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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - maliya on September 14, 2012
    Please, don't let Sai die!. He is such a wonderful character. I want to see more of him with Su-chan and Haru-chan. I hope he can survive the explosion, and if he dies let everyone know about his sacrifice.

    I can't wait to see all of them reunited, all of this suspense is making me crazy!

    Thanks for the hard work!!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on September 13, 2012
    Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!

    I knew that this title was a bad sign.... NO! Don't... I don't want Sai to die!

    For a moment there I was seriously very afraid that Shika would go to seek some cosolation in Neji's arms. I'm so glad he didn't and I hope he won't.

    If Sai did the back up and then somehow survived would there be two Sais?
    Why did the kids had to use those needles? Wouldnt the collar knock the berserk kits anyway?

    I hope that Sai will somehow survive. I don't know how but I hope!

    Thank you for the update.
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  • From ANON - v on September 12, 2012
    Its so hard, one part of me is so excited and hopeful that the plan to rescue everyone is underway, another part is nervous that something will happen to derail everything, and yet another part is tearful over Sai's sacrifice. I began to tear up at his line "I am a person. I have free will. This is my choice" that was both awful and perfect for him to say. I had such an overwhelming sense of relief with the last chapter, a small breather away from the traumatic events the hostages are going thru, but now..the pulse pounding begins again...I'm gonna have a stroke...
    I so hope Sai will survive...I hope everyone does. Except of course for sicko pervert and his crew...your fan always, v
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on September 12, 2012
    You're such a Good-Bad girl:) A good girl for being here on Wed can you hear the YEA BABY:) Bad girl because the cliffy is a killer! I was scare soon as I see the title! I didn't know what might be a head?! The way you broke it up was like an anime episode. I loved that!! Our kids and kits are young men now:) Their plan is going well so far. Now I didn't think I would be as emotional as I was for his 'sacrifice'. But when Shika had tears going I got choked up to. Space Queen that was a awesome chapter! I was so tensed up reading because I didn't know who the sacrifice was going to be. Now I'm going back to reread at a comm-er pace:) Just wonderful! See you next time for episode 43 ^_^
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  • From satterb on September 12, 2012
    Oh my god!!! This made me cry. Thank you so much for updating. I look forward to more. I love this story so much

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  • From daughterofvirgo on September 12, 2012
    Chapter 42. Oh, Mannah, I honestly want to cry right now. Poor, brave Sai. I hope his and Shika's plan works.

    Thank you for another wonderful chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 12, 2012
    I was crying at the end, imagining Shikamaru telling Sai stories. What a fantastic story this is.
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on September 12, 2012
    Sai's sacrifice is sad and unexpected. The theme of what constitutes a person, and why it matters,is so interesting. One does wonder why an individual (I'm thinking Orochimaru, Pein and Konan) would make prints of him- or herself when the "print" threads of consciousness are merely tools of the original and will be sacrificed without qualms. Exciting story - I'm glad you can go back to twice a week. We readers are so spoiled!
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  • From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on September 12, 2012
    I feel like this little bubble of hope i have about Neji and Shika is going to be burst with a blunt pin in the near future... Ever hopeful for that pairing!

    I wasnt expecting Sai to be so 'selfless' (if thats the right term...). Although, looking back it makes sense and shows his loyalty to Haru, Ran and Kazuki. Its given everyone something to focus on and work toward.

    And how sweet is Yuki?!!??! Shaping up to be a good queen :)

    Awesome news about going back to twice a week postings!!! :D
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  • From satterb on September 11, 2012
    Oh! I just love Sai! Every time you give us a little hope, it feels as though you take a little of it away. I look forward to the next update. Thank you for all your hard work.
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  • From ANON - Slynx on September 11, 2012
    It's been a while since I reviewed, but I had to catch up on the last few chapters and whew... It was so intense! I love it. Even though chapter 40 was dark, or maybe especially because it was so dark. Poor Haru. I really felt so sorry for him.
    But atleast they're getting closer and closer to a solution! I just really hope everyone makes it out alive. I still love how Sai and Shika work together and how Sasuke and Naruto can still be together and support each other despite what's happening.

    Very happy to see you updating twice a week again! It means my addiction to your story gets fed more often, haha!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on September 10, 2012
    That was.... liberating. Finally a bit less worries and a smut! Still just a knowledge that kids are still in Orochimaru's clutches and I still don't know what's going on with Haku....is depressing....
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on September 08, 2012
    SQ you are about to get so many 'Yea Babies' that your ears are going to explored! The first is for Wed and Sat again 'Yea Baby'!! A dance went with that one. This should have been first but the block is gone:)'Yea Baby'!!! The plan has begun. I'm happy and scare. So thanks to Naruto we know how long Neji and Hinata have been at it:) I love how Naruto side step-ed Sasuke question on why he was subbing Neji. I guess I'm going to be more open on their (N&H) relationship since they were promised early in life. Plus I don't really know if Shika is in love with Neji or he just loves him for taking care of him and his sister now. I remember when they first got together. I remember Shika being in love and Neji not so much. I'm going to wrap this up with 'YEA BABY' our boys needed that 'Special cuddle':) Hey I needed that special cuddle to..'yea baby' Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe this was incredible oh let me 'rethink':) This chapter was magnificent! ^_^
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  • From daughterofvirgo on September 08, 2012
    Chapter 41. It seems like they may have finally come up with a plan that might work. I hope it does anyway. The children certainly know when their Papa and To-chan need some alone time. And I for one love when Sasuke screams and Naruto howls.

    Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah. I am glad to hear that we will be going back to twice-a-week updates. Keep up the awesome work, and I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From DRAGONBETTY on September 08, 2012
    I enjoy reading your stories and hope you keep on writing. While I have not watched a complete episode of Naruto, I find your stories are very clear and draw the reader into a different world. please keep up the good work and draw us a picture of your world thru your stories. Thank you
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