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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on October 06, 2012
    Lost your review because I couldn't prove I was human. Again. Dammit.

    Ah, well .... Interlude .... I knew it! A chance to check in with others' POV (other than your four designees, that is) without hopelessly complicating the story. Neji is still a cipher, though. I don't remember you using Tsuneo's POV before. The triplets' growing up reminds the reader of Naruto's remaining life expectancy. Of course, Sasuke is too busy trying to keep everyone alive to worry about it at the moment.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on October 06, 2012

    This is great! It’s like a pause to look at each and every one, to sum up things…. We needed a bit of that insight.
    IRUKA – I love to read about him, especially (but not necessarily) with Kakashi. I’m glad to see that Kakashi is still so fond of him.
    ITACHI – I really wanted to know how he’s going! Thank you for showing that he is able to deal with what had happened to Haku so… good. Itachi seeing ‘Fluffy’ was… amazing. Don’t ever let us forget how breathtaking Naruto is. It’s been so long since someone reacted to him that way. It was nice to see.
    NEJI – always a distaste…
    I wonder if you have a romance for Shika hidden there somewhere in the future? I don’t like to think of Neji as his only long term partner. Neji was disappointing from the start to the end... I know it’s not the end yet, but if he’s not going to… I don’t know.. DIE for Shika, then nothing will help my opinion on him. So… will Shikamaru fall in love? With Garner? He’s not Klenn bbut he surely is 100 times better then Konnan! Or someone else?
    NARUO – brilliant and special , as ever. AND FINALLY SOME SMUT!!!!
    That was just perfect. Thank you! Since this chapter is called ‘on the Renaissance’ then the next will be from somewhere else, huh? From Terrasade probably… or maybe form the last two hostages…?
    Can’t wait to see.

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  • From ANON - sadie237 on October 06, 2012
    Space Queen that was so beautiful! I think we all needed this chapter to get back in touch with our family. I didn't know how much I missed everyone. Putting the pieces of their lives together in the aftermath. The Neji issue is a tough one. I'm falling in love with Itachi of course I wasn't that far from it:) You helped me fall over the edge:) I love how his and Haku-san agreement is to make Kisame happy. Because they hold that so seriously and dearly to their hearts. My sweet Tsu-chan crawly in bed with Papa and To-chan but only after listening to make sure no noises were heard:) Tsu-chan sisters and Iruka-sensei along with a horny Kakashi. You know what my favorite part was?!:) The soft AND the growling Naruto with his sexy beast of a mate Sasuke 'YeaBaby' Thank you SQ it was a heavenly chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey on October 06, 2012
    I loved this! Especially Naruto and Itachi's parts. Can not wait for more, Mannah-san. :D
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  • From Telynaayuri on October 06, 2012
    short and sweet smut. as always very good although i cant see konan and shika. i always see shika as gay...
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  • From daughterofvirgo on October 06, 2012
    Chapter 49. I had missed fluffy soft Naruto. I loved Itachi's reaction to seeing Naruto in that state.

    Haku never has it easy, does he?

    And how I wish that Neji and Shikamaru would get back together.

    Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the second of the Interlude chapters.
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  • From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on October 06, 2012
    A vendetta, eh?
    Sounds good! Especially the part about just slitting Madara's throat, however hypothetical, made me smile. Also it was nice to see Sasuke's support of Shika in this chapter too.
    Madara's reaction to it as well was very pleasing. I like the idea of being able to play outside the Spacer code rules.

    A good set up for thw next part of the story.
    I have found it a joy to read so far and i am intrigued as to what the Interlude will entail. I look forward very much to reading the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - InuChic on October 03, 2012
    You are a goddess I've never read something that pulled me in so completely.
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on October 03, 2012
    A vendetta! What a thrill! I am sorry that writing the story has, as you report, lost its thrill. If it's any consolation, your writing still feels fresh and you are, as usual, full of surprises.
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on October 03, 2012
    It sadden my heart to here it was taken more than love to write. I love reading you so much! I HOPE you can get back to loving writing this story again:) I was on the edge of my seat reading! The meeting was great. Shika was his old self again:) I was almost surprised at he (only) gave up one bank account. I should have guessed that man has lots of bank accounts:) I bet old man had the Master Card look on his face when Sasuke was on TV, you know the look 'Priceless':) I was love-in it! I look forward to your 'declaration' of our Interlude:) I got that in pertty nice didn't I?!:) Space Queen I adore you and reading your stories is one of the pleasures of life for me:) Thank you sharing another wonderful episode ^_^
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey on October 03, 2012
    Now this is exciting! I'm so stoked for the vendetta in place and Madara maybe slipping up. Can not wait for the next part Mannah-san! :D
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on October 03, 2012
    Wow!
    That chapter was extrordinary from start to finish! I am so psych! Adreline is rushing and imploding in my bloodstream. I love when Sasuke behaves like this. I love this trait in him. It was awesome! I can't wait to read more about this! More soon please!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on October 03, 2012
    Wow! A vendetta! It's so cool! I can't wait!
    Shika in his 'creative mode' was as great as ever!!!
    Finally everything's turns to the right path again.
    I wonder what you planned for the next three chapters. Is it going to be something lie Tales from Terrasade? or maybe from kids' point of view...? Or mabe three chapter of fluff and smutt?
    I can't wait to see!!!!
    Thank you for the First part, for not stoping you writing, for being patient and for working so hard for our pleasure.
    Never stop! THANK YOU!
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  • From daughterofvirgo on October 03, 2012
    Chapter 48. Ha ha! Take that, Madara!

    This "interlude" you spoke of in your author's note intrigues me. I wonder what you have up your sleeve, Mannah.

    Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Rhionae on October 03, 2012
    I love this story. Thank you for sharing.
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