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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - maliya on September 19, 2012
    OMG, please Lady Luck, let them be ok! This chapter gave me a heart attack. It was so intense, emotions so strong. Thanks again for your hard work, this chapter was magnificently written.
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  • From satterb on September 19, 2012
    I think I'm lost. I'm just going to read what happens next. I am really sad about Sai. I am hoping that he survived in the explosion proof box. But that would not solve the problem of the illegality of his existence. So, I'm not going to get my hopes up. I look forward to the next update. Thank you for all your hard work.
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on September 19, 2012
    Did you hear me howling like To-chan?:) Oh Space Queen that cliffy is a back and knuckle breaker! Wow! I loved it!! That was riveting!!! My palms are sweaty. SQ I was on that bridge with them. You gave me a great visual. I could see it all. You know I loved Sasuke's thoughts on what he could be doing on the bridge and in the chair:) I loved every word of this chapter! You brought E & I and their lover to the big show:) We need all hands on deck to get our kids back safely:) You are simply the best:) My heart needs to be 'rescued' because of the cliffy but other than that it's a hell yea baby that was gooooD!
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  • From ANON - cynaga on September 19, 2012
    Don't believe you (yet).
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey on September 19, 2012
    *curls up into a ball*
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 19, 2012
    I usually think it's rude to ask an author to work faster, but just this once, and with all respect: please please please please post the next chapter soon!!!!!!!!!
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  • From daughterofvirgo on September 19, 2012
    Chapter 44. Mannah, say it isn't so! Please, they just can't be...

    Update as soon as you can, please. I need to know what went wrong.

    Oh, and sorry for the double post Saturday. When I tried to leave my review, all I would get was a blank screen. I didn't know if it posted or if I had typed the Captcha image wrong or what.
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  • From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on September 19, 2012
    Haku!!!!!!!!!!! :( Poor Haku, though at least that part is over (hopefully). Now im even more worried about Kisame and Itachi! I just want the Uchiha family back together again so they can fix each other.

    I do like how closer Haru and Ran have got. Its so sweet! It reminds me that the big litter arent as old as they're acting and its only the situation they are in.

    I can't wait for the next chapter! It's all rolling now!!!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on September 18, 2012
    Wow, because of the AFF problems this weekend I almost forgot to read this! I’m sorry!
    First of all, I thought that Haku will tell the kids that they shouldn’t have try anything on their own. I’m glad he was smart enough to trust them. It was a bit like ‘an adventure’ from their past days.
    Second – I never expected to Haru (OF ALL PEOPLE) having doubts about sleeping and having a problem with too uncomfortable suit to sleep…
    This vision of him being just a toddler where he had fallen asleep in the no-gravity training will be forever printed in my mind! ^_^
    Now about the ending – it’s too bad that there is no Itachi’s pov in this story. I wonder what he thinks now…

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  • From satterb on September 16, 2012
    Poor Haku! He's so strong though. I know that Itachi and Kisame will eventually get the opportunity to avenge him. Thanks for updating. I'm on pins and needles to see what comes next.
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on September 16, 2012
    Queenie I'm sorry you have 3 reviews from me and they're all the same:) I thought my compute or the web site was acting up. So I sent 2 review here and one over at the other site. So delete one from here. Hey I just wanted my love to reach you some how:)
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on September 15, 2012
    OMG SQ!! That was so intense and suspenseful I loved it:) I'm just now breathing normally. I didn't know I was holding my breath or breathing shallowly. WoW I loved it! You are back in form Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe:) The most incredible part for me was the boys seeing Haku-san.. It was so amazing how he pulled his self together and just washed at the sink. The pain he had to be feeling just breaks my heart. Then warming my heart is the fact the boys know that Haku-san was doing all he could to keep them from harms way. Queenie I loved that part so much! ok I give I could not think of something for hidden,oh I just did:) I know that was cheating. Hey Wed and today was just out of this hemisphere as far as I'm concern. ^_^
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  • From ANON - v on September 15, 2012
    This is so like you!! Such a cliffhanger!! My heart is in my throat...I can't even begin to guess what will happen next...dammit!!..on another note, these kids rock!! I love how everything was so organized and how much they trusted each other. The scene with Haku crying was absolutely heart wrenching, we know how much he's sacrificed in order to protect the children but to really see it...to have it brought into such focus with just a few lines.. amazing writing. Also, even though I still refer to them as children, that definition of them is becoming less accurate to me as you show their growth and maturity with each passing scene so I'm going to think about how I will refer to them in future reviews, lol. Last nite I couldn't get on AFF, wasn't loading all nite, and I had a horrible thought...how would I reach you..how would you reach me...how the heck would I get the next chapter to read!!!(not a totally unselfish thought..I know) So i think I shall send my email also now, y'know just in case.
    ;) lol your fan always v
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  • From ANON - v on September 15, 2012
    This is so like you!! Such a cliffhanger!! My heart is in my throat...I can't even begin to guess what will happen next...dammit!!..on another note, these kids rock!! I love how everything was so organized and how much they trusted each other. The scene with Haku crying was absolutely heart wrenching, we know how much he's sacrificed in order to protect the children but to really see it...to have it brought into such focus with just a few lines.. amazing writing. Also, even though I still refer to them as children, that definition of them is becoming less accurate to me as you show their growth and maturity with each passing scene so I'm going to think about how I will refer to them in future reviews, lol. Last nite I couldn't get on AFF, wasn't loading all nite, and I had a horrible thought...how would I reach you..how would you reach me...how the heck would I get the next chapter to read!!!(not a totally unselfish thought..I know) So i think I shall send my email also now, y'know just in case.
    ;) lol your fan always v
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  • From daughterofvirgo on September 15, 2012
    Chapter 43. I hope Itachi doesn't take Orochimaru's threat too lightly. I think just abandoning ship and leaving the prisoners behind sounds a little too easy. This is Orochimaru we're talking about after all.

    Poor Haku-san. I would hate to be Orochimaru when Kisame catches up with him.

    Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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