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By : mannahpierce
  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on September 26, 2012
    46 – GREAT CHAPTER!
    Uuuum…. Who’s Miriam? … Nevermind.
    I would be delighted if Haku were the one to kill Orochimaru. He has it in him to do it right. Kisame would do it too quickly but Haku… he would be marvelous! With Rin’s ‘medical’ help/knowledge it might be veeeeeeery interesting. I hope it will happen eventually.
    (In one sentence somewhere where Sasuke bows to Haku there is a switched letter and it says that Haru bows back.)
    Haru- still believing in Sai’s chances… Naruto’s son alright!
    I think Sai would be someone very special for Shika, he had so much knowledge and the way of thinking that Shika would like. I know that it was probably more like Haru’s because Shika’s is… to special, brilliant or whatever… unique! But still, I believe that Shika and Sai would be a formidable duo.
    IRUKA – it’s always so… special when he appears. Too bad that his part is so small recently. I used to thought he would become a teacher or Haru’s tutor (or at least something like that had been suggested some…long time ago) and then he practically was out of the picture… and Kids took over the story…
    AKEMI – it’s hard to cry that he’s missing when we practically didn’t know. Wonder what kind of person is he? A troublemaker like Asuma in his youth and Kono? BUT still when Sasuke says that there is no point on dwelling if he’s alive was harsh…. Or maybe I misunderstood….
    Sasuke saying “over my dead body” was great!
    Now I think Izuna shold get into Naruto’s hands. He is Shi-chan’s best friend and if there was any challenge or something he could always represent Sasuke, right?
    This chapter was just…. GREAT! (even though I thought thee would be smutt after finding the kids….)
    THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From daughterofvirgo on September 26, 2012
    Chapter 46. It's good to have everything almost back to normal, at least for the time being. I would love to see Haku give that Orochimaru print a good slash with a knife. Although, I would still like Kisame or Itachi to give him a good beating first. ^-^

    I wasn't sure how Haru would take the news about Sai. I hope Sai is still out there somewhere, and they can bring him back. But I won't get my hopes up too high in case that isn't impossible.

    I'm really looking forward to the big confrontation with "Izuna".

    Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - cynaga on September 23, 2012
    Ch 45 HA! Hurray!!!!!! *big grin*
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on September 23, 2012
    chapter 18. You're wonderful with churning the plot to the climax and I'm going to read Jason because I'm postponing reading how Leader's going to continue in chapter 19.

    My stomach is tingling just typing this.

    I knew right away that Izuna Uchiha's role was gonna be... hard to integrate into the story without there being a hidden motive. Now to find out that Madara had done a switch with Izuna really got me fired up.

    Considering that I've got more to read..... I so wanna know what happened to Izuna!
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  • From satterb on September 22, 2012
    I laughed like a lunatic! Being a mother myself, I was emotionally steamrolled when Naruto and Sasuke were able to hug their children. I loved this update. I still look forward to Itachi rejoining the pack. Thank you for the marvelous entertainment. Can't wait till next time.
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  • From ANON - v on September 22, 2012
    Oh thank god!! I'm so happy and also so amazed, I had no idea how they were going to survive, i couldn't think of any way out for them and it never occurred to me that the suits would help. I should of thought of it because that's how Iruka and Naruto survived the bombing but it just never crossed my mind, being caught up in the suspense and heartache of it all. BRAVO!!! I also have to mention, I love the way every time they have to figure out a problem, the children always think of Itachi's expectations or his training with them, how he helped make their survival possible. I just hope Rin and Akemi survived, I hope their safe. Joyfully waiting for the next chapter, and still hoping sicko pervert dies an agonizing death.... fan forever, v
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey on September 22, 2012
    *sobs* BABIES REUNITED AND IT FEELS SO GOOD!!!! hfkdlas;fjk;ldjakl I can't. An amazing chapter once again, Mannah-san.
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on September 22, 2012
    YES!!! Some of our family has been rescued! SQ that was a nail bitting adventure:) WoW! Ok I'm breathing deeply now trying to compose myself:) Hey my 'expectation' were exceed:) That was truly an amazing adventure. Space Queen you are the best!!! That back breaking cliffy lead to this wonderful out come! I loved it. Thank you for your hard work~Bowing~ All that technical stuff. I think you could be alien because you know so much about it huh?!:) I'm teasing you SQ:) But it sounds so real to me. A non-alien:) Enough silliness from me:) I loved this episode ^_^
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  • From daughterofvirgo on September 22, 2012
    Chapter 45. I was worried there for a second when Itachi didn't show up, but I'm glad everything worked out for the children.

    Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on September 22, 2012
    ch 45 - Thatnk you, thank you... Gods... I really thank you! I knew they would survive but still.... I was afraid that you wiould keep the news from us for a few more chapters and move to Madara instead or something... I really can't wait to see them all rip the original Orochimaru apart, very, very, slowly.
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  • From ANON - Slynx on September 22, 2012
    Whooooooooooooooo! Don't mind me while I do a little victory dance! *dancedancedance*
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on September 20, 2012
    No...just no... right? It's just a clifhanger... right?
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  • From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on September 20, 2012
    Oh my!!!!!

    I am really hoping that we have missed a spectacular escape for those stuck on the Sakura and are just seeing things from Sasuke's PoV at the moment.

    My worry about Shika has been growing exponentially. I forsee a very bad spell for him coming up. First he and Neji break up, then losing Sai and envisioning Su-chan hating him, to then believe that Haru and the others are dead and that he has failed- not good.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ahmenet on September 20, 2012
    Oh my.... so cruel. Cliffhanger of the highest magnitude. Pray the kids made if off the ship.
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  • From ANON - v on September 19, 2012
    I'm speechless..I don't know what to say..the detail of this chapter was amazing, the ins and outs of everything they were doing to rescue the others..the children. It was like I could picture everything they were doing in my head..I'm gonna focus on that. If they're really dead, my heart is just broken, they were trying so hard, all of them...especially Haku and Sai. Its so horrible, so cruel...I won't believe they're dead yet...not yet.
    always a loyal reader, v
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