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By : mannahpierce
  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on November 24, 2012
    59 - Yes! Shika must go! And NO he should never give himself away to the Centre! Noooo!
    This was exciting! I'm sure they will find Sai and I hope he's fine. It was fun to see him working on things with Haru but we didn't really see much of him collaborating with Shika. I think they would be a formidable duo!
    So Shika is not in love with Neji. Thats a relief actually...
    I hope Neji isn't really falling apart....
    Thank you for the update!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From daughterofvirgo on November 24, 2012
    Chapter 59. But I don't want Sai to "die". I want him to be okay and back with Haru and Su-chan. But I'll be happy with whatever you decide to do, Mannah.

    Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next awesome chapter.
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on November 24, 2012
    SQ when I read 'Lost' I got a little scared?! I think I see lost on two levels. Neji and Sai. Shika surprise me telling To-chan that he and Neji haven't gave their hearts to each other?! Ok so now it is crystal clear to me where they stand:) Sorry I was being a rock about that:) I think I was thought that in all the time they were together things had changed. You know I cracked up at the substitute Queen:) Piling up peoples plates:) Another wonderful adventure with our family. I loved it ^_^
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  • From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on November 24, 2012
    Sai!!!!!!!!

    Such a feel good chapter! It's so cute how both Kazuki and Ryuka are being shy over their... incident and asking Haru of all people to mediate! It's good to see the little genius out of his depth and grasping at the situation like a normal person. In fact, it seemed like a very humanising chapter for Haru. It was full of his faults and fears and his ways of working around them. It was a nice reminder that he isn't as old as his intellect would suggest. His anxiety over whether Ran would be waiting for him was very touching. And Sai is (hopefully) back! How lovely! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on November 20, 2012
    Chapter 58
    Kids’ chapter already?
    (Somehow I had no idea that Ran called Iruka Ir-chan…. Like Kakashi.)
    I can’t believe we’re closing on Orochimaru and Kabuto! It’s so exciting and makes me hopeful. I know I shouldn’t be too hopeful because I’m sure it won’t be easy and probably won’t go smooth but I hope they will get him/them… and maybe by any chance the truth about Madara NOT being Izuna will somehow transpire…..
    And finally: You made me cry! SAI! Sai is back!!!! Where? How are they going to get him back?

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  • From satterb on November 19, 2012
    I'm so thrilled that Sai will be found!!! It was touching to see Haru trying to play matchmaker. It was clear that he was completely out of his element. I'm not sure what to think about Hikaru. I was thinking he was just a little competitive with Haru out of jealousy, but it seems like there's more of a problem going on with him. Maybe I'm just reading too much into it. Lastly, I'm glad to see that Haru and Ran both feel the same way about having a relationship with Five. I agree...it would have been weird. Thank you for all your hard work on this chapter. I loved it.
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on November 19, 2012
    Chapter 49-58. Woot! You've left me full of adrenaline again! I'm extremely excited to see what happens in chapter 59! Awesome awesome awesome! If I wasn't in the company of other people I'd be bouncing in my seat! Let Small Fox know that you two are amazing! Keep up the awesome writing!
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on November 17, 2012
    Chapter 44-48. Woot! Kill them all! I'm also on a killing spree high with all the Uchiha. After starting to read the series and growing with the characters, I want in. Tingling all over and goose bumps prickling my skill as I reach each chapter... I'm running out of words of praise. Awesome! And it's only half of this installment? OMG! I'm eagerly waiting for updates! Thanks so much for creating, sharing and uploading your awesome stories!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Jrocklover on November 17, 2012
    Ok that's not cool!!!!!!! That's the meanest clif hanger ever !!!!!! I promise I will be a good girl and review every chapter for you get me the next chapter quickly!!!! I love this story btw and I know I don't review enough but I have tasked myself with reviewing every chapter in the future if it gives you the kick you need to write more because I need more (this is purely for my own selfish interests of course lol jk) but great chapter please return to your twice a week update schedule!!!! )': i need more and I can't wait a week!!
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  • From ANON - cynaga on November 17, 2012
    ch58 BRILLIANT!!! what good fun...
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on November 17, 2012
    Chapter 43. Haku-san!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From daughterofvirgo on November 17, 2012
    Chapter 58. I bet it's Sai. Or some kind of message from Sai that will allow Haru to locate him.

    Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on November 17, 2012
    Chapter 41. NO! Haku!!!!!
    Chapter 42. NO! Sai!!!!!
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on November 17, 2012
    SQ it's Sal?!! I thought that after Ha-chan couldn't stop thinking about it. But when he went to check there wasn't anything so I thought I was wrong. Now maybe I'm right:) I loved this time with our growing kids:) Sexy Yuki huh?! Five is a goner:) So the deal is closed on Ha-chan and Ran I'm happy for them. Big brother is trying which is something else that makes me happy:) He and Haur will be fine as they get older I see it now:) The wild man Ka-chan. I was cracking up at him not taking off his helmet because he would smell her:) My baby boy Tsu-chan crying he wants To-chan I loved that! I could just see and hear it going down:) The mission was a success! Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ That was all our kids in this chapter. I loved it ^_^
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on November 17, 2012
    Chapter 21-40. Woot! Last I left a review it was due to story being so nerve wreaking I couldn't continue. Now with reading chappy 21-40 I've come to realize that you've kept my adrenaline high up through out those chapters. I don't think I'm going to be coming down from it any time soon. With out all the special chakras that makes Naruto and co ninjas, they've all stuck to there characters and grew with your story telling. And now, I've become so fond of Naruto and Sasuke's children as well as Haru and Sai. Now Sumiko's a really nice piece of work. Love her! I'm anticipating Sakura's continued support in the coming chapters that I'll be reading.

    Definitely keep up the awesome and beautiful story! Greatly appreciate the updates and continued writing! You've really met and exceeded my expectations as a writer and story teller. AWESOME!
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