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From ANON - SunaoTsuji on April 20, 2013
Chapter 77-81. Woot! Take THAT Madara! I can see a one shot of 'What happened to Madara." I'm excited to see the various one-on-one conversations that Sasuke has with the crew. A nice change of pace with a personal look into each character's persona outside of the chaos happening within Uchiha.
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From ANON - Slynx on April 20, 2013
Heeee, I'm so sorry for not reviewing in such a long time. Life has been... eventful. But at least I got some time to catch up with your amazing story and I love it! I have to say the interviews are awesome. It's so good to read more about all the crew members again. I really missed them. And it makes such an interesting story to see how new things are developing! Really exciting!
Can't wait to read the next interviews.
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From ANON - sadie237 on April 20, 2013
SQ I smiled at the tender moments like: with Misora and Yo-chan and Ya-chan. I cracked up at Hi-chan request:) I could feel Papa's temperature rise! It was funny to when Papa thought about the short lease that Five is on:) The gossips was good on Asuma and Konon-san! They will be a great couple. I liked what Tayuya said about what she needs and what makes her happy, it's all the same. I think Sumaru has a pleasant voyage in front of him:) SQ you know what my favorite parts were??? YES To-chan just being his wonderful sexy self:) Part 5 Papa and I both hope that will come true:) I thought that Ryuu might go for Hi-chan. I'm happy for Ryuu. I remember when Naruto first met him. He has grown into a fine Uchiha. Hearing his parents in the park helped in the end:) Still embarrassing but helpful:) SQ I loved it all!!! ~Bowing~ Thank you for your hard work. It was wondeful ^_^
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From ANON - LovelyBirdCherry on April 20, 2013
Ah, that was all sort of lovely :)
Poor Ryu x)
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From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 20, 2013
YES! Finally some smexy time!
I knew it – Sasuke hopes for Shika and Haru searches to result in … something. It was inevitable. I hope too….
For all this time was forgetting that it was the print that Haku wanted…. Damn. Now I’m happy to know that that maybe he will get his (and our) pleasure of gutting him!
Five was funny – poor kitten, must be whipped.
Yoshimi and Yasushi almost made me cry. They’re so incredibly cute and what had happened in the past was so… awful.
But Hikaru was the best! Go Hi-chan! Does he have some problem with intimacy? Like Sasuke had? Or is it just that there is no good enough partner for him in the crew? I’m disappointed that he is bi though… I thought he would be like Sasuke and Itachi and Izuna….
What they do to him is not fair though. They cock-blocking him just because he didn’t fell for anyone. It’s weird – that only-the-crew rule….

POOOOOOOR RYU! The park-action was great!
Thank you!

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From ANON - eunmook on April 18, 2013
Can I just say I loved the ending: "Tsuneo managed to die twice yet still be alive at the end. It was a triumph."
That's a fantastic, and somehow promising, line. I love how you're managing to give us updates on real characters through as little as a couple of lines spoken by each, and especially the love interests of the big litter. So looking forward to Five. And bi-weekly updates feel like such a treat!

Sumaru with Ino and Sakura?!!! Squeeeee!
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From ANON - sadie237 on April 17, 2013
SQ you heard me screaming didn't you?!! "YES YES here is a Wednesday chapter!!!" I'm still smiling Really! Papa sleeps like the dead huh:) I didn't know which gender Gai-san would prefer so I was happy to fine out who it was. Shizuna is still really a mystery but a sweet one:) Rin-san I enjoyed how Sasuke-sama handle her. He's not the head of the Clan for nothing:) She's hard core but a woman and mother Sasuke tackled it all. Dan and the seed approach is a brilliant idea because he's right there is no harm if it doesn't grow:) I was excited to see what Ran would say and in a few words he said it all. He and Haru are life mate and his statement proved that for me:) Sasuke is such a wonderful Papa. Keizo going on about engines. I loved that. It showed again with Ka-chan he knew just what to say to him. I can't leave without saying something about Tsuneo-chan. I cracked up at him dieing twice and longer isn't better:) Space Queen you have made the rest of my week! Thank you for this wonderful surprise and all your hard work ^_^
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From ANON - Aflyingmonkey on April 17, 2013
Aww I loved this chapter ending! I giggled at Tsuneo's part. Amazing chapter! I love the interviews. :D
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From satterb on April 17, 2013
This is Sasuke truly being a leader. I love the revelations. I was a bit sad to miss Sasuke's reaction to Rans description of his number one duty though. I also loved that Sasuke did not get angry at Haru when he found out that he was hiding something. So good. So glad to get an update during the middle of the week. Thank you so much.
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From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 17, 2013
80 - Damn! With Shika you made me feel like going through confession in a church…. But it was a relief. It’s good that Sasuke knows… at least partially. It will rise his hopes and we can never be sure if what comes up…..
Sasuke surprised me (in a good) when he asked if he could come in to Haru’s lab… ((The plant made me laugh!)) and (in a bad way) when he called Shika ‘Shikamaru-san. What was it all about? Was he THAT angry? I actually thought he wouldn’t be angry at all. I always thought that it was something he would realy REALLY like to do but couldn’t because Naruto was stubborn.

And that rise a question: WHY oh why is Naruto like that. It’s not just about him! It’s egoistic to drop such a subject! If expanding lifespans is so UNNATURAL then why is he giving nanobots to his children? Why not let them live 99 and die?

No secrets ‘kind-of-a-deal-but-more-like-a-plea’ thing? In your dream Sasuke!!! No way. They would always hide stuff. It’s only logical.

AND finally… DAMN! As much I have problem with keeping interest in children I love Tsuneo. There is a certain charm about him…. But o “ die twice yet still be alive at the end” was an absolute MASTERPIECE!!!!
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!

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From ANON - eunmook on April 14, 2013
nice! In san and En san as parents! Poor Shika, when a survey is the one thing that can rat him out, Sasuke decides to speak to everybody. It's also interesting how he's an essential part of satisfying, productive days for so many of the crew... really makes one realise just how much he does, and how much falls to him to do.
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From blugirlami21 on April 13, 2013
That was really interesting. You always find ways to make the story fresh again. I like that this is a chance for us to get a refresher on characters we might have forgotten. The family is so big that it's hard to know what everyone is up to and sometimes who they are as well. Also cluing Sasuke into what Shikamaru has been up to for the last couple of weeks is great as well. I do feel kind of bad for Shikamaru because it seems everybody wants a piece of him so to speak and no one really knows the demons that he is struggling with.

I really wish that Shika could be with someone who will know him well enough to know all his secrets. Neji is ok but I feel like Shikamaru deserves more than someone who ultimately at the end of the day, chose someone over him. Neji doesn't love Shikamaru enough to not always be looking for something or someone better. He's definitely a main character in this story imo and he deserves a true love. I don't know who's left in Naruto verse but I hope you can do that for him.
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From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on April 13, 2013
79 - Wow, that’s an interesting idea! It will be really helpful for all of us to re-acquaintance some of the characters. I probably usually forget about the most of them.
Thank you for reminding that Kotetsu is a genius too! I hope you will show us him, Shika, Sai and Haru working together on something important in this story.
Sasuke was impressive with Ayame – just like that time when he spent time with Sumiko showing her rings. He surprised me again!
Hana confirmed Izuna’s interest in women! Why nobody gets that yet???
Naruto with the Aburame children – wow… it was so long ago….and back then they didn’t know about Naruto’s life span….
Sasuke invited Izuna – just to rub it in his face that the girls were set up? Fucked up idea, but Sasuke impressed me again!
Now I can’t wait for the interviews of Iruka and Kakashi!!!
THANK YOU for the great update. I really like the idea.
Too bad Sauke won’t have a chance to really talk to ALL members of the crew, since Sai is still off limits…..

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From ANON - Bree on April 13, 2013
I love the idea of the interviews. It really pulls together the different perspectives from the crew, particularly some characters we haven't seen as much of lately. And any excuse for more frequent updates is a good one xD
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From satterb on April 13, 2013
I loved this chapter soooo much. I plan to re-read all the stories once Leader has finished. There were so many things mentioned that brought back memories I'd forgotten. I look forward to the next interviews. Thanks for updating.
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