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By : mannahpierce
  • From ANON - maliya on February 09, 2013
    Wonderful chapter. It is going to be interesting to see the interaction between Orochimaru and Sasori, by nature two untrustworthy men. I am not sure yet if Orochimaru will believe in this farse, but hopefully he will end giving away anyway the name of uchida's traitor, jeje.

    I love how you give as in every chapter some hints of their daily family interaction.

    Thanks for the hard work!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on February 04, 2013
    69 - That would make a good title but ....
    Another great chapter! I liked the way Kakashi talked with Sasori and how Shika was so…unaware of the fact that they were talking about him. It was cute! It was also nice that he made Naruto stay with him. I hope they will hug in the next chapter. I also hope that ‘the interrogation’ has more than just two arts. It’s really interesting and exciting! And they didn’t even wake up Oro yet! I really can’t wait for more!!!!
    As always THANK YOU for sharing this story with us. It’s amazing.

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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on February 04, 2013
    Chapter 69. Woot! Thanks for the update! I'm looking forward to the results of Sasori's sexual and mental exploits of Kabuto. The revelation of Orochimaru's accomplice is something I'm looking forward to even though I know who it is. It's the reaction from the New Uchiha that's got me worked up! Yay! Thanks so much for keeping up the updates! Greatly appreciate it. :DD
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  • From ANON - cynaga on February 03, 2013
    wonderfully written intrigue
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on February 02, 2013
    Space Queen I loved it! Sasori-san is a girl dog huh:)! He seem to have a type something mind. The way he kept coming up with ideas on tricking Kabuto. I belive Neji-san is very jealous of the flirting of Kotohime. Shika and I needed To-chan to stay a while we feel better now:) I loved every bit of the 'Interrogation'. Shika is a great guy because I feel no pity for Kabuto. Ok maybe some of it is because of the anime to that I dislike him so much. But I liked how Shika felt pity. That's just the kind of guy he is to me. The way you have kept him threw out your stories:) Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ ^_^
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  • From satterb on January 28, 2013
    Yes! This was wonderful. I love Sasori in this. He's soooo bad. I just don't have the words to express how much I love this story. I look forward to each and every update. Thanks for all your hard work, and remember, whenever you get discouraged, we're all cheering you on!
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on January 28, 2013
    68 - ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER!!!!! THANK YOU!

    Stating that Shika is a .... sort of a parent for Sai was interesting. I wonder what Sai would think of this idea. How or what does he think of Shika?

    Neji - is he jealous or just territorial? It's nice to see that Hyuuga are also humans.

    Kabuto - I don't feel bad for him, but Shika clearly does.... Hmmm... I think the bastard's lucky! Sasori is so gorgeous! (like a Dolfie! ^_^ )

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    PS - somewhere in the middle there is : It would also give him a psychological advantage, given that Sasori was naked. - It should be KABUTO not Sasori.)
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on January 28, 2013
    Chapter 68. Oh wicked Sasori. Poor Kabuto. I can't wait for the next update! I'm eagerly awaiting the results of their hard labor(?) into making sure Kabuto and Orochimaru are the real ones. :D Thanks for the update! Greatly appreciate it!
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  • From daughterofvirgo on January 26, 2013
    Chapter 68. I loved seeing Sasori again. I had missed him. I love how he's messing with Kabuto's head. I can't wait for part II of the interview.

    Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah, and I look foward to the next update. And like I said last review, I'm happy with once a week updates, so no worries. Thank you for answering my question.
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  • From ANON - sadie237 on January 26, 2013
    WoW wOw WoW!! Space Queen that was crazy good:) Sasori just didn't care if he was being watched:) Kotohime is a shameless hussie and she doesn't care. Kakashi is in pure protection mode. Who knew Shika had that many profiles?!!! I loved everything crazy new thing I founded out in this chapter:) I was afraid to ask about the two chapters a week. You hadn't said you were loving doing this again YET. So I was chicken to bring up that topic. I still want you to fine your happy grove:) Then I hoped you would do two a week again. I keep checking on 'Jason'. I wish I knew what to say to help you feel better! I LOVE your stories and enjoy reading them very much. Thank you for all your work. ^_^
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on January 24, 2013
    chapter 67. wasn't sure if i left a review for this chapter or not. oh wait, i did. lol.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on January 21, 2013
    This is soooooooooooooo great! I love chapters like this one! Kakashi! Good to have him back! My jaw dropped when he said he would be proud if Kuuya was a leader. I still can’t forget that moment when at the very beginning f this whole story he said to Sasuke that they will probably have to get rid of Naruto… I always thought that he is still a tinny tiny little bit on the old Uchiha side with some of his approaches. I was very pleasantly surprised with everything he said to Sasuke here!
    Shika – I love it when he is in his genius mode! And Sai – there is so much they can do together!
    Sasuke is cute when he’s so overprotective about Yuki… funny but sweet . But, what is there to be surprised about? His attitude toward sex was ….very specific when he was 14… and he gave Naruto tags before they even started to fuck, so…. He will never understand that side of youth, because he had almost missed it! Oh, and he was absolutely brilliant with pacifying Sumiko! (Neji on the other hand – I felt really bad for him when he had to jump out of bed right after sex but I would lie if I said it wasn’t amusing.)
    Hopefully we’ll see more of that (and maybe some Naruto/Shika moment?) in next chapters. I really loved it! THANK YOU!

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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on January 20, 2013
    Chapter 67. Woot! Thanks for the update! Two persons in the stasis unit? OMG! I wan't to know who they are and what Sasuke and them will do. I'm electrified! Thank you so much!!
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  • From daughterofvirgo on January 20, 2013
    Chapter 67. Very good chapter. It feels like Sasuke and company are getting closer to accomplishing their goals.

    And not to rush you but are you going to start updating twice a week again or is the Saturday only updates permanent now? I know you're busy so don't feel obligated to update more. I was more curious than anything. I'll be happy with whatever you do so long as the story continues.

    And I'm also wondering what "Izuna" is up to, what his next move will be, etc. And I wonder how Haku is doing along with Kisame and Itachi. The latter would probably be better for a side story, I think, so don't feel like you have to answer that.

    Anyway, I'll shut up now. Keep up the awesome work, Mannah, and I look forward to the next update.
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  • From satterb on January 19, 2013
    Kakashi is really sharp. He's figuring that "Sai" is some kind of program that can be stolen or used if discovered, LOL. It's fun to watch Shikamaru trying to explain what he's working on without outing Sai. I love that Sasuke is not ready for the big litter to start having relations. He's not ready to give up his babies. I wonder what Iruka and Kakashi are going to say about Haru and Ran. I would think that Iruka would already know. Iruka knows everything somehow. Thanks for all your hard work. I can't wait till next weekend for the next update. Hang in there. We are all cheering you on!
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