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From ANON - SunaoTsuji on June 08, 2013
Chapter 83(?)-90. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I'm beyond words. Just when I think that there will be a confrontation between the new and old Uchiha that will lead to deathly and sad outcomes, you and your amazingly scheming juice filled brain comes up with this! Unexpected on my part and what wonderful surprise to find that Madara is finally being Madara without his zest of pretending to be Izuna. I love how this is going! I'm eager to see how the other children will fare away from Terrasade and how the next meeting will be. Oh the possible mayhem and loss. And Centre. What Centre will do, I can't imagine.
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From ANON - Moonmoore on June 08, 2013
I loved the ending for the chapter. Sasuke was awesome. He didn't let himself be pushed into a corner. Really looking forward to reading more and Madara's reaction to Sasuke's ultimatum.

Thanks for an awesome read and hope that you can overcome all the obstacles in your way and can soon find some inspiration. I really find your writing spellbinding and always look forward to reading. Take care and see you soon.

Moonmoore
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From ANON - Rekless on June 08, 2013
Great chapter!! I cant wait to see how the kids do on the mission!! It nice getting to see yhem interact with one another!! I feel like we haveny seen that much recently. I really hope you go into detail about ran and haru's first time together!!! You always swich scenes before you really get into it! I think it would be really interesting to read that ewith rans gift and all. I'm really happy that he and haru have worked everythig out and are good and solid now. I would love a short story about yasushi and yoshimi, like when they're getting ready to make their relationship know or when they first realize they have romantic feelings for eachother. We just dont here about them muh which i totally understand in this story. Maybe when you are havig trouble writing leader you could try writing a short story for tales in tarresade (i spelledthat wrong didnt i lol). Just an idea, keep up the good work!! I really enjoy your stories and cant wait till the next instalment!! Sorry i dont review often. I'll try harder!!
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From ANON - sadie237 on June 08, 2013
WoW!!! SQ wOw!! I'm speak less for the moment! I didn't see Old man giving the warning. Yea I know it has to have something in it for him to. But still wOw I'm shocked. Thank goodness the brothers are putting in the effort to get along better:) And when Nartuo fines out Sasuke didn't tell him about this little secret meeting(#%$*)is all I can say:) I think Naruto will feel the need to give a lecture:) Sasuke handled it well though. His enter Naruto voice serves him well:) The disguise Sasuke had on was hot:) Yea Baby! I'm wondering what the surprise is Shika and Sai have in store for Haru?! I loved it and you too! ^_^
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From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 08, 2013
Wow, I was pissed at Sasuke for going to this meeting behind Naruto's back, but I'm impressed that he was so tough. Still, he's not safe yet. I hope he will go back safely. Neither Kisame nor Naruto are with him.....
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From daughterofvirgo on June 08, 2013
Chapter 90. Take that, "Izuna". Ha ha! I can't wait to see how "Izuna" is going to react to Sasuke's condition.
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From ANON - SidonieStarr on June 05, 2013
Chapter 87 - a nice diversion. I keep waiting for Sumiko to become a little less self-centered, but perhaps that will always be her nature. She's obviously extremely dangerous given her influence over Sai. It will be interesting to see if, or how, you address the artificial intelligence conundrum. Unlike everything else in this story except Centre, Sai's power seems almost limitless; will the fact he was "raised right" be enough or will power necessarily corrupt?

Chapter 88 - Judging from "Colours of the Mind," as well as this story, Centre is not malicious, just unconcerned with the effects of its actions on others; everyone else is just another smashed bug on the windshield. I had thought you would defuse Madara before Centre but I was wrong. Anyway, a good chapter!

Chapter 89 - So is Tsuneo the love of Shikamaru's life? There are so many possibilities with age retard.
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From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on June 02, 2013
But he IS not going to release the virus??? Right? Or is he going to do that and then protest against it to get rid of Kurotsuchi?
Damn, and it was starting to look so good...
Madara growing in power in a distance may seem like a good resolve right now but in a few standards he may strike again.... I don't like this idea. And hate that he is spoiling Izuna's good name.
No Ector in this chapter? I can't wait to learn something about him and if his intentions are really what he claims them to be?
I can't wait to see.
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From blugirlami21 on June 02, 2013
The offer seems too good for Madara. But if it means that he and Kurotsuchi will go away, then I can live with it. I feel like you are planting seeds with Tsuneo. Does that mean that will be with Shikamaru when he gets older? Perhaps. Kind of reminds me of the story The Agreement by Jelp. It would be strange to read about but I find some of the pairings in this series strange to begin with. At least if it does happen Shikamaru will be with the one most like Na-chan. I'm glad we got to see Madara shaking in his boots a little.
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From ANON - sadie237 on June 01, 2013
OMG!!! I was scared nervous and angry! Old man just makes me sick!! But what was worse was the witch coming in with that virus idea. SQ you are on top of your game:) I can hear the wheels turning:) This was a marvelous chapter!!! Today was a very sad day for me. My youngest brother passes away today was the service. Thank you for being here for me when I really need to give my mind a rest:) I truly think of you as my friend. Ok I'm still a little weep and sad. But Tsuneo and Haku-san have a way of making me smile:) Thank you again Space Queen I enjoyed ^_^
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From ANON - Bree on June 01, 2013
Well this is a suitably terrifying development. Loved this chapter though, particularly Centre's threat. It'll be interesting to see the reaction if he takes the deal and reveals his identity. Next Saturday cannot come soon enough!
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From ANON - Bree on May 29, 2013
If you never stopped writing this story, I'd never stop reading it. No matter how many times I go back to the start, it's hard to put it down. I love the characters and I love where you've taken it - there are always new surprises. I am looking forward to new chapters before I even get to the end of the most recent update. Thanks for keeping at it even as real life gets in the way - so many authors drop their stories when that happens, and I'm glad that hasn't happened here; the only thing worse than the story coming to it's end would be if it stopped without an ending at all.

I've been waiting for this particular chapter since Izuna first approached Bettencourt. I'm relieved with how the plan worked out and it should definitely be interesting to see Shika's interactions with Centre.
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From ANON - esquisitpet on May 26, 2013
I loved this chapter, I was on pins and needles wondering how the negotiations would go. I especially loved when Sasuke lost it when the guy asked about buying Shikamaru. Thank you for another great chapter.
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From YamanashiOchinashiIminashi on May 26, 2013
O BOGOWIE!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes, it’s my native tounge…
This chapter was…. SPECTACULAR!!!! I have no idea where to start. Every word was just…. Fantastic!!!!
And the best was: KLENN!!!!!
So he was the mysterious reason behind Shika being declined of joining the CCS…
It’s been so long since I laughed out loud reading this story. Recently it was mostly in tears….
Damn, I loved it.
So, THAT’s what the typed seven means, huh? Wow…. I knew Shika was amazing, but this… really…. I hope Neji is impressed. I hope Shika just rocked his world. I know he always knew that Shika is special but I know he still underestimated him, because Shika was too… humble is not the right word… too normal.
Is Sasuke now more aware of what he has in his clutches??? (Sorry he angered me by giving up Shika…)
I was glad that Iruka’s name did’t left Shikamaru’s mouth, because then Centre would probably try to take him away and forced him to ‘work on’ other type 7s!!! ha ha!
“Shikamaru decided the safest answer was a smile.” – it always is, isn’t it?
Funny thing…
Kelenn is (I refuse to say WAS) truly amazing!
I can’t believe I like the OC so much. I never do. But he’s just…. Damn….
And now I begin to wonder how Battencourt looks. Is he attractive?
Please…. I never ask for that, but… No, I still won’t try to rush you. I’ll just - perfectly content - calmly say that I can’t wait for the next Saturday and that I THANK YOU SO ERY BERY MUCH for this chapter. It’s a masterpiece!

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From satterb on May 26, 2013
Well that was a relief. Thank goodness for Klenn-San! I didn't understand why Bettencourt would say that he was honoring the request from Klenn when he didn't consider him a friend, but then I went back and re-read to better understand what was being said. Now I see that Bettencourt wished he could have been a friend to Klenn. At least I hope I'm right, I also hope maybe Bettencourt can become friends with Shika and become an ally. Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next! Thank you for all your hard work.
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