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By : mannahpierce

From ANON - yukinauchiha on May 25, 2013
I really love your story it's differnt from other stories I read on here.I look forward to your story every saturday I love everything about your story.I wish you can make a manga or anime out of it cause it's a great story.Hope your real life calm down some so you can relax more so you can have time for yourself.You need some refreshment time so you can keep things going the way you want.I want you to know your my favorite author on here.Take a break to get yourself together writter block is not good.You one that don't leave us hanging forever thats what I like about you.Well take care and hope that you wont tell us bad news.
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From ANON - sadie237 on May 25, 2013
SQ I know you know I dislike Klee. But he has proven that the ones he cares for he'll alway take care of and he has yet again. Thank goodness! I was nervous the hold way knowing Shika's fate was in the hands of Central. That was an intense chapter! I has to 'negotiation' with my feeling while reading:) Good one huh?!:) Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ I loved it ^_^
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From daughterofvirgo on May 25, 2013
Chapter 88. Whew! That was close. Thank you for another awesome chapter, Mannah. Good luck with your writing. You know I'm always reading, even if I don't review as often as I should. Sorry. *sweat drops*

Anyway, take care and I look forward to the next chapter.

Laforet (formerly disembodiedvoiceofthedying--I changed my username. Laforet is easier to type.)
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From ANON - The horseman of death on May 22, 2013
Hey mannah i just got to chapter 87 in what has been a mammoth effort because i was so far behind. i will admit the revelation about madara way way way back put me off and scared me for quite a bit and if i hear the name danzou and center in the same sentence i might run for the hills again but as always i loved reading your work it is a true work of art oh and after accidentally letting my mother read porn that i got out from the local library a while back i suggest only this smut it up as much as you want because the censors must be blind and you will have no trouble getting your spacer's published because if fifty shades of porn and the particular werewolf/vampire porn i found in the comedy section can be published your insanely good work will surpass all known records.

with love The horseman of death AKA D P BLADES
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From satterb on May 21, 2013
Poor Hikaru...at least Haku didn't make him tell what exactly he'd been doing. I love these kinds of chapters that give us a slice of life viewpoint of the characters and their little quirks. I will however be glad when Su-chan is less spoiled than she is. I don't like her character very much. But I love to see Haru learning to figure out how to deal with her. Thanks for the update. I loved it as usual. Look forward to more.
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From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 20, 2013
THANK YOU so very much for all the data about the Center. I was really curious about it. It's so helpful!
Will the negotiations with the Center strat in the next chater? I fear and can't wait it at the same time!

Sai interacting with another crew mwmber? kind of stupid of him. He knew how dangerous it is for anyone to actually know about him and he still did something like that. BUT then again, is he developing some attachement to Hikaru?
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From blugirlami21 on May 19, 2013
That was an interesting side chapter. Like Haru, I'm not Sumiko's biggest fan. Never was, I think she is allowed to get away with too much because her parents died and because Shikamaru is a pushover. Other kids parents have died and none of them do half the stuff that she does. That being said it was nice to see her and Haru get along when they couldn't stand to be near each other before. I also worry about the triplets being as "bad" as they are described. I understand that they are babies but I don't remember the kits acting the way that they do and getting away with that behavior. I wish we knew them better. We know the most about Tsuneo but the not so much about Teruka and Takara.

Thank you for answering questions about the CCS. It sounds more like a government than what I was thinking it was before. Which was more like the police? I can't find the correct analogy. That makes what they are kind of understandable but it also makes it worse in a way.
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From ANON - Anon on May 18, 2013
Thank goodness I wasn't drinking or it would have came out of my nose to:) Sai girlfriend OR boyfriend what the?!!:) SQ 'friend' was such a good title for this. I think Su-chan and Haur became firends to. Sai and the sex thing really had me going:) Hi-chan needed him more because he was about to cum. I'm still laughing as I write this:) You know he's right when you almost there what is more important huh? SQ I hope you wont be upset with me for laughing so much and so hard! Ok that cracked me up to (hard)!!!!! ok ok ok I'm pulling it together:) I loved every bit of "Friend". ^_^
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From ANON - eunmook on May 13, 2013
Oh man! It really is a well-oiled machine now, with all the different characters playing to their strengths, so that Uchiha, when it gets cracking, can even catch Shikamaru now. It was really cool seeing them in action like that. I loved the whole naked, coffee cups and napping bit, that was stellar. Trust Iruka to get things back on track with his infallible internal compass. Is it too much to hope for that Centre will leave him be coz he's the only sane type-seven they know, and they wanna figure out how to make that happen?
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From satterb on May 12, 2013
Izuna has to pay for all the terror he's caused! I'm so glad that they were able to track Shika down, and seeing the surprise Shika had...like he didn't think anyone was smart enough to track him down. How silly. Thank you so much for this update!
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From ANON - SunaoTsuji on May 12, 2013
Chapter 84-86. Woot! That was an awesome adrenaline rush! I'm curious as to what kind of negotiation plan will be used when the Centre guy shows up. You had me lost when Shikamaru planned to leave in a 1 man ship. I was asking myself, "Wait, Shikamaru's not going back? So where is he going then?" Awesome play there. Keep up the awesome writing!
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From blugirlami21 on May 11, 2013
A tentative happy ending right now, which is nice. I like that they are looking for alternative solutions to the CCS problem. Do we know why Centre is so powerful? Uchiha has always been a big deal for good reason but what is so scary about the CCS? It seems more like the boogey man than anything else able to instill fear from afar and make you do things you wouldn't normally do to be exempt from their notice. I would be very interested in seeing what they would want from Uchiha in return for their continued ignorance. I would also be very interested in finding out who runs the CCS.

The relationship that Shika has with both Naruto and Sasuke is really strange and interesting. There seem to be boundaries on how much affection to show or how much feeling they allow themselves to express. Makes me wonder if Shikamaru and Sasuke would be a couple if Naruto wasn't around. Same thing with Naruto and Shikamaru. Makes me want to go back to the beginning and see how their relationships began. I probably will now that the cog is in my brain. A very nice chapter, I really like it when the family works together and succeeds at their goals.
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From ANON - sadie237 on May 11, 2013
SQ I loved it! I was so nervous. I was like Papa I thought he was on another ship and let that one get caught. I'm so happy he came back!! I'm drained:) Sai had me worried with the what might happen if Papa went to far. Kakashi had me scared with the insane looks. Of course the most important one had his whiskers up:) I should have never let the other make me think other wise. SQ you are truly amazing!!! There was a lot of stuff going on in this chapter. You know what my favorite part was?!:) When To-chan answer Iruka-sensei 'No' and then picked up Papa:) The title was dead on. ~Bowing~ to My Space Queen of the Naruto Universe. ^_^
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From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 11, 2013
86 - Ufff.... (a sigh of relief) I know it's just the first round but still.... It was great, so quick and succesful.
But what would the Uchiha Clan be withut Shika's scheeming? He made it all happen in 60% at least! I seriously think he did more than Sasuke himself.
It's good to have him back. Now, what about Sai? Is it really possible to turn him off? I mean, have they tried it before? Would it still be Sai after rebooting?
Sasuke took Iruka's words pretty well. And Naruto... Hmm... Good for them.

I wonder what Iruka would do if Sasuke didn't follow his 'advice'.....
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From ANON - eilidhdawn on May 09, 2013
ouch
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