keep up the awesome work, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - eunmook on July 26, 2012
    so delightful in so many different ways - the kits with their lists, and I love how Haku clearly still has it, if even Haru can't deny his sexiness with his hair down in a low slung sarong. I really hope Itachi is planning something truly devious and Uchiha-ly vengeful. All Orochimarus need to be squished like bugs from both sides - between the crew of the Oak and the rest of Uchiha left behind. And then they all need to come back home and stomp on stoopid old Madara. and then dancing with To chan! And nobody dies. Or however you see the story going...
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  • From roro237 on July 25, 2012
    I got a lump in my throat trying not to cry. This was sad sweet and loving all in one:) At this point I don't know who I dislike more snake man or old man?! I couldn't think of a word strong enough so I'll just use that:) It seem like Ka-chan was doing a good job of 'Intimidation' himself on more than one occasion. I loved that he raced in to save his brother. Our litter has grown up beautifully! Space Queen I'm moving and I wont have inter-net until Tuesday the 31st. Can you feel my pain?:) I'm going to miss Saturday!! IF I'm still alive on Tuesday night you will hear from me:) Oh and Haku-san wOw! I could just imagine how down right sexy he was looking ^_-
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on July 25, 2012
    ch.33

    I knew it. Why if something good happens there always something bad follows… It’s life, I guess…
    It was so…. Unbearable to see poor kit on his knees in front of Orochimaru….
    Kazuki is straight? Disappointing fact. I was so curious who’s on his list.
    When Haru said that Gama-sama is only protecting his tribe and that Sasuke would do the same I think he was wrong. Naruto would never let him make such a decision. Never. They would look for some other way. They would never sent away people who are in need of help.

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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey on July 25, 2012
    jsklfjdlsaj;fdklsajfdl Haru, Kazuki, and Kuuya all talking was so cute and brotherly and gave me all the amazing feelings. I can not wait for another amazing chapter Mannah-san! :D

    (P.S. Orochimaru is a dirty bastard and I can not wait for Uchiha to pulverize him.)
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  • From daughterofvirgo on July 25, 2012
    Chapter 34. I just want to murder Orochimaru right now. But despite what they saw happening to their brother, it is good that the boys can have a moment where they can be boys.

    Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on July 23, 2012
    ch.32 NEEEEEEEEEEEEEJIIIIIIIIII! So good…. Shika unsure of how Neji would greet him? Ridiculous and sweet…

    Wonderful chapter, so full of hope and that… drive… like an energy drink!

    Shika as an uncontrollable force – so enchanting and cool. I loved that. I wish I could see more of that determined Shikamaru. He’s beautiful when he has a purpose, a goal… No wonder that he is so attractive to powerful people like Klenn or even straight Madara, who can’t see past the tip of his own nose... Madara unfortunately is smart enough to see it all too…. That Sasuke’s crew (equal FAMILY) will not follow him. EVER. I actually hoped he wouldn’t realize that for a bit longer but…

    It gives me a thrill when I think of possibilities how brilliant can Shikamaru be with a tool like Sai (no offence for Sai!)
    Shika getting away from Madara is such a HUGE relief!!! And Kiba was sweet when he offered to go with him. Maybe he is not just a babysitter. Maybe he wants to do something more too. And now they have Neji and they will meet Kakashi and Iruka…. It’s like the new beginning…
    Garner Parrad – touching and sad but it’s always so great to hear about Klenn. He was the most amazing OC I’ve ever read about. His death was so unwelcomed…

    Ps. I’m sorry, I haven’t got a time to read Jason yet…. But I will!

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  • From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on July 22, 2012
    NEJI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    So glad those two are reunited! I'm really hoping its a case of absence makes the heart grow fonder cos they are so cute!
    It was nice to see an apparence by Garner too, i like that he is his own character rather than just a part of Klenn's.
    I forsee tension between Uchiha and Hyuga as Sasuke now has Neji and Hinata...hmm i wonder how long that will stay secret?

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - eunmook on July 22, 2012
    oh yay oh yay oh yay! So many reasons to celebrate - not least that you've got another story up... And then to top it all off, Neji's back!
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey on July 21, 2012
    I'VE MISSED YOU NEJI!!!! Oh mah Jesus things are definitely closing in on Madara. I wonder/worry about Naruto and Sasuke and all of the kits. I can not wait for the next update Mannah-san. :D
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