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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - Aflyingmonkey on January 05, 2013
    Ran and Haru are the best! Another amazing chapter Mannah-san can not wait for the next. :D
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  • From daughterofvirgo on January 05, 2013
    Chapter 65. Whew! For a second there, I thought maybe Ran wouldn't like the idea of the plaque. I should have known better.

    Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From satterb on December 30, 2012
    I love Iruka Sensei. I also think he's the only one in known space that could get away with talking to Naruto and Sasuke that way. It made me think back to the first story and how he trained the two when they were cats. I love this story and I'm really happy that it's the weekend for two reasons...one...no work...two...your update. Thank you for all your hard work.
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on December 29, 2012
    OMG, I was not expecting that. They haven't had a tiff/misunderstanding in a while. But I guess that is why we got one. I feel like something dastardly is going to happen to Naruto with all these mentions of his time left. I'm going to start to cry, I LOVE THIS STORY!!! The whole saga is amazing and goodness I can't wait till next Saturday, I think I'm going to have to let the chapters accumulate again, Jesus, you are amazing.

    ja ne till next time
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on December 29, 2012
    I hope you had a 'Happy Christmas'? I had a very Merry Christmas:) All the days off work (4) was what made mine merry! And yet another 4 starting today. That translate to Happy New Year for me:) Space Queen I just loved this chapter! You have me using pretty much all my emotions. Like sad, happy, choked up close to tears and excitement! Yes my dear I use them all in this chapter:) ~Bowing~ Thank you for all that wonderful imagination you have shared with us this year ^_^ Happy New Year!

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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on December 29, 2012
    Chapter 64.
    Oh, Gods! Badass Iruka was amazing! (I’m just not entirely sure if Sasuke wouldn’t like the ‘knife thing’ happening t to him…) He was just brilliant! He was… damn I really like this guy!

    Kuuya was great too, when he smirked and said that Izuna’s chances are now zero! Before when the matter of challenging Izuna was discussed I never thought about that the kit who wins would have to be the clan’s leader… Kuuya is kind of like a prince now. I really always thought that Hikaru would succeed ‘the throne”….
    I must say I didn’t know that theory about smiling and puking. Interesting! I will have to try it out myself!
    This was GREAT chapter!!!!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!
    And Happy New Year!

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  • From daughterofvirgo on December 29, 2012
    Chapter 64. So it's going to be Kuuya then. And I was scared there for a second when Naruto and Sasuke were fighting. But I'm glad everything is okay now.

    Thank you for another wonderful chapter, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update. I hope you have a Happy New Year.
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  • From ANON - Destiny on December 27, 2012
    I found your series about a month ago and I have been up for the past few nights trying to catch up to this part. xD I'm totally in love with your series! It's one of the highlights of my week. I usually don't like when authors put in a lot of OCs, but I'm still hooked. I think your world and Kishimoto's characters have been nicely mixed. Also, I'm not one to constantly review cause I never know what to say, but I'm always here in spirit~ I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on December 27, 2012
    Chapter 63. LOLOLOLOLOLOL. I love how Yuki is able to shake Sasuke with his "dancing" and Naruto able to take it all in stride. Poor Sasuke. Thanks very much for the update! Greatly appreciate it. :D Keep up the great writing!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on December 27, 2012
    Chapter 63
    Wow… just… wow… It was like a Christmas present that I didn’t have time to open in time. Damn… I think this was the best sex scene of all three parts of this story… Thank you!
    And it was in Christmas spirit with snow and all… The way you described the frost on trees at the beginning was great! (we didn’t have much snow for Christmas this year. It melted right away because it was too warm…)
    I’m sorry, It’s too late for Marry Christmas but I can still wish you a Happy New Year. I hope it will be full of inspiration for writing good stories!
    Thank you for the update!

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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on December 26, 2012
    ch 49 how the heck does Tsuneo know about Sai? But seing how he sees everything going on below the surface he is just like his To-chan and that should come as a relief for Sasuke when the end comes. I have resigned myself to Naruto eventually dying, he has to in order for Sasuke to grow. But if he doesn't that is totally cool with me too. I liked this interlude and cant wait for the others, I really enjoy seeing from everyones point of view. Now that I know why Naruto doesn't like Hinata I can agree with him, she is using her wiles on Neji and I hope she come to love him. Hopefully Shikamaru doesn't do anything stupid and waits for someone to love him before something dastardly happens.

    ja ne till next time
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on December 26, 2012
    Jeez, that was AWESOME, I have to stop reading cause I'm getting a sleep headache but by golly this is great. I have no idea what Madara has planned now that Sasuke isn't dead and everyone is together with the exception of Sai, Rin and Akemi. And then I finally get what they meant when they said the copy of Sai would be 'other' it would be an AI but it would be a different one made from scratch so they would have to start from the beginning. Just like Sumiko said it would be a print and prints aren't exactly like the original. I love the sound of this vendetta, but im kinda sad Pein is on the list only for Konan's sake and how he's been tortured for all these years if he isn't already dead. I read too dang on fast, I'm almost caught up :(

    ja ne till next time Ch 44 and some chs before review
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on December 26, 2012
    WHAT!!! Sai is going to die??? My heart is throbbing right now, the little artificial being has grown on me. I really like your version of him by the way, how he likes stories and how he follows rules because he was brought up by children. I REALLY like him, and I'm hoping he's not dead in the coming chapters. And I know I said I would stop after chapter 20 but once I start reading your stories I can't stop. Have you published something, cuz I would totally go out and find it. I have read one of your original spacer stories, I don't know if it's the 'Jason' one though, can't really pull myself away from this one to find out.

    ja ne till next time and as always great job
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on December 25, 2012
    OMG I totally forgot that Orochimaru was suppose to be waiting for the Oak in the last system...I really don't know how this is going to go. I don't even want to thing about what happened or is happening to the crew on the Sakura. I am sad but I think I will read one more chapter today. CH 22 review

    ja ne till next time
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  • From ANON - Lonelylulaby on December 25, 2012
    HI!!!!! just thought I would drop a line and tell you that I'm back, and it's my winter break so guess who is catching up on all 43 chapters she missed???? This deprived girl right here, I was so scared to start cause I thought something horrible had happened and I would just be dying to know what came next. I'm happy that the children of the big litter are all finding their niche, and I can totally see Hikaru as a daring captain (ch 19) traveling the known and unknown space. This story makes me want to draw and I haven't done that in 4 yrs. Who knows YOU may have just rekindled my muse.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the fantabulous job, cuz I know it's not easy to keep to a schedule and not many do it. So I just want to say I appreciate what you do even though I have been gone for months
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