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By : mannahpierce

From ANON - Sessha Batto on February 23, 2013
I love this world you have created. I don't have much time for reading or writing fanfic these days, but I look forward to Saturdays and a new chapter from you!! I'm woefully remiss in not reviewing, but know that I rea each and every chapter, sometimes more than once, and I appreciate your dedication to the story and your characters. Thank you SO much!
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From ANON - Destiny on February 23, 2013
Well, I'm still here. And, I think you did a great job on the chapter so thank you for spending so much time on the story! :)
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From ANON - pawtasu on February 23, 2013
This is a wonderful, page-turning story that I could never, ever, ever, ever lose interest in. I look forward to every update and am so grateful that you are writing and posting! Thank you!
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From ANON - LovelyBirdCherry on February 23, 2013
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Haru is, Such a perfect little boy ~
Wow, plaque's are a huge deal. That's intimidating. And he's only fourteen but he knows Ran a long time.
The story dynamic is wonderful!
I usually don't care for OCs and you made several of them just divine, I fell in love with them. I don't usually care for Shikamaru, but you made him my second favorite character, after Haru. At first my faves were Naruto and then Sasuke.
Um, Naruto kind of grew into Mr.Emotive perfect, even if he does still fight and misunderstand Sasuke, so I don't feel much when I think of him, though I love his presence. He's like an angel walking through space :)
Whenever Haru starts thinking frantically, I keep imagining what Ran gets tipped off with his power, and that is fun xD Haru's jealousy fits were cute and I'm glad they are over too :)
So, I feel like this story is coming to an end. Woah. And to think I left Naruto fandom and only read this story alone of it since about a year? Yeah, you are good and have me hooked! :) Thank you, dear.
I have an account, but no matter how many times I log in, I am not logged in the review section :( It confuses me and I gave up :) Also, my review got cut off, so I'm glag I ctrl+c'ed it before hitting submit :D Have a nice weekend!
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From ANON - LovelyBirdCherry on February 23, 2013
Haru is such a sweety, I barely can
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From ANON - Anon on February 23, 2013
Hey,

Just wanted to let you know that I wait all week for these updates. You definitely have a core of dedicated (obsessive?) readers. Your scifi universe is so detailed and interesting. I've stopped reading/watching Naruto but I would definitely read more stuff set in this universe. I've already read your original stuff and I loved that too. Anyway, rather than gush for a year and a half, I'll just say thank you for writing and please continue. And don't kill Shikamaru (pretty pretty please?) cause I will cry like a baby.
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From ANON - SunaoTsuji on February 21, 2013
Chapter 71. KKKKKKKAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! I'm still excited about what will and what will not happen. With the new turn of events (which surprised me) I can't wait to see what happens! Not only that but I just realized that with the original Ran being a part of Uchiha, I forgot that Ranmaru was still there! I'm curious as to how Sasori and Ranmaru's state of being will be later in the future. Thanks very much for the update!!
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From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on February 16, 2013
71 - That was pretty intense.
I’m not sure what to say. When Sasuke agreed to hear him out I was angry he did. Then thought about Naruto’s life and I was angry at Sasuke for not trying hard enough to make it work. I really KNOW that it was the right thing to do but… damn!
At least I will (hopefully) have that immense pleasure of FINALLY seeing Orochimaru die! Maybe Haku has a B-day or something? That would be a nice present. I really can’t wait for that. Still, they could get some info from Kabuto, right? Lie to him that they would let Orochimaru live…..? Or the new Uchiha doesn’t lie either?

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From satterb on February 16, 2013
I was shocked when I read the part where Shikamaru started talking about Izuna. I wracked my brain trying to figure out how they'd learned for sure it was him. But then I realized that he'd only figured it out on his own. LOL I was worried I'd missed something. I could really picture the last scene in my head where Naruto thinks for one moment that Sasuke gave in to Orochimarus' request. LOL These kinds of chapters are touching and sweet. I look forward to more next week. Please take care, we are all cheering you on!
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From ANON - sadie237 on February 16, 2013
Oh SQ that was so heart wenching! I loved it:) Tears ran down my cheeks. I'm with Naruto I'm proud of Sasuke. I can't imagine going threw that!! But the look big O had when he came back said it all he had to die. That bastard was so sure he had the upper hand. Plus Naruto wouldn't have been happy knowing his longer life was because of that man. No I just didn't see any other answer than the one Sasuke maded. SQ was your brain hurting after this chapter?! It was so emotional with heart and soul! You're amazing:) This 'temptation' just touched my heart so much. (She's back) Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ I loved it ^_^
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From ANON - SunaoTsuji on February 12, 2013
Chapter 70. :OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
OMG!!!!!!!! You've got my adrenaline pumping!!!! Woot! I'm so excited about what might and might not happen I'm tingling all over! Thanks so much for the update! I hope to read more chapters soon! Woo~! Keep up the awesome writing!
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From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on February 10, 2013
chapter 70

It’s absolutely phenomenal – this story I mean, and the way it’s so consuming and no less interesting than when it started. Apparently you have an amazing gift. At this point I’m seriously DYING to know…. Everything! I’m curious about everything! I can’t wait for more…. It’s so frustrating!!! Please, don’t do filler parts! Not now! Keep it going! Pleeeeease!
I admit that I’m not very fond of those parts in the story that are focused on the kid’s generation but it’s still always so great…. In a way it’s a waste that this story is a fan fiction but, to be honest , if it weren’t I would probably never reach it. That’s… tough. Sorry for that, I just can’t believe how good this story actually is.
Konan and Hana swearing to Uchiha… it is of course good and all but is it because they already fear for their future, about Madara leading Uchiha etc….??? Or maybe they can only swear to Sasuke? I got a bit lost in those nuances.

What does a ‘throat mike’ look like and what does it do? Is it something that lets people talk (to Sai for example) and not being heard by the people around???? …. Just curious.

Kakashi is so cool when dealing with Shika. He knows him too well!
The tension is so strained in there. How does it feel to be the one dealing cards in all this? Must be as great as tough. (Did you feel bad for killing Klennton D.? – just joking.)
Remember that with great power comes great responsibility!
I know I always say that the chapter was great or something but this one was… I’m sure you already know.
I’m sorry for such a long review. . .

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From satterb on February 10, 2013
Oh how the mighty have fallen. Orochimaru knows he's in so much trouble. I love this. And I can't wait for Madara to get caught. I think it's really important that they know it's not Izuna, but in fact Madara waltzing around their compound. And the fact that he was never considered Uchiha's leader makes him one big target. I like Shikamaru having such a caring, tenderhearted side. I love this story so much, I can't wait for more, but I hate to see it come to an end. We are all cheering you on, thanks for all your hard work.
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From ANON - SidonieStarr on February 09, 2013
Wow! Every time it appears Orochimaru will be exterminated, he finds some traction. This is so exciting! And it distracts me from wondering what has happened to the brave and noble Ranmaru.
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From ANON - sadie237 on February 09, 2013
Queenie you hear me didn't you?:) I was yelling 'Whattttt' OMG!!! I was even scared with big O awake and walking around. Then he looked into the camera like that. I was thinking game over! Then the Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe laid down a cliffy like a ton of bricks:) BAMB! I LOVED it!! I want to say and it might be a little early?! My Queen is back!!!!! Making our eyes big and mouth water for more Yea Baby! ^_^
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