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By : mannahpierce
  • From roro237 on August 04, 2012
    OMG!! Queenie what the? I didn't see that in the works at ALL! Shika and Neji-san breaking up! You know I loved it when you throw monkey wrench around:) I'm so so happy that Sasuke now knows about old man. I should have guess that Naruto would have sense his evil before he witnessed it first hand with Shika. Not wanting to hurt his beloved with that information. Did I ever tell you I'm in love with To-chan oh hell I love Papa to:) Little sister can still surprise me. I glad that is one less thing for Shika busy mind to worried about. Ok so now the plan has started! The 'messages' received:) I'm glued to my seat for the next step of the plan. Oh Great Space Queen of the Naruto Space Universe thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ I loved it ^_^
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  • From ANON - prettypurlpletiger on August 04, 2012
    I am glad that Sasuke has finally opened his eyes to the fact that Izuna is not a what he presented himself to be but to have so many people around him who thought this, but never said anything is just astounding. Shikamaru being so blinded by his twisted fascination/love for Sasuke being super imposes on Izuna is was had him so faithfully following every sugary sweet false word that came out of Izunas' mouth. It is sad to see the break up of Neji/Shika. Love can and does happen that way. It mainly appeared to happen though because Shika laid the groundwork from the beginning that who he really wanted was Sasuke but from the origin stories Shika didn't want Sasuke until Naruto was in the picture. It just seems as thought it is being geared up to have Naruto die and Shika be there. Out of everything that has happend in this amazing story, every amazing plot line and twist and incredible scientific imagining, this naruto/ Sasuke story will end up being about Shika waiting 30 years to be with Sasuke and everything neatly falls into place. naruto being a "Bara" hybrid had no special meaning? Sai's conciousness can't be transferred into a body? Said and Shika think alike.
    Poor Yoshi and Keizo being tortured by Orochimaru like Itachi was and they are children. This is a amazing story coming from a brilliant mind. Your ability to make your readers care about your characters is rare. Cold of Space, Tales, Real and Iterration will go down as some of my all time favorite "Books". Leader has been hard for me only because the years, trials and deaths that the Uchias have faced should have showed them that being naive about the world and people around them has always equaled death and destruction for them.
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on August 04, 2012
    Wow, that hit hard. You've been foreshadowing it forever, then you split Shikamaru and Neji up when one least expects it. Doesn't seem like it will be permanent, but who knows?
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  • From ANON - Dawn on August 04, 2012
    So glad they are finally seeing Izuna for what he is..... So sad to see Shika and Neji separate.... who will keep Shika grounded now??? Great Chapter as always...... :)
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  • From ANON - eunmook on August 04, 2012
    bittersweet. Are we really moving towards Shika being available for when Sasuke becomes alone?
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  • From ANON - Slynx on August 04, 2012
    Oh no, Shika letting Neji go makes me so sad! I really had not thought it would happen this way...

    I do love that everything is moving forward now; Sasuke starts to understand the situation and they have a plan to work with! I really do hope they'll make it.

    I understand that the writing gets difficult at times! And even though I look forward to the new chapters (with the impatience of a small child, I'll admit), I do think you should take all the time you need! I will wait and dance around happily every time you post something new.

    Thank you for writing this story!
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  • From ANON - cynaga on August 04, 2012
    Ch38 So Shika is free now and Sasuke knows about Izuna ... how can the writing slow down? ;)
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  • From daughterofvirgo on August 04, 2012
    Chapter 36. I'm sorry to hear the writing is being difficult, Mannah. But I'm sure you will be able to get back into the swing of things soon. You are an amazing writer with an incredible talent, so don't give up.

    Anyway, on to the chapter. Glad to see Sasuke has finally opened his eyes to the fact that "Izuna" isn't the good guy, after all. And the part with Shikamaru and Neji made me sad, but I understand. I'm having sort of a similiar situation with someone I love right now. Yes, we loved each other for a bit, but, now, things have changed and it is better if we go back to being friends. It sucks, but that's just the way it is.

    Please keep up the awesome work, Mannah, and I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Dawn on August 02, 2012
    Another oh nooooooooossssss chapter............. Love the cliff hangers!!! :) Hope some good lucks comes up soon

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  • From roro237 on August 02, 2012
    OH! MY god Space Queen that was a back breaker of a cliffy there:) When you said 'hazards' you weren't kidding. Baked snake! Queenie you're the best:) That was something I wouldn't have thought of in a million years:) Fried or on a stick but baked:) Another great chapter ^_^
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  • From roro237 on August 02, 2012
    Space Queen I missed you!!!! I was like the crew I knew you were there but I couldn't get to you to read you:) Plus and of course the int net was a day late getting set up. My heart was breaking when Papa and To-chan told them. Well I know for sure how handsomely beautiful Yuki-chan is if he reminded Papa of Haku!! When To-chan put the growl on it had the hair on the back of my neck standing up to:) I believe To-chan about the 'bond' it has to be heart and head. Neji was looking really sexy in bed with his hair layed out:) Then the way he brought Shika back from the edge was wOw! I loved every word ^_^
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  • From ANON - liby318 on August 02, 2012
    Sorry for the lack of reviews, however I have enjoyed the story and look forward to more chapters. Thanks for all the hard work!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on August 02, 2012
    ch. 35 - And i t was so nice and relaxing for a moment.... It made me want to watch some adventure movie, like Indiana Jones and the temple of doom... They're in trouble, aren't they? But if the enemies are just minkies and nekos then I thnk they have a chance. But... they're location will be revield... They ARE in trouble no matter what. The best way would be to hide but they probably don't have a good hide out... Maybe Riki will help. I wonder what would they do without him...
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  • From ANON - eunmook on August 02, 2012
    Whoa! How can already awesome keep getting awesomer and awesomer. Everything interesting is, and you're creating another brilliant and totally fascinating new world that pulls you in and leaves you wanting more.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on August 01, 2012
    Chapter 35. Oh, no! They've been betrayed. After avoiding all those crocodiles and snakes, this has to happen.

    I can't wait for the next update, Mannah. I really hope everything is going to be okay with Haru and company.
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