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From ANON - Destiny on April 13, 2013
:) I actually like the ideas of the interviews. You get to see what's going on with everybody. lol I never realized how many characters there were. I commend you that because I know that had to be hard work. Thank you for the stories. I can't wait for the rest! x3
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From ANON - sadie237 on April 13, 2013
Space Queen I loved it! You're brilliant to have the 'interviews'!! It's wonderful to talk with all the crew. I didn't realize that it was fifty four crew members?! That's why it's so wonderful that Sasuke-sama is talking to everyone. Plus the interesting things you can learn. Like En-san wants a child (my eyes were bucked wide open mouth hanging down) I would have never guessed! Or that Ka-chan would be the first to have a life mate! The runt of the litter?! But isn't that how it happens with kids:) Oh SQ I really loved this chapter:) I'm so very happy my Space Queen of the Naruto Space Universe is BACK ^_^
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From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on April 13, 2013
I like the catch up- I was wondering what some of the characters were up to. It was good to hear from Izumo+Kotetsu and Tatsugi, In-cha and En-chan again.

The part with Hamaki, Terei and Fu was good- not everyone in Uchiha are good parents. Luckily Naomi has many other people looking after her to fill the void.

The bit with Ryuka was very sweet- I didn't think of her as insecure before but it makes sense. I like that she seemed to approach the meeting as a meeting with her boyfriend's father than with a boss she has chosen to swear to. I'm glad Sasuke has changed his attiitude toward her.

I'm glad that Sasuke has taken note of Shika's change in habits- I'm looking forward to his interview very much, somehow I think it may go over twenty minutes? Have to wait and see. I hadn't appreciated how much his focusing on Haru, Uchiha and the hybrid life extension would impact on other people in Uchiha.

I like Sasuke's baby tally! I wonder how high it will be by the end of the interviews? I think Kiba will have his hands full again! ;)

Looking forward to Wednesday!
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From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on April 13, 2013
Aahhhhh! How cute are Ran and Haru!?!?!?

Haru was showing his Sasuke-side today and keeping an eye on Shika. Haru with Ran is like how Sasuke acts with Naruto. Yuki is very like Haku, he'll good for the new crewroom I think :)

On that point, poor Shika! He's trying to teach Haru everything about Uchiha as well as extending hybrid lifespans. I hope he doesn't burn himself out before the Centralites arrive. I wish he would tell someone rather than keeping it to himself because he's going to just get incredibly stressed. :( I don't want Shika to leave/be taken- how will he stay sane without his family??? And that's nothing to say how his absence would affect the family.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
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From ANON - Aflyingmonkey on April 07, 2013
Omg Ran and Haru are so cute! Them playing with Aiko was just an adorable scene. :3
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From satterb on April 07, 2013
I have a feeling Haru is going to figure out what exactly it is that is bothering Shika. I also love the dynamics between Haru and Ran sooo much. I look forward to these updates so much. Thank you for all your hard work.
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From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 07, 2013
To be honest I expected it to go back to Haru again, since Shika decided to use his help and all…
But thank you for keeping the last few chapters the way they were! It was really great and exciting!
I like Iruka being so…. bossy!
I loved Shika in his working mode. I hope he finds more than he is looking for. Too bad that Sai couldn’t work with them, but the drive was there. Shika’s determination and excitement were really catching. I almost want to do something productive myself even though it’s weekend!
Thank you for the update.

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From ANON - sadie237 on April 06, 2013
Space Queen I didn't know this site was back up!! I can right over to read what couldn't be said at the other place:) I'm a nasty girl I need to know about the stoking and squirting. That's important stuff to the story:) Rin-san girl seem to be a little like her dad huh?! I like that they're all 'stepping up' to helping raise her. Of course Rin-san is still a girl dog and I'm with Haru I'll put my money on Iruka-sensei in the office conversation that followed ^_^
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From ANON - eunmook on April 02, 2013
Oh boy! so ominous... especially with the title and everything. Last chapter, with Ino's focus on Shikamaru had got me thinking about centre again, and I'd wondered if maybe she was their spy... Madara spiralling with the whole bugs everywhere thing was nicely done, it notched up the mad out-of-control factor. Please don't be planning a ten-years later kind of resolution. Also, is it nice fluffy next chapter time? and can it be Haru and Ran, and the kits and 'em? Yuki and Five story would also be appreciated... now that we're spinning into outrageous demands territory. That's reader gratitude for you...
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From blugirlami21 on April 01, 2013
Shikamaru makes me sad. I hate that there is a chance that he could be taken to Centralite for any amount of time just for being smarter than average. I also don't like that he is keeping silent about the very real possibility of it happening. That never ends well for anyone. And who's to say that he will come back the same Shikamaru? I do like that he is working on prolonging the life of a hybrid. While I agree with Naruto on the inhumanity of some of the methods that may be used if he wanted to prolong his life, I think it's selfish of him to expect everyone to just accept it without trying to find another way. I'm sure his children and Sasuke will thank him for any amount of extra time. I don't think looking for solutions will hurt anyone.

As for Madara, I hate that he hasn't really been taken care of. With him still breathing there is no limit to the things he can still do or the havoc he can still cause being left alone as he is. I would really like for our heroes to take care of him in a final, deathly fashion. I think letting him live hoping that he doesn't do something to retaliate is naive.

Good chapter, sorry I forgot to review for the last chapter sometimes I have nothing to say once I'm done reading and then I forget to come back.
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From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on March 30, 2013
chapter 77
NO! PLEASE DON’T…..!
It started so well. So nice. Seeing Madara suffer was refreshing. It had a taste of a real victory!
And then Shika…. It’s like he is the price of this victory…. Definitely highly overprized!
Two divs? ….
Why is the center so powerful? What the fuck are they? Rulers of the world? Can’t Shika arrange his own death or something? It’s ridiculous. He’s with one of the most powerful and prestigious clans in the universe and even they can’t do nothing to save him? To take him back?
Seriously, what are their rights? On what are they founded? How far does their power reach? Can they make Madara a clan leader in appreciation of his ‘help’?
Now I wonder, how much did Klennton D. knew about the Uchihas. Did he knew about mysteries connected to Izuna, his body and his brother? Was he afraid of that making the note in his will, the one about Haru not swearing to Uchiha?
What is the Center really? Does it have a leader or a council? Is it ruled by tronnies? So far it’s some scary demon lurking everywhere, like the communist power (sorry, I’m from Poland). Is the Center made of people or organizations? What are their goals if they already have everything? With this level of power they should be a bit like Klenn, bored and decadent, but they seem nothing like it. It looks like they have some goal… some reason to exist? It can’t be about money, can it? They can have all the money in the world I imagine…. The possibilities here are endless…. I must stop before I get lost.
Amazing chapter!

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From ANON - LovelyBirdCherry on March 30, 2013
Ah, I love Shikamaru and Haru time together. I'm guessing a chapter after next one we'll see Centre arriving - that will also be interesting to watch.
Crafty distracting Shika. I love your voice of him.
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From ANON - Procrastination_is_key on March 29, 2013
Woo! Messy room!
Poor Shika! Everyone expects him to be a genius in all the nuances of life. Im still trying to decide if Neji not claiming him is a good thing or not. I dont like it but i can understand why Neji wont make the claim. Shikas reaction is very much like someone trying to float rather than drown but thats understandable considering how long their relationship with rings had been. Now having a similar relationship but without the commitment aspect must really put Shika off-kilter. Especially as so many of the rest of the crew seem to ignore the relationship he has with Neji. It must be taking its toll on Neji too. It seems the whole crew thinks less of him for hurting Shika and they seem less concerned about how he is doing.

Cant wait for the next chapter!
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From satterb on March 25, 2013
I think Madara would be spitting like a mad cat if he'd heard Ino's description of his personality. I love when he's made fun of, and I especially love when he's aware of it and can't do anything about it. I'm glad to see Neji and Shika back together. I think they're soul mates. It's still cute that Sumiko and Naruto are still so protective of their Shika. I love the chapter, and as always, I look forward to more. I'm also glad to see that the story has a bit left to go. Thank you for all your hard work! Satterb
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From ANON - SunaoTsuji on March 24, 2013
Chapter 76. OMG! I never thought of Ino and Sakura together. I mean, with the way the story was progressing and how concentrated I am on Sasuke and Uchiha as a whole, I didn't think that Ino would mate for life with Sakura and want to breed with Shikamaru. The whole mate and breeding brings to mind another author's story. Don't know if you know her. Ayato De'Aniege is her name and she's Ayato here on AFF. She's got some awesome stories of her own that you may like.
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