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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - eunmook on October 13, 2012
    hoo boy! Poor Pein, huh? Like that really is just the most horrendous way to be trapped for years. And nobody coming to rescue you coz they assume you're with allies. So, so many things...but most of all, just glad I'm back. And that this still here, and still growing, and still everything it promised to be.
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  • From ANON - cynaga on October 13, 2012
    Great chapters!!!!!
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on October 13, 2012
    WOW! When Ryuka came on the scene I was thinking someone for Sumaru. But the warmth of the smile she got from Ryuu I don't know who it might be?!:) SQ I just love it when someone meets To-chan for the first time like she did:) I smiled the hold time reading that:) I laughed at Captain Inari when he was thinking about the looks he gets. You positively nailed the big O! He would have told Sasuke who old man was. Plus he had Pein in a tank. Yea that's big O all the way. Plans on top of plans with ten ways out of a plan. I loved it!!! Oh Great Space Queen of the Naruto Space Universe for me your chapters just keep getting better and better! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey on October 13, 2012
    Amamzing Interlude Mannah-san! I love Ryuka and I can not wait for her and Ryuu to interact. :D And we finally find more about Kabuto and Orochimaru. Can not wait for the next chapter. :)
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  • From daughterofvirgo on October 13, 2012
    Chapter 51. I loved the interludes, but I will be glad to return to the main story next chapter. Especially with how this chapter ended because I really want Sasuke and them to kill Orochimaru.

    I'm running short on time, so I will have to cut this review short. But thank you for another awesome chapter, and I look forward to the next update.


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  • From satterb on October 11, 2012
    So many fascinating characters. I laughed out loud when I read Sister Miroku! Is that a character borrowed from Inuyasha??? I can't even put into words how wonderful this universe you've created is. I look forward to each and every update. I don't think I can dislike Orochimaru as much as I dislike Madara. You've made him truly dispicable. I can't wait to see what happens next...I bet you hear that all the time XD. Thanks for all your hard work.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on October 11, 2012
    50 - Ha! I knew it would be Terrasade this time! It looks like everything is clear for everybody now. Madara is getting ready for a fight as well as Sasuke. It’s funny (in a tragic kind of way) how they are going to still pretend, and play this courteous game. Someone should just kill Madara. (how about some trained assassin…like… a girl who would be able to get close enough using her assets…^_-)
    It was interesting to hear how Chouza talked about Inoichi. He didn’t try to sweeten the past. He was honest but still talked about the good things. It was so perfectly balanced and just… nice. I also liked Ino’s reaction. She didn’t freak out, didn’t held some ridiculous grudge or anything. She seems pretty cool.
    Kono – well… I’m glad he will be away from Madara. I hope he will find some happiness too.
    Sumaru - …. I don’t think I have anything to say about him. Well maybe just that I refuse to believe that he would be able to win with Naruto! I just.. refuse.

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  • From Telynaayuri on October 11, 2012
    img... i feel so silly not realizing who inoichi was till now. i know who he is but i never connected the name with the face. so silly.
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  • From ANON - Hawa on October 11, 2012
    I'm so pleased to see mention of one of Walter's statues of Fey. For some reason it just made me really happy. That aside, I would like to take this opportunity to tell you that I love your world. You've structured it masterfully. I can hardly wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on October 10, 2012
    I loved it! As always I love the twist you put in like with Ino-san. I think assassin is perfect! You got my blood pumping thinking maybe the Sister hood might get the old man before Sasuke-sama has to fight him. I'm not saying Sasuke can't win in a fight with him but no fight is 100% safer:) With all that's on the line for new Uchiha Sasuke-sama with that on his shoulders could win! I'm having evil thoughts: wouldn't it be something if a lesser statics person killed that old sucker!:) SQ I totally enjoyed knowing what's going on with these comrades. I was off work today so I'm reading early yea baby for me ^_^
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  • From daughterofvirgo on October 10, 2012
    Chapter 50. First, congratulations on 50 chapters (for this story), Mannah. I am amazed at how this series just keeps growing. I hope it continues to grow and thrive as we get closer to the end. But I don't want to think of the end yet. It'll just make me sad.

    Anyway, on to the review for this chapter. Ino's history reminds me of the main character's past in the anime, "Noir". (May just be me thinking that, though.) Mainly because Ino was an orphan and she was raised by a religious organization that in turn trained her to be an assassin. I enjoyed Konohamaru annoying "Izuna". Choza is a sweet guy. Kiba's lucky to have him. Oh, and back to Ino, I think I understand why you killed Inoichi now.

    This review has gotten a little long, so I'll stop here. Thank you again for another awesome chapter, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Slynx on October 07, 2012
    Oh, I love this interlude. Even though I'm dying to know what's going to happen next, I really enjoy reading all these small pieces from everyone's point of view. I am so glad Haku has Kisame and Itachi with him, he really needs some love and care. I'm also really starting to wonder what is going on with Neji. Something definitely is not right, but I can't tell what yet! I also really loved Tsuneo's part. He seems to have inherited his fondness of Shikamaru from his To-chan. It was nice seeing the world from the child's eyes.

    Well, amazing writing and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From satterb on October 07, 2012
    Loved the interlude. It's almost restful after all that's just happened. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Thank you for all your hard work.
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  • From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on October 07, 2012
    Oh, wow! I feel so spoilt!
    Iruka, Itachi and Neji?!?!? Tsuneo was a treat as well-its been a while since we've had that type of child's perspective. Naruto's was slightly scary-I'm not sure i would want him planning my love life so methodically. But it was interesting to see his appraisal of Hinata.
    It was good to see how the past events have affected other members of the crew as opposed to just progressing with the storyline. I love seeing how the characters think, and this chapter was full of it!

    Am thoroughly looking forward to the next Interlude :)
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  • From satterb on October 06, 2012
    I can't effin wait. I think Madara is a little afraid...mwahhahaha! I am so looking forward to finding out what happens next. Thank you so much for all your hard work. Your writing is amazing!
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