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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - Fluister on October 03, 2012
    Oh my, this is only the first half of the story! Haha, wow, you really are building up to something. It's awesome. I love the vendetta and can't wait to find out what will happen next. I understand the need for an Interlude and I also hope that you will also get some joy from writing and not just have to labour through it. It really is an amazing story and you always have me on the edge of my seat whenever a new chapter is posted!
    Amazing work as always
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on October 02, 2012
    47 - I love the last words. NEW Uchiha is so much more than the old Uchiha! This chapter was so nice and relaxing. It makes me worried that it's just a calm before the storm. But that's what life is about, right?

    Thank you for Iruka-moents! I love it even if he just is, but here he said something, like he suspected something about Sai. He probably deducted it from Shi-chan and Haru's behavior... nice.
    Naruto AND Iruka in one scene - too cute! I loved it so much.

    Hikaru - I kind of even missed him. I wonder if he is interested in someone like Haru in Ran....?

    I know that RIn does not deserve to die but I think it would be better then having to live after being with Orochimaru print and having his baby....

    Now I hope Haru will find Sai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From satterb on September 30, 2012
    Thank you so much for another wonderful update! Naruto will never let his children have hard feelings against one another. This was a really sweet chapter. I'm also glad that Su-chan is becoming more mature. She was a little insufferable when she was really young. I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - v on September 29, 2012
    I have to tell you that I cried through this entire chapter. Reunion was an apt name for it because I feel each line of it was so emotionally charged. I will admit that Haru is my favorite of the children, probably because I've gotten to know him the best but also because he's the one that lives so much in his mind and is the most vulnerable. His worry about Sai, his response to Kiba, his explanation on why he agrees that they should stay out of the battle for now, it was all so painful...I couldn't say how I expected this chapter to go, but I should of learned by now that where ever they're going, you know exactly how to get them there. BRAVO!! v
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  • From ANON - cynaga on September 29, 2012
    Ch 46&47 beautiful!!!
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on September 29, 2012
    To know To-chan is to love him. I love him more all the time:) That is a great way to get the brothers together. The title is so fitting for this chapter:) The best breakfast in space is cooked by Iruke-sensei:) I'm so happy Haku-san was busy!! You know I didn't really think about the height of the kids until Kiba-san had to bend to hug Ha-chan. Little sister has grow-up a lot. It made me smile when she told Ha-chan he doesn't tease people. I'm going to just enjoy them all being together. No thoughts of what's to come for me. I know I'm chicken:) Our family is all in one piece that's enough for now ^_^
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey on September 29, 2012
    D'awww BABIES ALL REUNITED!! I love Haru and Ran's relationship! Another amazing chapter Mannah-san, can't wait for the next one. :D
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  • From daughterofvirgo on September 29, 2012
    Chapter 47. I can't speak for everybody else, but I love chapters where the children are the main focus. They are such a big part of the series, and I had missed them during all the excitement. It was a nice reunion.

    Anyway, I don't want to say anymore in order to avoid spoilers, so I'll end here. Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on September 28, 2012
    It's amusing how Shikamaru is manipulating Sasuke into unknowingly searching the entire system for Sai. Seems like that would fall under "important stuff" that Sasuke should know. Probably won't improve Sasuke's mood when he inevitably does learn about Sai.
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  • From satterb on September 27, 2012
    I guess the shit is about to hit the proverbial fan! I almost forgot about Izuna. I can't wait to see all of this come together. It's been a wonderful story. I'm going to miss it, but it's all about the journey right? I am in awe of how you've strung all the events together. You are such an awesome storyteller. I look forward to the next installment. Thank you for all your hard work!
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  • From DRAGONBETTY on September 27, 2012
    Thanks for the story. Please continue. Is shika your favorite character? He seems to be your main character more than sasuke and naruto. It would be nice if there was a fight for naruto's love/companionship. sasuke won naruto's love too easily for me.
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  • From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on September 26, 2012
    Another fantastic last two chapters!!!!

    I'm so happy the family is back together! And very happy the big litter got off the Sakura before the print exploded it.

    I like the flashes of ruthlessness you get from Haku. They are always unexpected and yet so very Haku. I wouldn't like to ever be on his bad side.
    I glad that Shika has been able to tell Haru about Sai- at least someone knows whats going on with him. Although going by the the last scene in chapter 46, the others are catching up with Shika's current state of mind.

    And Kakashi and Iruka are back! Whoop whoop!

    Full steam ahead for the next chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on September 26, 2012
    OH Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe ~Bowing~ That was so incredible!!! I got a little misty eyed when Naruto was talking with the Toad kids:) Of course To-chan would make them feel comfortable:) Then he carried Kichi back to his room that was so sweet. Drum roll! Haku-san is the Queen of the Renaissance that was wonderful of Sasuke-sama to do that. I definitely approve:) Then Shika cryed in Iruka-sensi arms and got his tea and toast. He will always be the Mother to all queen or not. SQ I could write a chapter on everything I loved about this chapter:) So I going to say I loved EVERY word you wrote:) Thank you for all your hard work. I can't go without saying 'next' had me going I didn't know what to expect?! But oh how I loved it ^_^
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  • From Telynaayuri on September 26, 2012
    “Who provided the drug? And how in known space did he get it into the household?” i did not think about that. you could writes mysteries.sorry i havent reviewed in a while but i do read each and every chapter u put up. i love your stories.
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey on September 26, 2012
    PLOT! YES! OMG THEY GONNA FIND MADARA!!!! I'm so happy the children are back with sasuke and naruto. I can not wait for the next chapter Mannah-san. :D
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