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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - Lixx on October 27, 2012
    Just a quick post to say i am still hear and reading and love your work!
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  • From ANON - SidonieStarr on October 27, 2012
    Ah, another baby. I know you are fond of them. Since you are also fond of making your little girls evil, or at least narcissistic, I wonder if there's any hope for Orochimaru's genetic daughter. Perhaps Teruko and Takara will favor their horrible grandfather (not that you will create the story that far out, but it's fun to think about).

    Sasuke seems to be sailing into yet another trap. I still hope for Ranmaru's resurrection; your recent mention of Sasori and description of Ran's new hairstyle have made me wonder. I look forward to next Saturday's installment!


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  • From ANON - bookaholic72 on October 27, 2012
    I started reading "In the Cold of Space" two weeks ago and have blown through everything you have written in the series. I just finished the last chapter of "Leader" today. I am hooked on the universe you have created with these characters. The depth of detail is amazing, and the character development is so very detailed. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on October 27, 2012
    (Smiling) I loved it! It was a day in the life of our family of Uchiha's:) Tsu-chan running around. Rin-san seem to be taking being a mother very well. I'm glad:) What Haru said was really profound. All the meanies trust them to help raise their kids. I like how he said it:) Thank you for the heads up on no Wednesdays. I would have looked and went right into panic mode:) SQ I enjoyed the boys chat about what's going on with Ka-chan to. My 'assumption' was that Rin-san wouldn't keep the baby but I'm happy she's happy! ^_^
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  • From daughterofvirgo on October 27, 2012
    Chapter 55. Don't worry about the posting, Mannah. Work comes first because you get paid to do that. Post when you can.

    I'm glad Rin had that talk with Haru. And Ka-chan obviously has feelings for Ryuka.

    Anyway, thank you for another awesome chapter, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Slynx on October 25, 2012
    Oh wow, that was low! I can't believe Hinata actually did that to Neji. Not that I was fond of the idea of her being Neji's partner, but damn. Poor Neji, I think he never broke down like that. And also poor Shika, he's loyal to a fault, even though I think it's sweet that he went to comfort Neji.

    Whew.. I really wonder how things will develope from now on!
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  • From satterb on October 25, 2012
    I'm pissed that Neji is so heartbroken, but I also wonder if he maybe feels just a little foolish looking. I'm so glad Hinata is out of the way though! Lol Thank you for the wonderful chapter. Naruto and Sasuke talking about Ran and Haru made me smile. Haru is so worried that Ran doesn't feel the same way he does, but everyone else can see that Ran loves Haru. Funny how we can never see clearly when we are too close to the situation. Because Ran is an empath may be the only reason he isn't as concerned as Haru is. I look forward to the next installment.
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on October 24, 2012
    OMG! SQ I didn't see that coming! I don't know what I thought, maybe she would lose the baby and go home. But then when it became triples I really didn't know what to think or hope for. I just keep loving Naruto more and more. The way he treated them at the table had be cracking up:) He's as good of a lie detector as the Hyuga:) To-chan is a great dad to because he was laughing at Ka-chan episode and for using that moment to tell Papa that their kits are old enough:) I got of track:) Hianta taking the babies and leaving what 'compromise' is that? She gets it all! I know Neji can't leave and she can't stay. So I guess there is a 'compromise' somewhere in there:) Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe I loved it!! You always leave me with food for thought ^_^ PS Good rations to Hinata don't tell Neji I said that:)
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  • From ANON - eunmook on October 24, 2012
    ah... thank you so much for the ranxharu!!! And even the kazuki. Is it wrong to find neji's breakdown in front of sasuke incredibly sexy - somehow, your sasuke all his interactions allure.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on October 24, 2012
    Chapter 54. I can't say I will miss Hinata when she returns to Hyuga. It's just a shame that she caused Neji and Shikamaru to break up.

    Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - Prettypurpletiger on October 24, 2012
    Oh hell no! No She didn't! Neji is just going to let her do that to him and leave line that? Place his relationship with Shika in ruins just so she could get pregnant? She could have e plainer the situation to Neji and they could have made the decision together. The situation did make Shika realize his much Neji meant to him but this was just low. I say Tank her till its time to deliver and then send her back to Hyuga with two out if three. Neji deserve to be a dad too. That was a special kind if evil. To think that she had the nerve to tell Shika to trust her, she had neji's best interests at heart a little while ago. She had her best interests at heart. There was no obstacle preventing her from telling the truth. Everyone would have seen the logic behind it. The deception was just "unkind".
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on October 24, 2012
    54 - Oh GOGDS, why SHika always has to be so irritatingly perfect.... I don't want them to be together again. I alway wanted for SHika something better and often wondered what it could be. SOmetimes I thought about Sasuke, but SHika would never be the most important to him. It would always be Naruto no matter alive or dead, and Shika deserves to b first , the most important to someone who deserves it, who ... I don't know. He deserves more than Neji (who was cheating on him!)
    Shika acted so cool! He's amazing.
    And I TOTALLY LOVE that moment when he considered destroying Hyuugas - one of the most influential and important clans in the whole Universe - just becuse one of them had hurt his friend/family. That was awesome! Not that I want him to do it or anything. Just that it was amazing what he would do for the people he cares about.
    .....I can't wait to see Garner when he will take tha ship back (I mean if I see him...) He's my second candidate to Shika's heart but he would probably never to anything like that. He loved Klenn, right? Neji would never be everything to him either....
    Oh, well... THANK YOU for the update. The last chapters were really great(with the slightly less amout of kid's problems)
    Till Saturday then!
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  • From satterb on October 21, 2012
    Thank goodness they've found them!!! There was a quick slice of fear in my mind wondering if they found the "real" survivors though and not a couple of prints...(shudders). I am amazed at how "real" you can make this story by not missing any little detail...especially the detail that the ships are now full of teenage hybrid pheromones! LOL I really worry for Haru, he loves Ran so much. And Ran knows this, but I still feel unsure. Thank you for another wonderful update. I look forward to more as always.
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  • From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on October 21, 2012
    Aww! The big litter is getting all grown up! Poor Ka-chan- he must be so embarrassed! It was a nice snapshot of Haru and Ran too.
    Yuki could be good for Kono-kun, especially as both of them were close to Ranmaru. I'm interested to see their reactions to each other when they meet up again as they have been away for a long time.

    I hope Rin and Akemi are ok!

    Looking forward to the next chapter!


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  • From ANON - sadie237 on October 20, 2012
    SQ my inter net has been down all day. I'm so pissed!!! Why the weekend huh? The darn thing can't freak out on a Monday?! Sorry I'm trying to let it go:) You gave us a clear look at space teens hormones:) Papa has 13 of them to deal with:) I'm cracking up I can't imagine have that many at once! Well I didn't know who Ryuka was going to be after but Ha-chan and Ka-chan never crossed my mind:) She is going to be a hand full still! Yo-chan and Ya-chan? I took Ran advice and thought who else would it have been?!? Space Queen I loved it! I got my laughs with Ha-chan and Iruka-sensi and the fighting Hype breds.'Performances' by one and all were great ^_^
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