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By : mannahpierce

From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on August 25, 2012
39. Ok, I never considered that horrible option. I thought that Shika is too valuable to simply give him away. But Madara knows he can’t have him… It seems that the only option to save him would be to (aside from killing Madara of course0 to make him Sasuke’s beloved companion…. Can a person have two companions? I wonder if something could bloom between Sasuke and Shika if Naruto died.
But I hope that he will not, not in the story at least…..
It’s hard to wait the whole week, but it’s worth it.
Thank you for the update!

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From daughterofvirgo on August 25, 2012
Chapter 39. Madara is certainly a villain. I hope Shikamaru stays with Sasuke and Naruto until they return to Tarrasade. I hope Sasuke and Naruto are able to rescue the children soon before Orochimaru, well, you know.

Anyway, keep up the awesome work, Mannah, and I look forward to the next chapter.
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From ANON - sadie237 on August 25, 2012
Oh SQ that was so sweet and sad at the same time:) I felt choked up when Papa sat and watched Tsu-chan sleep:) Happy that everyone is still hanging in there. So old man wants a girl to be his assistant huh? Well it sounded like there could be a plant in the mix of applicant?! God I hope so:) Plus he wants to turn Shika in to centre. That bastard! My heart went in over drive when I heard about Haku-san. He's tough but everyone has a breaking point and I sure hope he can hold on a little longer. Itachi-san and Kis will be there to save him soon I just know it!!:) SQ I'm so glad to hear you're feel the wave of words once again:) That calls for a 'Yea Baby' ^_^
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From ANON - Ash on August 25, 2012
I'm glad you are inspired again. I vow to review (or even just message randomly!) every week until Leader is finished!

Thank you for not giving up.

Ash.
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From ANON - superflaj on August 24, 2012
been trying for 2 day to review but the site wouldn't let me. anyway, i read all of your stories , originals and naruto fandom and you are an amazing writer and story teller, i know i suck cos' i usually don't leave reviews even though every chapter has a great impact on me so i'm sorry, i'll try to do better, i guess i just think that my comments would be lame and therefore better not to be written but i get how it would feel for me to even get one "wow, this chapter was great" or just a "hello, i'm reading your story" so hi, i'm reading your story and since i met everebody on the Silver Leaf they have been my crew, family, partners througout their journey so please never feel discouraged 'cos you are briliant and if you ever write something outside of fanfiction i would really really like for you to sent an email so i can read that too. so, i'm very anxious for the next chapter, madara contacting centre, orochimaru print being a sadistic monster, Dan and them with the toad hybrids, Itachi..what is gonna happen next?
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From ANON - maliya on August 23, 2012
I would like to read the end of the story so so much. I know it must be very difficult to bring the series to an end, to make everything fit. Your work is amazing!! However, I would understand if you need a break.

Hope Sasuke and company can get soon to the other side and save the others. I'm kind of waiting to the action begins!

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From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on August 21, 2012
Another glimpse inside Shika's mind! Poor thing, i just want to give him a hug. He seems to be quite clueless about love! Although being in a relationship for that long I can understand why he is having problems acting the right way now. Naruto's reaction was classic protective best friend and its nice to see that side of him as opposed to the warrior Naruto, father Naruto, fairytale Naruto or Sasuke's Naruto. Havent seen his best friend side come out in a while...maybe it wont be so good for Neji though.

Speaking of Neji, i wonder what his take on all this is? And as Shika wondered, who does he fantasize about?

Cant wait for the next chapter!! Please dont go on sabbatical... I look forward to reading about your world each week. :)
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From ANON - v on August 20, 2012
Over two years? Wow! the reading has been wonderful:) I understand that writing this story is becoming a struggle, because for me, reading has become a bit of a struggle also..and not because of your writing, plot, fantastic story line, or anything else you might perceive as insulting. I just think that our crew is headed to places that no one wants to go because we adore them so much and they all have special places in our hearts and probably as their parent (that would be you) it might possibly be worse... the journey is often the best and worst part of any adventure... its what keeps us turning the pages even though we already know what the ending is going to be... the guy always gets the girl, the mystery is always solved, and the hero always saves the world...but its what happens along the way that keeps fans reading, so I think we get the easy end of the deal. I think on AFF a writer can throw all those notions out the window, after all, who says there even needs to be a girl, let alone have some guy get her :) lol... so I say this, I'm going to follow where ever you need them to go, and if I cry, laugh, scream, or bang my head on the desk ...its all because when i'm reading each chapter I LIVE in the world u created..how great is that!! always your fan, v
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From satterb on August 19, 2012
I didn't get to review in time before you updated again. The last chapter was sooo upsetting, I wasn't sure what to say. I love reading the day-to-day happenings in this universe, among the many well fleshed characters. Even though the story is getting nail bitingly (if I can use that as a word LOL) tense, it's still wonderful to read. I was really upset for Haru and Ran. Sometimes I don't feel as though my silly comments can even express what I feel about this story, and the others before. I wish I were eloquent enough to do this story justice. I would hate to see you not finish this story. Even though I look forward to the upswing in the plot, I will miss this story and the entire universe. I will probably go back to re-read the original story and the others that follow. Thank you for all your hard work, and don't give up on us. I have to believe that you have way more dedicated readers than you think.
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From rek12 on August 18, 2012
I started reading your story colours of the mind when you first posted it on AFF. I absolutely love your writing and would read anything that you post. I was hesitant to start reading your Naruto fanfiction though because I had been so enamored by the characters that you had created yourself i was worried that your fanfiction would be lacking something. When posted Jason recently I was sooo excited to read more of your original work. It was then that i thought I should give the rest of your work a try and I've read your whole Naruto saga in the past few weeks, I've been literally glued to my computer! I absolutely love what you have done with the characters. I'm a fan of Naruto too so I know that characters. I really like how you have had them evolve in their new environment and of course your plot and the universe you have created are amazing!! I don't want it to ever end!! every thursday and saturday I'm glued to my computer waiting for you to update. I know I should review more but in my defense I got to most or your work late in the game. I'm kind of rambling here i guess but i just wanted to tell you to keep at it and that you'll always have a loyal fan in me! And i'll always be eager to read anything that you write be cause to be honest you are one of my favorite authors ever!!
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From ANON - VillageFox on August 18, 2012
I'm in love wit this!! Oh wow, your work is excellent. So thorough, and well thought out, the details are impeccable....I'm just addicted. And you write so much!! I swallow whole fictions in a matter of a day or two, so the fact that yours took me two whole weeks is amazing. I'm eagerly awaiting your update!

Ciao,
VillageFox
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From Prism0467 on August 18, 2012
Still on your game after 2.5 years...honestly I am amazed you've achieved so much in your writing without coming to an impasse before now. I applaud you! I appreciate all that you've written and understand if you are getting to a point where you need to wrap up the tale. Even Kishimoto-sama has reached his limit.
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From ANON - Ash on August 18, 2012
I'm sorry I've never reviewed. I'm normally reading these on my phone, or I'm in a rush, but it's no excuse! This series is probably one of the best I've read on AFF, or FF, or anywhere. In fact, it's the kind of series that, had it been published, I would have been jumping from foot to foot in anticipation of the next novel. Each week I look forward to a new chapter, I am hooked by the story (although I've never been into traditional pirate tales), and I am so excited every time you say you're going to continue the series!
I would understand if you chose to take a sabbatical, I mean, it would be pretty cool if you wrote a book or something (provided I got a copy. That's a necessity!), but you have so many fans, we'd all be devastated if you never came back to the In The Cold of Space, You Find The Heat of Suns series! We all support you, 100%, in whatever your eventual choice will be, and will be here waiting if you choose to take some time away, but you might even realise, after spending so long with this, that you can never truly stay away. It's therapeutic, chaotic, intensely insane, but also incredibly necessary, and we'd all be that much worse off for having lost you as an author.

Still, the decision ultimately resides with you. I hope it's one you enjoy.

Ash.
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From ANON - Rhionae on August 18, 2012
Hi, just want to say that I'm enjoying this story very much.
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From ANON - sadie237 on August 18, 2012
Oh my Space Queen! I'm still on the edge of my seat. That was intense! I'm getting the feeling Neji didn't want to break up?! The sex was to good and easy to fall into:) He doing what he thinks Shika wants. Thank goodness everyone is alive. At this point I'm not seeing anyway out for our family. Queenie we love you thank you for not giving up on us:) I want you to finish this story. Has it real been two and a half years! I know I live for my time with you and our family of spacers:) ^_^
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