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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on March 23, 2013
    „ I would prefer not to tell her that you are in the storage cupboard.” Ha ha ha ! Yes, that would be unwise…. Jeez…. Sai is like JARVIS sometimes.
    I love everybody’s input into the situation. Poor Shika…
    Now, if they now know that Izuna-Madara was interested in Sakura why aren’t they suspicious? Izuna was male only!!!

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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on March 23, 2013
    „ I would prefer not to tell her that you are in the storage cupboard.” Ha ha ha ! Yes, that would be unwise…. Jeez…. Sai is like JARVIS sometimes.
    I love everybody’s input into the situation. Poor Shika…
    Now, if they now know that Izuna-Madara was interested in Sakura why aren’t they suspicious? Izuna was male only!!!

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  • From ANON - SyilxPrincess on March 20, 2013
    Hello there. I love your work! It is my favourite fanfic. I am just re-reading it for the second time. I started all the way at the beginning and fell in love all over again. I usually read a few chapters before going to bed. I've done this for a few nights. What happened next, of course, was bound to happen eventually: I dreamt of the world you have so wonderfully written. I'm sorry to say I don't remember much except that someone had to be moved between ships and Itachi was going to be a 'queen' as a result. And Haku was present as well. I haven't been able to keep up with the current chapters. But with the speed I read and my eagerness to see what happens next, for all I know it could be true already! I guess I will have to wait and see hehe. Please don't think that nobody doesn't read or appreciate all that you have written. I'm sure I am not the only one. With that in mind, please keep up the awesome work. I eagerly await the next chapter always!
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  • From satterb on March 18, 2013
    Oh!!! So good! I loved Sasukes reaction to finding Shika and the "girls" relaxing in Madaras old office. I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you so much for the wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on March 18, 2013
    Yay! Chapter 75. LOL. Full force panic on Sasuke's part with Shikamaru, in his haste, leaving worry for everyone else. My mind's yelling, "Don't let Izuna go so easily!" doesn't help me when I'm reading the chapters. As a reader, knowing who and how bad the other party is to the protagonist, is frustrating just because the yelling won't help the good guys realize any sooner that someone needs to be 6' under. Hahahah~ Thanks very much for the update! I'm looking forward to the mayhem and chaos that will ensue!
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  • From ANON - eunmook on March 17, 2013
    The joy you bring to my sundays! I don't suppose being overwhelmed with the story would fly as an excuse for not reviewing even if it is true. Is it strange of me to feel a little bereft that this time it really was Orochimaru, which means the game is coming to an end and you're beginning to mop up - an impression reinforced by the recycling of old characters for team Madara instead of introducing new ones. I guess its like the child growing up thing - its inevitable, but you can't help wishing you could put it off some more. Shika getting stuck on Ino's legs! Nice.
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on March 16, 2013
    You had me worried for a sec. I'm glad that Shikamaru seems satisfied with the outcome. Happy that both Sakura and Ino are okay and away from Izuna/Madara. Thanks for the chapter. Always waiting for more.


    Moonmoore.
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on March 16, 2013
    Shikamaru having an 'itch' almost gave me heart attack! Though not only me as it seems. Damn, you know how to build some tension...
    I'm glad his fine, but I hope Sasuke will rip him another for that stund. Seriusly how could he be so stupid to leave and without telling anyone!? Come on... He deserves some punishment.
    Sakura didn't have a fangirl attack? She grew or something?
    I hope Shikamaru staring at Ino's legs doesn't mean anything. That would be... I don't even want to think about it.
    So, what now? Where is Madara hiding? Are there any leads betraying his true identity? I can't stand the thought that poor Izuna's nam is so spoiled...
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  • From blugirlami21 on March 11, 2013
    That was interesting. I wasn't expecting Madara to retreat like that nor was I expecting Orochimaru to be so stupid with his last entreaty. Is letting Madara go going to come back and bite Uchiha in the ass? Have we met Kimmimaro before? I always thought Naruto was the best defense Sasuke had but you made it seem like Kimmimaro was a huge threat but I can't help but feel like I would remember him if he was. Both the speech and the song were well done. Where does the story go from here? Is the conflict over with Madara? Will Sasuke ever find out that he's not Izuna Uchiha? Questions abound. I look forward to wherever this story is leading to. Good job as usual.
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  • From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on March 10, 2013
    Kimmimaru is like mould. No mater how many times you think you've killed it, it always comes back. I think Sumaru will find himself as Sasuke's bodyguard again. I look forward to a fight between Sumaru and Kimmimaru (and maybe Lee). Symbiote showdown!

    Otherwise a clever though impractical plan by Madara. Clever Shika to have the strongest Uchiha crews fill the policing role. Their loyalty would make them even more of an asset than Terrasade's police. I wonder what Madara's plans are now? The deliberate shun Sasuke gave him was good (worthy of a secondary school girl's cold shoulder in its execution) as was Sumaru's. I'm hoping his rage will make him slip up.

    Looking forward to next week's chapter!
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  • From ANON - redtatsu on March 09, 2013
    Another fabulous chapter! I can't even imagine what you will write next. Until next week!
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  • From ANON - Moonmoore on March 09, 2013
    Great chapter as always. I felt the tension and anticipation throughout the chapter. I couldn't anticipate any of what happened. I feel as if am in tenterhooks. I love it! Thanks for the amazing chapter! You are an awesome writer. I am still shocked with the death of Orochimaru. Haven't digested completely. I feel like Sasuke's action will come back and bite him in the rear. I really hope it doesn't. Thanks and take care!

    Sincerly


    Moonmoore
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  • From ANON - SunaoTsuji on March 09, 2013
    Chapter 74. Woot! OMG you've got my nerves in a knot. I've been refreshing chapter 73 hoping to see the 'next chapter' options and to be surprise, there it was! Yay! You've out done yourself and when I think that something will go one way, you tell it your way and I'm left wondering 'what the hell just happen?' Even though the vendetta is over for Pien, Kabuto and Orochimaru, my guts is still screaming 'die Madara!' But considering that only Madara knows that he's Madara and not Izuna, I can't wait for the next update!!!! Thanks for today's update!
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  • From ANON - Destiny on March 09, 2013
    Oh, things going to get even more interesting. I can't wait to read what happens next! X)
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  • From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on March 09, 2013
    74-So it wasn't Haku to hold the blade.... Too bad. He deserved this pleasure, I'm sure.
    The support of people was astounding! A song was a nice accent.
    I'm glad you didn;'t let Shika out to be there with them. It would only caused me a headache worrying that something might happen. I still can't get over the Centre knowing about him.
    Naruto as a partner instead of a bodyguard? Does that mean that ha Kimimaro challenge Sasuke then Kakashi would have to fight him? And then he would probably die.... That would be awfull. Besides I hope that Naruto is still great and strong and amazing enough to be able to kick Kimimaro's ass!
    I'm not happy about Madara's escape. Damn... and Oro is dead so the secret of his identity is still a secret....
    And now I have to wait another week to find out more. What now? What are they planning now when they're back in Terrasade? What does Madara planning? (Probably not suicide?....tooo bad.)
    Thank you for an exciting chapter.
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