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By : mannahpierce
  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on September 04, 2012
    This was... horrible... What happened to Haku? Please let someone get to them already....
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  • From ANON - v on September 03, 2012
    It took me a couple days to come to terms with writing a review for this chapter, I feel since so much of my emotions were involved when I was reading it I needed a few days to calm down so I wouldn't write with CAPITOLS and a large amount of exclamation points..(all due to how much I adore the characters of the children and how much I hate whats happening to some of them) ahem...so, okay..objectively...with each new chapter I read the intensity of the story line builds even more, I think even before I open a new chapter my heart starts pounding just trying to picture whats going to happen, although I believe the children to be incredibly resilient, they've been protected their whole lives, so seeing EVIL sicko pervert thru Haru's eyes (easily the most innocent of the children) makes me sob a little...I feel so bad for Rin but so happy she protected Haru then I feel guilty for that thought.., I also am seriously worried about Haku...I think if I admit that at odd times of the day, I wonder how they're all doing...that is not me being crazy..but just you being the best writer ever!!! ....HURRY UP AND SAVE EVERYONE!!!!!....sorry, sorry,...my bad, LOL ;)
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  • From satterb on September 03, 2012
    Thank you for updating!!! I was terrified for Haru. I'm so glad he was kept safe. Thank you for giving us a little more hope for rescue. I love how clever Haru is. I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you so very much for all your hard work.
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  • From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on September 02, 2012
    !!!!

    Poor Haru!!!! And poor Ran! And what has happened to Haku that he cant fulfil his 'punishment'? Sasuke needs to hurry up already. Good on Haru for burying the data about the good holes amongst the bad ones. I also dont think I've ever seen Rin being so selfless, although I don't believeanyone in that situation wouldn't try to save a child by switching places with them.

    Yoshimi is concerning. It is good to see his family is still his priority but what is the print's deal with Yo-chan? Poor kid!

    On a seperate point, any poetry the Orochimaru-s come up with i believe would be not only dull, but a painfully boring way to spend any amount of time... When do they have the time to write it? Shouldnt they be concocting evil plans and torturing minkies (instead of our ears)? And more importantly, why feel the need to share it with the universe? Why? Why?!?!?!?!? Nice touch.

    Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From daughterofvirgo on September 01, 2012
    Chapter 40. Wow! Rin-san sacrificed herself for Haru's sake. She's a brave woman, in my opinion.

    Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on September 01, 2012
    Queenie I was wimping like one of the kits:) That was so intense! I'm very impressed with Haru-chan doing his back thing on the compute. That wasn't easy with cameras and snake man there. He's a chip off the old Shika block:) I have to give Yo-chan a yea baby! I'm sorry he had to kill but I'm glad he did. What is up with the gentleness of the old snake when it can to laying Yo-chan down?! Space Queen the undercurrent was brilliant! I'm worried to where is Haku-san?! Our beautiful queen has to be alright right?!:) When the Uchiha Clan rain down on old man snake for all he had done to their family members I believe the hold galaxy will hear of it! I loved it! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey on September 01, 2012
    Omg Haru you amazing child you! But Riiin. Ugh this is all so messed up. It makes me hurt in a good way. I can't for the next chapter Mannah-san.
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  • From ANON - cynaga on September 01, 2012
    Ch 40 WoW!
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  • From ANON - superflaj on September 01, 2012
    i have to keep imagining naruto tearing apart the orochimaru print one tiny piece at a time while reading the chapters with haru, ran, kazuki and the rest of them in order to not cry. good job haru for the backdoor plan, hope they get to use it to escape soon.
    excellent work, cant wait for more
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  • From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on August 29, 2012
    No-one is safe from Madara :( Im really hoping his plan isnt as solid a second time round. And that Centre make him pay for trying to manipulate them as well. And then maybe the minkies, just for the hell of it...
    The Sai and Sumiko team is sweet for keeping tabs on Shika in the simulator and out, but I still want to give him a hug. He is like the favoured uncle in Sasuke's family and they are his healing balm.

    And yes, the mental image of Haru ripping someones throat out with his teeth, for all his genious, is amusing and yet, somewhat satisfying.

    Looking forward to the next installment! (And congrats on the 3 chapters! *touch wood*)
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  • From Phoenixewolf on August 28, 2012
    Life always seems to get in the way, this is the first time in a little bit that I have been able to read so I was able to catch up. I am sad to see Neji and Shika split but understand. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for your efforts, I appreciate that you keep writing even though you feel like you need a break. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Fluister on August 27, 2012
    Haha, I have to admit that it feels good to have Madara realizing that his attempt failed. Even though his plans for Shika are really worrying. I hope his greed will make him mess up.

    I also loved the scene with Shika and the triplets, seeing him telling his stories again. It was really sweet.

    And poor Haku. I feel so bad for him. I hope he'll make it through.

    As always, loved reading this and looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey on August 26, 2012
    This was such a perfect chapter. Between Madara's evilness, the touching scenes between Sasuke, Naruto, Shika, and the minkies, and then the last heart-wrenching part. Ugh I just want this Orochimaru print gone. Preferably very painfully and bloody.
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  • From satterb on August 25, 2012
    Another excellent update. I was glad to see that you left us with a glimmer of hope. As long as the children are able to still laugh, then all hope is not lost. I look forward to the next installment. Thanks for all your hard work.
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  • From ANON - v on August 25, 2012
    Very worried about Shika, to say he should never of sworn to Uchiha was such a shock....and Sasuke trying to act normal for the children around him. I really hate these bad guys...hate them!! To know what that sicko pervert is doing to Haku, its just heartrenching, and I am worried how much worse its going to get for his captives. I believe, I am ashamed to say, that this time I really, really want the honor of Uchiha to be set aside for bloody and feral retaliation...please forgive me, Uchiha-sama..lol :)
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